Part of Your World

Description

Jonghyun is a prince who wants nothing more than to be free of his birthright and responsibilities; Taemin is a merman who gives up everything for the chance to be human, and to be with the man he loves.

Inspired by "The Little Mermaid".

 

 

Foreword

He was vaguely aware of the fact that he was sinking, vaguely aware of the cold water surrounding him on all sides. He was in pain and disoriented. His lungs burned from the water they had taken in.

There was pain and fear, but among it all...peace. Peace that he no longer had to fight. He no longer had worry. He no longer had to struggle against what he could not change.

His birthright, his obligations, his stresses...they all seemed so unimportant. At that moment, on the brink of life and death, none of it mattered.

Then he felt a pair of hands on his body. He felt warmth and life. He was suddenly on the surface again, above the water, but his body refused to breathe. It still longed to give in, to escape it all. But the hands on his body would not let him die. They were pressing on his chest, forcing the water from his lungs. He coughed and sputtered and gasped greedily for the air he had been willing to go without seconds ago. His body's natural reflexes took over and brought him back from the brink.

Back on the land, Jonghyun opened his eyes, taking in his world in a new light.

There was darkness and stars and the smell of a fire in the air. As disoriented as his mind was, he was able to focus on the face looming over him. It was the only thing that seemed substantial at that moment.

His vision was blurry and the night was dark, but he was still able to see so clearly.

The long wet hair, the glistening golden skin, those dark brown eyes so full of concern - the face above him was beautiful. It was all he could think, all his frazzled mind could process in that moment.

He blinked a few times as he rolled over, still ridding his body of the water. The beautiful creature drew away from him as he rose to get a better look. He wanted to tell her to wait, to thank her, but she suddenly fled. She jumped back into the water with a heavy splash and a flip of her tail. Yes, Jonghyun spotted a tail.

After everything he had just gone through, he had one more thing to process and ponder. The creature that had saved his life was a mermaid.

He saw the light from the castle fire in the distance. He heard the commotion, even from how far away he was, on that small island off the shore. He grew concerned for his family, friends, and subjects, but he didn't have the strength in him to move. He could only lay there, letting the exhaustion slowly take him unconscious again.

 


 

A/N: Hello readers. I'm back with yet another fairy tale! This one is inspired by "The Little Mermaid" book, not the Disney movie version. If you've read the original book, you can probably expect where this story is going. If you haven't read the book, I won't spoil it for you...just don't expect the perfect fairy tale ending here.

WARNING! While this is a "JongTae" story, it also involves Jonghyun's character being involved with a woman! If this thought devestates you, please don't read. I'm only warning you once. -__-

So sit back, relax, enjoy the angst and melodrama...and feel free to subscribe and comment. :D It's always appreciated.

-Endellee

Btw, the "mermaid" in that prologue there is Taemin. ;)

Endellee
Chapter 8 is finally up!

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Zazuow #1
Chapter 17: I know its been a while and you probably wouldnt planning to finish this story but..I just want to tell you that Im thoroughly frustated,hurt,pissed off..and finally sobbing really hard when I got to the " my name is Taemin" part like...seriously,it hurts..it hurt so damn much !!
Gosh..I knew I love Jjong so much and he was my ultimate bias in shinee but in this fic....I realy realy feel for Taemin and want nothing more for Jonghyun to just regreting his whole action for the rest of his life !! Im sorry..I knew that this sounds so wrong considering the situation now, and I mean no offence to anyone who loved and still loves him like I do..but its just how this fic is making me feels right now!! Lol
Gosh...my chest's just feel so heavy it might burst..
I enjoy the ride..as frustating as it is..and it wouldnt be a lie if I said I want more..but I respect your decision if you wont updated anymore. I just have to create an ending on my own..where Taemin finally found his happiness with or without Jonghyun in it..
Thank you for the masterpiece
Beavanity #2
Chapter 17: Ahhh this build up!!!!! I'm loving it!
Beavanity #3
Chapter 15: FINALLY FINALLY FINALLY! I can't wait for this, I love this story so much!
iluvbubbles_yay #4
Chapter 15: It's been over a year already, you say?! Crazy, how time flies... Thanks so much for updating though, such a great story, I've been hooked ever since chapter one all that time ago!
Ahhh HE FINALLY KNOWSSSSSSS I'm freaking out I love these big dramatic moments HONESTLY WHAT AN IDIOT NEVER SEEING IT BEFORE ISTG JONGHYUN. Such a good chapter, you made me feel manyyy emotions from the beginning to the end!! I was worried for a minute at the start there! But it's another cliffhanger ㅠㅠ Thanks for the update, so happy you haven't dropped it! <3
saae #5
Chapter 15: YESSS OMG!!! It's finally revealed!!! Slow Jonghyun is SLOW! Anyway, i wonder what's gonna happen with Taemin, OMG, will he die? Or will he lives, but in misery his whole life? I still hope for a happy ending, as unlikely as it seems, but at least i hope Tae will find his own happiness even without Jonghyun... I just can't see him suffer more T___T

Anyway, thanks for updating, i really appreciate it!
SugarFreeSuga
#6
Chapter 14: Its 2017 and I'm still waiting for the update ;u; fml
sashaaaa #7
Chapter 14: omg this is so good but so sad so far ;w; please let jonghyun finally recognize poor taebaby D': can't wait for the update!
saae #8
Chapter 14: Gosh!!! I can see where this is going ughhh...
i already have some scenarios of the ending playing out in my head and none of them are happy orz
So hopeless...
The next chapter is gonna be the death of me...
It's Taemin's birthday tho... can't you make Taemin at least a little happier? hahah...
Poor Taemin... i'm so sorry Jonghyun but i've never hated your character this bad before T~T
If Taemin can't be happy, i wish Jonghyun will realize the love that he missed and regret his life forever, hahah... (i'm such a meanie... but it's only fair, okay :p)

Anyway, i hope the next chapter is soon... i want to just get it over with as soon as possible (if it's not a happy chapter) :p
ying9202 #9
Chapter 14: uhhh so i can vent my frustration here? thanks :DDDD

NO WHY JONGHYUN U GOTTA MARRY THAT WOMEN WHY WOULD YOU DO THAT TO TAEMINNIE YOU KNOW WHAT U STUPID PERSON I WISH A TORNADO WILL SUDDENLY HIT YOU AND RUIN THE FACKING WEDDING U DESERVE TO BE KILL BY TAEMIN (WELL YA, YOU CAN ONLY BE KILLED BY TAEMIN I ONLY APPROVE OF TAEMIN KILLING YOU EVEN IF YOU SOMEHOW DIE I'LL FORCE YOU TO COME BACK A LIVE AND ASK TAEMIN TO KILL YOU)

btw HAPPY BIRTHDAY TAEMIN SHAWOL LOVES YOU xoxoxo
joytotheworld16 #10
Chapter 14: aw, why did it have to come to this point ;_; i'm holding out hope that the ending won't be completely heartbreaking, though.