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Ghostly Joe

[JOE'S POV]

I’m outside a café called ‘Wishes will come true’ right now. What’s with the café’s name...? Your wish won’t come true if you go in right? Well…. Who knows? Maybe it’s true. No harm going in anyway. No one can see me … Not that they want too. Which sane living person will want to have the ability to see ghost?

 

"Hi! Welcome to our café! A table for 2? " The waitress asks, smiling at the customer whom is staring at her in awe.

"Hi ... Excuse me … But are you talking to me? Because I’m right here. "

"You can see me?!?!?!"

"Uh … Sorry, yeah. I mean, table for 1, Sir?"

"Obviously"

"This way please"

"Hey! You can see me, don’t you?!"

"Please do take a seat. This is the menu. Do tell us when you’re ready to order"

"You can see me right?!?!?! You looked into my eyes just now! Stop ignoring me!"

"Sure"

"Shut up will you?!"

"Excuse me?! I want to see your manager at this instant"

"I’m sorry! I wasn’t talking to you! This is a misunderstanding!"

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estherstar
#1
Interesting plot!:D
Can't wait to see the coming events in the story heheh
(I've already subscribed xD First subscriber yay!)
One suggestion though, it would be better for you (or you guys? I see you have a co-author) to mention the person talking when it's a conversation between 2+ people!
It was a little confusing at first and I had to re-read the part to make sure I get it right haha
Anyway, good luck on writing this fic!
I'll be looking forward