Chapter 3: I like how you're explaining everything that happens in the mv and create emotional links to what the characters could be feeling during the time. Like the comparison you make in the beginning with losing someone. Also I enjoy how creative you are at describing the physical appearance of them and the Objects, like the brooch.
But my favorite line was " Her mellow voice that once sang honey to his ears was now a heart wrenching weep that echoes in his ears." It really contrast how one thing can feel so different depending on the circumstances. Her voice was something that sweetened his life when they were together, and now that they're apart it's painful to remember. That's some really great writing, honestly.
Thanks for updating, it was the fluff I needed to feel sickly sweet today, haha.

Chapter 2: ARGH!!!!! IT WAS VERY LOVELY! Thankyou author-nim! ToT I never thought it will be more lovely when you fill in the scenes that are not in LuHan Pormises video. MAIGAD! ☆☆☆☆☆ FIVE STAR FOR YOU! Oh btw, im listening to his Promises song while reading this, it was more emotional for me ToT And goodluck for the next chapters♥


p/s: I love the part they were under the same shade. both of them were shy :3 aww~

Chapter 2: Aaww... I can't, I'm at a loss of words.
It's too brilliant and it doesn't matter how many times I've said it, I love how unique your writing style is.

Chapter 1: Oh my God! This is so deep! I've seen everything as you described!
Talented! I love it! ♡♡♡♡

Chapter 1: I really liked:
"Auburn shades of the falling dusk scatter into the ground, painting the room with a lonley hue of silence."
"... tired hazels observing the illustration..."
"A drizzle meets the summer evening, only to ignite the unspoken sadness,.."
"... his soft browns dimming with a lingering sorrowfulness."

And this part was really meaningful:
"... soft diciton and sweet words, revealing that the generation gap will never be able to taint the solid place she reserves in her heart for her grandmother."

I also liked how you described that using his mobile phone aided him in conserving a picture to treasure as a memory. Really nice.

Oh, and:
"... the girl who pinched his heart, leaving an aching wound."
"Lingering misery in his browns doesn't hide the torment he tries to swallow alone." Man, I love how you wrote that. If it were part of a song, I'd love it too.

Yes, I did take the time to copy word for word, I wanted to show you how brilliant you write, and these were parts that really stood out for me. I would've written more, but then I'd just be copying your whole story into a small comment box, haha.
Seriously, you have a natural talent for poetic prose and I am so glad to watch how it blooms.

PS: I aslo think that about the color black -not the same exact idea, but normally when I use black clothing, I get comments of looking 'too dark', 'colorless' and 'not youthful'. I always disgress, for I feel most colorfu in black. Since black absorbs all the energetic wavelengths of the visible light, by wearing black I'm wearing all the colors at the same time.

Chapter 1: OMG! I can't even... no, like no.
This isn't fluff, this is pure poetry and it made me loose myself into the words.
I can't come up with something accurate to display how much I loved the writing style.
I need some minutes to recompose myself, 'cause damn this is amazing. And I don't mean it in a supportive friend way -who says things just for the sake of friendship- No, this was, is too damn beautiful. The use of metaphor just awed me.

fighting authornim! looking forward the story! ^^