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June Bristol
( Jocelyn / Elle Fanning / Kim Seok Jin / accepted )
( review ) : oh my god. you chose the cutest people as the face and back-up! kyaaaa! /coughs
well, hello there, Jocelyn! you are my first applicant. yay! it's party time ~ okay, sorry for being a weirdo. but you chose Jin, my princess. /laughs
alright.. um.. do I really have to write a review? it's already perfect, though. well, I think she's too nice, but I can see myself in her - being clumsy, nags a lot and regretful. are you some kind of a psychic? haha kidding! but the personality you want her to portray suits her very well. also, the answers on the interview was short, but it's straight to a point which is great. the back up love interest is from an underrated group, huh? I searched him and the one who appeared is Yoo Dong Geun - a 59 year old actor - that got me confused. like, she chose an ahjusshi..? hahaha! then I dug a bit deeper on Google and found out that he's Khan. I think I saw him before and just didn't know his real name. It's all good now. the first OTP gif you put below was RapJin. I ship. o u o
The eldest and the leader c: gosh, Monday couple will be the death of me. just- ugh! so freaking cute. they're like my high school sweetheart fantasy back then lmao.
anyway, I'm gonna wrap this up and say thank you so much. June is now accepted. once again, sorry for being such a weirdo and so talkative. your review became too long.
well, hello there, Jocelyn! you are my first applicant. yay! it's party time ~ okay, sorry for being a weirdo. but you chose Jin, my princess. /laughs
alright.. um.. do I really have to write a review? it's already perfect, though. well, I think she's too nice, but I can see myself in her - being clumsy, nags a lot and regretful. are you some kind of a psychic? haha kidding! but the personality you want her to portray suits her very well. also, the answers on the interview was short, but it's straight to a point which is great. the back up love interest is from an underrated group, huh? I searched him and the one who appeared is Yoo Dong Geun - a 59 year old actor - that got me confused. like, she chose an ahjusshi..? hahaha! then I dug a bit deeper on Google and found out that he's Khan. I think I saw him before and just didn't know his real name. It's all good now. the first OTP gif you put below was RapJin. I ship. o u o
The eldest and the leader c: gosh, Monday couple will be the death of me. just- ugh! so freaking cute. they're like my high school sweetheart fantasy back then lmao.
anyway, I'm gonna wrap this up and say thank you so much. June is now accepted. once again, sorry for being such a weirdo and so talkative. your review became too long.
Zhang Mei Li
( Flores / Meng Jia / Kwon Ji Young / pending )
( review ) : hi, Flores ~
you're fast! let's get this started uh-huh. /breaks into a dance
Mei is the eldest applicant so far. I like it. two thumbs up for you! :) but the languages, though. she was born and raised in Pennsylvania, but why is Chinese her native language? it should be English, and please explain when, how or why did she learn it? did she study in a Chinese school from first grade to high school to be fluent in it or something? her style is a bit vague, but I think I get what you mean so it's fine. the persona, though! I'm sorry for laughing. you could put the cunning producer or the sassy composer. oh, personality! perfect. no sarcasm. you didn't put anything like she's sweet, thoughtful or whatsoever. it's good to have a smart-mouth character. two thumbs again! you didn't elaborate it in a really long way, but kept the descriptions of every trait short and sweet. the background as well is nice. although, did she get any lessons about producing and composing?
Mei's interview is wonderful! her answers were just straight on point which is good.
okay, we're on the last section. back up love interest! which Jonghyun? I happen to know 3 idols with that name. is it SHINee's shorty, Nu'EST's leader or Teen Top's maknae? the on-cam and off-cam is where you should put their personality. on-cam is the GD that you see on TV shows and around his friends, while off-cam can be made up. like, was he an arrogant jerk in the house or something? please fix that. I like what you put on the status. some may want to end up with their love interest, but you just draw a line and made them friends. lastly, the gifs! 2hyun is love. HAHA! one of the few pairings that I want to end up together, to be honest. anyway, just fix the things that I pointed out and you'll be good to go. thank you for applying. :)
you're fast! let's get this started uh-huh. /breaks into a dance
Mei is the eldest applicant so far. I like it. two thumbs up for you! :) but the languages, though. she was born and raised in Pennsylvania, but why is Chinese her native language? it should be English, and please explain when, how or why did she learn it? did she study in a Chinese school from first grade to high school to be fluent in it or something? her style is a bit vague, but I think I get what you mean so it's fine. the persona, though! I'm sorry for laughing. you could put the cunning producer or the sassy composer. oh, personality! perfect. no sarcasm. you didn't put anything like she's sweet, thoughtful or whatsoever. it's good to have a smart-mouth character. two thumbs again! you didn't elaborate it in a really long way, but kept the descriptions of every trait short and sweet. the background as well is nice. although, did she get any lessons about producing and composing?
Mei's interview is wonderful! her answers were just straight on point which is good.
okay, we're on the last section. back up love interest! which Jonghyun? I happen to know 3 idols with that name. is it SHINee's shorty, Nu'EST's leader or Teen Top's maknae? the on-cam and off-cam is where you should put their personality. on-cam is the GD that you see on TV shows and around his friends, while off-cam can be made up. like, was he an arrogant jerk in the house or something? please fix that. I like what you put on the status. some may want to end up with their love interest, but you just draw a line and made them friends. lastly, the gifs! 2hyun is love. HAHA! one of the few pairings that I want to end up together, to be honest. anyway, just fix the things that I pointed out and you'll be good to go. thank you for applying. :)
Oshiro Masumi
( Joshi / mami sasazaki / Kim Tae Hyung / accepted )
( review ) : I honestly read your nickname as Yoshi at first. HAHA! I'm sorry. anyway, hello, Joshi!! C: your review has been messed up. it was supposed to be up a couple of nights ago with Jocelyn's and Flores', but I fell asleep and woke up to hbkshuhaenjaek so I had to rewrite it all over again. Sorry again. /sighs
usually if I was in a bad mood - or even good, I would tell the applicant that their application is horrible or they should fix their grammar and typos first, but your app just gave me too much feels that I had to spend a good 20 minutes writing this review. I keep on writing gibberish words and I had to calm myself by staring at Hobi's derp memes. HAHAHA! So I know how you feel. okay, let's start - oh my goodness, I love Masumi. No other words can describe my feels for her. noona-dongsaeng relationships are cute. the face was so pretty, too! she's like Sohee. They're both squishy and has chubby cheeks. ~ her personality, background, friends and family, trivias, etc. are perfect. I don't even think that you have errors aside from some typos and spellings which is understandable. I didn't grew up from an English-speaking country, but it was my home country's second language so we had to learn them from preschool until college so don't be afraid of my English or something. ㅠㅠ
back to the review now. the answers were great. I just wanted to take Masumi and take care of here. oh my god, the cuteness will kill me! everything is good. I read them all. I didn't scan any part, thank goodness, or else I would be missing a lot from those two cuties. oh, I just remembered that you stated that she speaks Koreanese? it reminded me of the character I made for my other story. Haha! also Taehyung unnie made my day! welp.. kyaaa! blonde HenBer is life. at first I thought of them talking about having the same hair color ㅋㅋㅋㅋ then I sang and danced to your comment. sorry sorry sorry ~
Ah, your review has gone too long! I'm sorry! But, the blue-haired tower is now accepted. < 3
ps. it's spelled "realize". stubbornness is correct, so is vibe. it should be "what she is capable of doing". embarrassing has double r and s.
sorry! I just had to. ㅠㅠ
usually if I was in a bad mood - or even good, I would tell the applicant that their application is horrible or they should fix their grammar and typos first, but your app just gave me too much feels that I had to spend a good 20 minutes writing this review. I keep on writing gibberish words and I had to calm myself by staring at Hobi's derp memes. HAHAHA! So I know how you feel. okay, let's start - oh my goodness, I love Masumi. No other words can describe my feels for her. noona-dongsaeng relationships are cute. the face was so pretty, too! she's like Sohee. They're both squishy and has chubby cheeks. ~ her personality, background, friends and family, trivias, etc. are perfect. I don't even think that you have errors aside from some typos and spellings which is understandable. I didn't grew up from an English-speaking country, but it was my home country's second language so we had to learn them from preschool until college so don't be afraid of my English or something. ㅠㅠ
back to the review now. the answers were great. I just wanted to take Masumi and take care of here. oh my god, the cuteness will kill me! everything is good. I read them all. I didn't scan any part, thank goodness, or else I would be missing a lot from those two cuties. oh, I just remembered that you stated that she speaks Koreanese? it reminded me of the character I made for my other story. Haha! also Taehyung unnie made my day! welp.. kyaaa! blonde HenBer is life. at first I thought of them talking about having the same hair color ㅋㅋㅋㅋ then I sang and danced to your comment. sorry sorry sorry ~
Ah, your review has gone too long! I'm sorry! But, the blue-haired tower is now accepted. < 3
ps. it's spelled "realize". stubbornness is correct, so is vibe. it should be "what she is capable of doing". embarrassing has double r and s.
sorry! I just had to. ㅠㅠ
Angeline King
( gee / Ji Yeon / Jeon Jung Kook / accepted )
( review ) : gee gee gee gee baby baby ~ HAHAHA! hey, gee! ugh, I can't even- you- why- /flips a table
dear Angeline doesn't even need a review anymore. although I have a small question. the face claim is Jiyeon who? you didn't put her last name. aside from that, everything was perfectly detailed, even the songs - you provided links and all I could ask for. plus the maknae- seriously?! how can you do this to me? /cries on the corner because of too much perfection
Angeline is now accepted. < 3 thank you for applying!
dear Angeline doesn't even need a review anymore. although I have a small question. the face claim is Jiyeon who? you didn't put her last name. aside from that, everything was perfectly detailed, even the songs - you provided links and all I could ask for. plus the maknae- seriously?! how can you do this to me? /cries on the corner because of too much perfection
Angeline is now accepted. < 3 thank you for applying!
Shim Yoon Jae
( momo / Jang Ki Yong / Kim Yu Bin / accepted )
( review ) : /screams, rolls around, cries
AHHHHHHH! The first guy character! /takes deep breaths because of too much feels
okay, I'm good. hi, Momo! your name reminded me of Key and Arisa's Momo-chan. HAHA!
Shim Yoon Jae is love, alright? but.. who is Jung Yoon Ho? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ must be another characters of yours. Am I correct? C: anyway, Yoonjae's face suits his personality really well. he's like one of those handsome and nice guys, but they are really naughty and loves teasing people and pranking them. true! kwon boa is the queen of queens. < 3 oh, yeah. curse all those people who thought of inventing tablets and capsules and just didn't make all the medicine liquid. Haha!
gosh, Yoonjae is perfect. everything about him was just so cute! Yubin, though! you chose my goddess. she even looks hotter now she plays the drums omfg- /calms myself
everything is good! Yoonjae is now accepted!! < 3 thank you for applying ~
AHHHHHHH! The first guy character! /takes deep breaths because of too much feels
okay, I'm good. hi, Momo! your name reminded me of Key and Arisa's Momo-chan. HAHA!
Shim Yoon Jae is love, alright? but.. who is Jung Yoon Ho? ㅋㅋㅋㅋㅋ must be another characters of yours. Am I correct? C: anyway, Yoonjae's face suits his personality really well. he's like one of those handsome and nice guys, but they are really naughty and loves teasing people and pranking them. true! kwon boa is the queen of queens. < 3 oh, yeah. curse all those people who thought of inventing tablets and capsules and just didn't make all the medicine liquid. Haha!
gosh, Yoonjae is perfect. everything about him was just so cute! Yubin, though! you chose my goddess. she even looks hotter now she plays the drums omfg- /calms myself
everything is good! Yoonjae is now accepted!! < 3 thank you for applying ~
Furaha Mamiro
( Ayana / Shizen Wong / Bang Yong Guk / accepted )
( review ) : first off, I want to apologize. It took me almost half a year to get your review done. well, not really. I've had your review few days after you sent the application but, alas! I forgot to un-hide the chapter : ( anyway, furaha.. her hair eminds me of yuri's lion hair. haha! the video links though. I wish I have a decent sense when it comes to fashion.how long did you make this app? it was so good, so detailed.from the start to finish. *slow claps* I love Fuhara so much it hurts. *sniffs* sorry for all this weirdness.. I always get side-tracked. she's perfect. skydragon, yes! I never shipped them because I don't know, I like GD and Sohee more lmao - but they're both awesome leaders. needs a sub-group < 3 after with all that non-sense rambling, fuhara mamiro is now accepted!!!! thank you for applying.
Jennifer Demoret
( cassie / Park Yong Hee / Kim Jun So / accepted )
( review ) : Cassie, hello! hi. I'm sorry for giving you a late review. I really really feel bad. I hope you don't hate me : (
so, jennifer.. her height says 115 cm? It's probably 3 feeet and some inches only, but I'm glad you put 5 feet 3 on brackets. it should be 160 cm. I feel like you got confused with the weight and put the same thing. small mistake, not worries ~ her phobias and fears are so me. just testing the blade of a knife if it's sharp scares me. tsk, I'm so lame. your answer though! Jennifer listened to fantastic baby for 2 days after admitting she really likes it. HAHAHA! I love them! Jennifer and Junsu are pretty chill. I don't have anything else to say.. um.. yeah, JEnnifer is now accepted! thanks for applying < 3
so, jennifer.. her height says 115 cm? It's probably 3 feeet and some inches only, but I'm glad you put 5 feet 3 on brackets. it should be 160 cm. I feel like you got confused with the weight and put the same thing. small mistake, not worries ~ her phobias and fears are so me. just testing the blade of a knife if it's sharp scares me. tsk, I'm so lame. your answer though! Jennifer listened to fantastic baby for 2 days after admitting she really likes it. HAHAHA! I love them! Jennifer and Junsu are pretty chill. I don't have anything else to say.. um.. yeah, JEnnifer is now accepted! thanks for applying < 3
clara Lee Soo Ae
( Rory / Jung Eun Ji / Cha Hak Yeon / accepted )
( review ) : Do I really have to do this?! I will just accept everyone if I can just handle lots of characters without confusing myself and the readers. okay. hi, rory! thak you for applying on my crappy applyfic. haha! I'll be frank, alright? I don't find Clara as the most "special", but she's like the kind of underrated group member that is very essential where the group wouldn't be the same if she left. do you get what I mean? it feels so deep, man lmao. x ) I love her, I swear. no bull. she and n would probably the cutest to me omfg - the feels right now. I didn't see anything wrong with her Clara is accepted!!!! < 3
Skylar Hughes
( Nic / Myoui Mina / PArk Chanyeol / accepted )
( review ) : Hello there, nic : ) omf - you chose that gorrgeous person *O* I'm not a fan of Twice, but I find the members beautiful and really talented. before I start rambling, I'll get on your review now. actually, the reviews are pointless. I love all the characters you guys made! ah, this is hard. quick question. Did her father go to Korea when he fights or he trains there? I can't remember if you put it on your app or I just missed it. Skylar is awesome, period. no need for more non-sense typing for me lol
but really, I love her. thanks for applying. Skylar is now accepted < 3
but really, I love her. thanks for applying. Skylar is now accepted < 3
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