Stage Games

Description

The special stage for all the SM comebacks was long, boring, and useless to Kai. So instead he decided he wanted to mess around with Taemin. If it happened to be in front of the camera, then so be it.

Foreword

Just want to say that I love TaeKai (top!Taemin or bottom!Jongin is my preference) but I love good writing and proper grammar above anything else, so any critique (as long as you're kind and constructive about it) is appreciated.

Anyways, I write a lot, but this is my first time actually posting one of my stories, so I hope it's not too bad. Enjoy everyone ^.^

(this story is (sadly most likely) not realistic, I mean no disrespect to Taemin or Kai, I love them both dearly. It's just fun to poke and prod at their unique relationship)

Important, please read!!!:

I use both Kai and Jongin (Kai's real name) in this story. That's for perspective. So when I write Kai, it's from his own/Jonghyun's perspective. When I write Jongin, that's from Taemin's perspective, since Taemin calls him by his real name. The differences in perspective are subtle, but still there, which is why I wanted to differentiate.

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_pequinessa #1
Chapter 1: I'm sorry I took so long to leave a comment sweetie! ORZ
But let's get to it, shall I?
First of all, you shoul add more space between pharagraphs, the first bit and the last one are incredibly long. This will help the reading be more understandable ^^
I love , so yass. The thing is, their characterisations are a lil bit...off(? I don't how to explain it lol. I mean, it's ok if Jongin wants to be playful, but then all of a sudden he no longers wants to tease Taem, I think the transition between these two ways of acting is a little bit weird. The same goes for Taemin.
All in all, it's a good story! Yass for grammar~ I think with a little bit more of practice, your writing can be very good! This is a great start! Points for top!taemin, too.
Just be careful with your characterisations, try to stick to them as much as possible, don't drastically change them! Bye-bye <3
Kaesm21 #2
Oh my goodness. This was wonderful~ Thank you so much for writing this! (I also prefer top!Taemin, and it's not quite as common, so I really mean it. Thank you!) Jongin's mischievous behavior made me laugh and smile.
imsocuriousyeah #3
Chapter 1: Thank you so much for top!taemin !!
Shihaam1 #4
Chapter 1: I Enjoyed Reading This Story It's The Sweetest Cutest Adorable iest Steamy & The Most Funniest Ever:DYay!TaeKai I Hope You'll Write More TaeKai Fluff Romance:D
SHINima #5
OMG I can't wait for this story. It sounds epic
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