Chapter 2: "C'mon Jackson. Hands and knees." <- that line just killed me. It was both y and hilarious. You should make this a long chaptered fic after Marks topping the next chapter of course. There is so much potential here.
Chapter 1: This story has a certain mix of pain and sweetness for my heart. I reaaly love how you made it fluffy and hot in the end. I would really love to read the next chapter soon. Thanks author-nim.
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