PerWin tale-a journey

Description

This is a story of per and win. It is a journey of their love in a race of hide and seek only to end in an unexpected emotional turn of  events. It is a tale and struggle for acceptance of a forbidden passion.

It preludes with wins running away from their home and pers emotional battle to keep them together. It is a story of a vow per made that turned everything in a rollercoaster of twisted events.

 

 

Foreword

In my outline there will be threebed scenes and one of which will be ohm and mick. 

Author's Thoughts
ryein27
I had to chop chapter 7 in 3 parts so that you would see the flow later. thanks for reading. Chap 7:part 1 is done.
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analleta32 #1
Chapter 7: Hoping you did not abandoned this fic hope you finish it thnks for this I hve been looking everywhere of fanfic of PerWin thnks
LAboy25sz #2
Chapter 7: Excited for the next chapter! Kudos author!
LAboy25sz #3
Chapter 2: OMG!! What a sad chapter... Great job author!
gwenpookie #4
Chapter 7: I'm so confused right now, so you skipped how Per and win ended up living together...is this a back story or future story...still a good one but a little confused...
suti-ayesa #5
Chapter 8: Just like per, my heart flops to my chest with its every beat when i read chapters 7&8. And my mind so full of "ha?????!!!! What happened???!!!!!"..... " did i miss anything?!!!!!".....
suti-ayesa #6
Chapter 8: Thats why it's called tale, not some linear common plot novel. Flashbacks are so long but it really justify the present characters. Am wondering what made wins dad hate him that much even in the series. uallity? Too shallow....
gwenpookie #7
Chapter 8: I take it you are building up to a longer story, these last two chapters are just to show what happen after Win left the hospital and Win parents wanted Per to stay away..Now comes the hard part Win parents wanting Per to stay away or they will send Win away..I pray I'm wrong..I hope Win mother going to ask Per to take her son and keep him safe...looking forward to a longer chapter...
Silverfox13 #8
Chapter 8: I am a little confused here , three sentences for chapter 7 and 8 . And they are totally torn apart , no flow in the story line . I liked your story until chapter 6 , but know I am just confused and lost over the time skipping forward and backward and not enough to go on . Hope you clearing things up .
M9ture #9
Chapter 7: Great fic! It seems Per is a gentleman here... your writing has its style. You've incorporated their first meeting well. Along with some flashbacks. The time skip seemed a little bit long though. Needs a little revision with the spellings, tenses and sometimes the grammar. The latest chapter invokes strong emotions. I hope this isn't the end because there are a lot more points to tackle. A great fic to break the ice. :) it'd be great if you include their interactions during their class, Mark and those in the series. Unless if you plan to make an original fanfic. Like I said; Great fic. :D
ryein27 #10
Very nice observation suti-ayesa..but its not entirely correct. Find out who per made a talk to in chapter 8. Am trying my best to mask the surprises and you got it right. Yup chap 3 and 6 has a hint of what to happen in chapter 7.
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