Five Seconds

Description

In the end, she owes Namjoon’s ten bucks. That’s okay, after all, Yoongi’s hug is the best.

Foreword

i don't know what am doing. this is unbetaed.

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kixhai
#1
Chapter 1: Now, this is heartwearming.
Lookoverhere
#2
This was so adorable! I truly enjoy reading your BTSxJamie centred stories.
adeeada
#3
Chapter 1: aww.. fluff everywhere :))
eminameow
#4
Chapter 1: Thank You....
fooooooooood
#5
Chapter 1: WHO IS CUTTING THE ONIONS STOP IT I TELL YOU
iamthelady
#6
Chapter 1: #Part 2

BUT Seokjin is opposite in this way LOL He cry a lot. You make me laugh a lot When he stole Jungkook's five second! So I really love his motherly. I thought the reason why Hoseok is Jimin's Brother Cuz They are similar I mean you know personality as Funny , Friendly , Lovely Well, all the kind of bright emotion something like that. So they're close to each other. For TWIN Jimin(BOY) & Taehyung I gonna be impress when they hug Jimin (Girl) BUT Their confession break my mood! LOL So I know the reason why their nickname is Twin Trouble I got it boys! LOL for Jungkook who the shy boy (and always baby boy goo-goo *SO CUTE*) Even He refuse five second to hug Jimin I thought He always love his older sister , but He prefer keep it under his hat. Really shy boy Kookkie ~
Last but not least! The Ice prince of family. Yoongi who made Jimin feel awkward and curious his real feeling. I try to guess why they became like this? Well ,Maybe they are grown up. So there are different span of age. Yoongi has more responsible to do it make no time for Jimin like the same. That made both of them estranged. BUT! Their deep heart love each other. What Yoongi will be for Jimin? I thought HE'S EVERYTHING For Jimin. The scene He hug Jimin and said everything he want to told his baby girl that make me cry so hard. Seriously I love this part the most Cuz it make me feeling bittersweet. It's very good. Really Love it. So beautiful So warm So precious. Even I can't tell my feeling as a word but I REALLY LOVE YOUR STORY FOR REAL <3

ps. I know my BAD English make you feeling sick ;-; I'm sorry for that T------T Hope you understand my comment >< Thank you for make this beautiful story Writer <3
pss. I divide my comment as part 1 and part 2 because aff said 'Must not be more than 2000 characters long!'
iamthelady
#7
Chapter 1: #Part 1

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT! WHY! Why my comment fade away like I don't comment this precious story?! /cry me a river Alright! Let's talk about your story > < Even I repeat read this story many times (I can't count seriously!) , but it make me warm and cry like a baby. I thought your story completely. Because there are a lot of emotions as funny , lovely or bittersweet. I can say that's really great! I LOVE IT. I really love this family <3 Even their parents passed away ,but This family really love to each other. They are fulfill love to each other. So I thought they're never feel incomplete Cuz they're together. I love Jimin's relationship in her family. For her Dad & Mom are Numjoon & Seokjin because They're take care everyone and They're the oldest of family. I thought both of them really be Fatherly and Motherly. They're looking for their siblings since they were baby until right now they became adult. I'm so proud of them. T----T Their siblings grown up so well because They're GREAT PARENTS ever have. So I don't wonder why their heartbreak when they saw Jimin move to University. The little one baby girl of family became adult. I guess They will thinking about why the time pass so fast? I love to see how Numjoon act like He's the one strongest ,but truly he doesn't be like that.
GreenTinge #8
Chapter 1: Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!! This is so adorable. Moral of the story: Like Jimin says; NamJoon is always right. Never bet with Namjoon. He'll take your money. Lol
fresh-salad
#9
Chapter 1: this is so sweet❤
jaybeautifulsoul #10
Chapter 1: Wtf I'm crying so badly