Chapter 1: This is an absolutely beautiful written piece of work! It is just so easy to relate to and every single paragraph just lures me in, making me want to read more of it. So so good indeed!
Chapter 1: "Sometimes she calls from the phone booth right across Hyejin's apartment building, too afraid to knock on the door, but Hyejin doesn't know that." this line broke me down.. and now i can't stop crying .. this is too painful..
Chapter 1: It's a shame that this was written in all lower-case, because it was really well written and a good quality story. I actually clicked on this to read yesterday when it was posted, but was turned off by the format. I decided to give it another chance since everything else seemed to be okay grammatically and my sister recommended your fic to me. I'm glad I did. You expressed the regret they both had really well and it was some nice angst to start my day.
It was a good 1st fic. Just spend a little extra time capitalizing the beginning of your sentences and you'll go far in the fanfic writing community ;).
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