Hunting

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Takuya is running but does he want to run or just get chased by someone he wishes to be with. Joon Jae is amused, after all his chase is Takuya. 

Foreword

Story: One shot. This is a theme I wanna explore more. I really want to try and write a fic for this couple in this theme. Maybe sometime in future. I also don't know why I like the chase theme with takujae so I got to explore bit of both. I wrote this to get rid of the presistent reverse writer's block I had. Honestly, takujae was hounding me. I kept writing tid bits over notes that I would randomly imagine them in. Argh! 

Series: The Lover

Characters: Takuya

and

Joonjae

Ratings: PG

Genre: Angst and stuff. >___>

 

 

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xingthighs #1
Chapter 1: This is a really good story, I love the plot! I'm glad Takuya ended up staying :D
kuroichan #2
Chapter 1: This was lovely, and an interesting twist. If you ever feel like writing more of this, I would enjoy reading it. From a writing standpoint, you sometimes miss punctuation marks, especially commas, or use the wrong one when another would help your sentences flow more smoothly. There are some times when you overuse pronouns or names and it stifles the feelings you're building. You have a good sense of character; I believed the characters since you established them well and stayed with it.

AND I CELEBRATED WITH YOU! I was so happy they put in those last thirty seconds of Joon Jae going to Tokyo and knocking on Takuya's door and the HAPPY ENDING HAPPENED AND I LITERALLY SQUEALED IN MY CHAIR! It was so unexpected (sort of, expect this drama went above and beyond with making all of everyone ok with LGBT relationships, as more than several of the actors and other associated people had done similarly related dramas/movies) and man it was just perfect. How did Joon Jae get Takuya's address? I am forever asking this question...sigh.

Enjoyed it!
Kuroi
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