UPDATE PLEASE :)

Congrats on writing your first story!<br />
Here's some errors that I found in your foreword. Please do not take this as an insult, I only want to help you improve in your writing skills.<br />
In this sentence "The words that I've wanted to said to him since I realise that I have fallen in love." Instead of 'said' it should be 'say' and 'realise' to 'realized'.<br />
In this sentence, "Yes I love him, but what can I do now." I don't think that the comma after 'him' is necessary but it's up to you.<br />
In this sentence, "He is getting marry tomorrow and I am suppose to be the bride's maid." It should be 'married' instead of 'marry' and bridesmaid is a word :).<br />
Last but not least, "He's starting his life with his wife I should just forget him." In that sentence, between the words 'wife' and 'I' you need to place something that would merge the two sentences together. Perhaps something like, "He's starting his life with his wife 'so' I should just forget him". I hope that this helps. I can't wait to see what you have in store for this story!<br />
Please don't take this the wrong way, I'm just trying to help you so that you can become a wonderful writer :). I'm really looking forward to reading this story. Update soon!

That's a good forwards! Anyways hope u make a good first chapter!