The Simple Facts

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Reader's Choice Pairing Oneshot Request:

Changmin/Yoona

in

" The Simple Facts "

(w/ Angst, Romance and Sarcastic Undertones)

Foreword

These are few of the simple facts Shim Changmin knows himself:

1. He and Im Yoona are colleagues.

2. She is in love with him.

3. It's something he's never asked himself.

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Dedicated to my lovely dongsaeng, Yuri (@golightIy). ♥

Story by aoza/nikatsu 2011. All rights reserved. Distribution of any kind is prohibited without the written consent of aoza/nikatsu. The following is a work of fiction. The events and characters are fictional and the celebrity names/images merely borrowed and do not represent who the celebrity is in real life. No offence is intended towards them, their families or friends.

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afiqahalya
#1
Chapter 1: Changmin youre urghh how could you did that to yoona arghh she suffer you know afternso long and now you know hahah its over min
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#2
Chapter 1: 100000% done, reading this again and it still hurts so much omg I can't. It's the worst when he misses his chance by so little and took him so long to figure it out
Tinywings
#3
Chapter 1: I have a tendency of stalking around to see what my aff friends write, and I never got the chance to read yours. Quite honestly, might as well be because I can't really read stories with pairings I don't particularly like and then it's hard to really enjoy a story (especially when it's not well written) but I wanted to believe that, if anyone, you would be the one to prove me wrong. And you did.

I tend to point out things that I noticed but really might not be relevant or anything, so I apologize in advance for anything I say. Lovely storyline you got here. It is simple, nothing too fancy that would ask too much of the brain, and, in my eyes, placed in a somewhat cliche context. It is saddening to read how Yoona continues pulling at Changmin's heart, hoping for that one miracle day, never losing the hope. I wonder how beautiful such love must have see possessed. Six years, after all, is a frightening long time. Still, situations like these exist, and they always break the heart, and you portrayed that well. Only thing is that sometimes when you only used dialogues, I had absolutely no clue who was saying what until the last sentences when they said their goodbyes. Maybe a little bit something could have been added just to make it more clear and more smooth to follow, or maybe I'm just to stupid for it and you should just ignore me. Last thing... I think Yoona lacked something. Before you shoot me for that comment lol, I want to explain it. I think she lacked the love filled emotions that should be dripping off her every single word by now. The only moment it really showed was when Changmin asked Victoria out, but other than that... She had always been... So almost doll-like, emotionless happy almost. At least, for me she was. Six years... That kills the smiles and soft, gentle voice, I believe.

But really, this is altogether really a brilliant piece, and I'm quite content with this being the first changyoon story I ever read. I adore your writing style, really :)
eyes2blues
#4
Chapter 1: i can't say I enjoyed it, coz this is a painful story... But I loved it! This is my first Changmin and YoonA fic and omg.. Way to go to start following your other stories. HAHA! I love the detail and the flow of story in its entirety. Genius! Thanks for sharing this fic with all of us!
screaminpka #5
Chapter 1: sad but beautiful piece indeed ; A ;
thank you :)
AyraLovesKibum #6
The most painful thing in this world is to love someone who used to love you.

Beautiful. A masterpiece! :)
Sucheon #7
I cried on the end. So sad ... I even started to like Yoona cause of this story :)
ShermaineShootsYou
#8
God.... what is this?! T^T it thought the ending would be a happy one... in the end.. but some sad stories like this are really really AWESOME.... :D
SUJUGEN4 #9
Wow! This is really good but tragic at the same time, poor changyoon </3
Narcissist #10
Oh my gosh, my heart just sank! How could you, Changmin! ):<br />
Amazing!