Let The Love Begin

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Earn is normal But why is it so hard to maintain the distance?

Foreword

I ship EarnPete a lot

But i have been upset due the interaction between yuri n pete

to me NgernAugust are more real..:P

But lets keep our hopes up all i hope is Earn and Pete end up together

So i hope you enjoy my story

I dont own anything except the story though i wish i did own somethings

Anyways this is my first fic

Here u goo....

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demongirlscarlet #1
hey every one this is scarlet....i forgot the password to the id i was posting the story from....i made this new id if you wish to read the story further plz follw the story from this new id...
i will continue the story from a different id....sorry for the inconvenience...
penguinpanda #2
Chapter 8: It's look like pete is "man" in this story
gwenpookie #3
Chapter 8: This is good, love how the story slowly showing how they fill about each other...need more please...
mannuel_khunyoung #4
Yes u right, i love the way how ngern stares on august, uuhhh that so real,
Silverfox13 #5
Chapter 8: Very exciting chapter ! Lot's of energy and emotion ! I am glad they cleared the air , but I have a suspicion that they are not in the clear yet . Wonder who the voice it ?
CecilBMarie #6
Chapter 7: It's short, but it's so much better! The emotions are clear, and the added detail of why Pete feels the way he does is what really makes this chapter roll. I loved the fact that one of them is FINALLY taking some initiative to solve the issues that are between them! It feels like their relationship is growing and showing some depth. the one thing I can say is Pete is assuming a lot when he thinks because EVERYBODY ELSE knows how he feels about Earn, Earn knows already as well! If Pete wants Earn to know how he feels, he's gonna have to man up and tell him....and you have given these characters the room for that by having Pete step up and deal with Earn....and Luna. I'm EXCITED to read the confrontation with Luna and hopefully start to get Pete and Earn back on track..towards each other!! I knew you had the talent to write like this-and I'm glad you decided to continue this story! Well done! :-)
scarletdrewwickedluv #7
Sorry i guess i m just angry because of the slow progress in earn and pete's relation...That is way too annoying...
i am gonna work hard...cant promise that u might like it but let me try..I will do my best
Thanks for the help..
CecilBMarie #8
Chapter 6: I've been following your story since you started it and although I like it, it feels basic and boring...predictable. Your characters feel one dimensional with no real growth, you don't explain WHY they feel the way they do. You introduced luna...but Pete hasn't ever mentioned her to Earn, but she's important enough to Pete that he would meet her with a high fever (very phun like, btw!) and leaving his BEST FRIEND on his birthday just to have her claim Pete as a boyfriend? She feels very out of place in your story. You have enough drama with the 2 of them battling their feelings for each other and figuring everything out....which at SOME point, one of them is going to have to open and honest and actually talk to the other...otherwise their FRIENDSHIP will never last, let alone any relationship!! I hope you don't take my critique too bad..I wanted to be honest, and I DO like the story..I just wish they would act more like friends (who have a mutual interest in each other) instead of frenemies!
Silverfox13 #9
Chapter 5: Like your story a lot ! Definitely want to find out what's up with the Luna girl !
scarletdrewwickedluv #10
Uke?
I am sorry but I don't really know what that is?
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