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TITLE: Rude Boy 
REVIEWER: CriticReviews 
AUTHOR: Heclgehog
OUR RATING FOR STORY: PG 

Title: 6/10 [Rude Boy]
'Rude Boy' seems like what I call, a 'déjà vu' title, it's neither a bad thing nor a good thing at the same time. It's one of those titles that are slightly common that people think that they've read before and therefore they keep scrolling down, although- the title earns "3" for it's description on what type of story it will be. 

Description: 17/20 
I love the way you put full description into everything, e.g in the first chapter; 
'He was pretty attractive, with short black hair often held back with a SnapBack, and nice pink lips any girl would appreciate', it's full of detail and is not too short and not too long. Not really anything to exactly improve on this topic except the fact that sometimes you can use metaphors, expression, comparisons to improve the style of writing especially seeing as this is a girl describing a boy, she may exaggerate. E.g instead of saying 'He had nice pink lips' (NEVER! use the word 'nice' to describe ANYTHING!) you can say 'His lips were like cherry, except more dreamy' or 'His lips were an attractive shade of pink'  you get what I mean? It would just be more comedic and descriptive if you used more complex sentences and language. 

Character Development: 15/20 
Honestly at first, I thought that Jackson and Yejin were the people they were described as in the first few chapters; Yejin, a quiet girl in school that had her reputation to maintain and Jackson as a crazy lover boy but once I started to read the rest of the story, I realized tha