Brighter and Dimmer

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Two best friends talking in the hallway of his flat.

"Oh, so he got enteritis? Was it intense?" She asked while passing through familiar shoe cases, familiar dining table, chairs,

Just not a familiar scent.

Just what she wanted.

 

"Well... ye...yeah. Let's just put it that way." He turned away from her, stuttered.

 

"Oh,

So it's not just that?" 

Her eyes squinted.

 

"Alright then, I won't ask." And made a mental note that she would text him later. 

For that, she took out her phone and called her fellow member, who's probably still busy putting on sunscreen in the room. 

 

She threw her phone on the sofa as if she's at home. "Okay I've just told Namjoo about our new partners! 

So, my Junhee! Let's start practicing! Guess we're harmonizing then?" 

"Gosh Eunji! Can you not call me that? Please!" He shivered, pretending to shake the countless goosebumps off his arms. 

The lights in ceiling reflected in her eyes as they turn into crescents.

 

Just a bit dimmer than the ones he used to see. 

 

 

*

He squinted his eyes at the side of the stage, the Sun shone brightly at his fair forearms, but his throat was burning, 

Like fire that could only be stopped by her and only her,

"Jong, pass me that water." Yet it didn't quite help.

His eyes searched for Lee Howon as they slowly got off the stage,

"VIXX is next!" in

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Siskatiska
#1
Chapter 3: This is story is very clever..I'm a bit pabo..so need to reread it..still a bit confuse who is the man in chapter 3 that made our Eunji hurt.
bluesjuice
#2
Chapter 3: damn, the time is so bad.. I shouldn't visit your story when Im so emotional.. I am really sorry lil.

trust me your writing is steps above me, you don't need my help. because, see, Ive been affected like this.. And I guess your next chap will give me the same impact

to be honest, Im all for woohyun, but then it continously hurts me.. weren't you hurt too, writing this story? I wouldn't be able to write something like this, ever..
you're so brave..

can I stay mean?
please let me.......

if woohyun cannot have eunji, then don't let anyone to have her, including gyu. if woohyun continues being hurt, then hurt everyone else in this story, including eunji and gyu. if woohyun suffers from that pain, I want everyone to feel it too. if woohyun won't be healed, ever, then no one will too.

now you can hate me..
bluesjuice
#3
Chapter 2: lil, Im seriously in pain right now. it hurts. but cannot stop
what should I do? Ive been crying even from the start...

lil, I don't care if I sound mean, I demand a fluff of woohyun and eunji after this story finishes. orI'll continue crying

your writing is so much better than mine...
bluesjuice
#4
Chapter 1: it hurts lil
i cannot help you with anything..
maybe because Im as weak as him, maybe because Im hurt just like him.. ugh, it really hurts and I don't know what to do

putting woohyun and sunggyu in one frame is like putting yoseob and sunggyu together, i will not know what to do, because this emotional girl is too scared to be hurt
mian chingu, Im really emotional lately..
lilsun
#5
Chapter 3: oh, gosh. i can really feel her pain here :( i actually went back to listen to the song while rereading and each word feels like a stab in the chest. SUNGGYU YOU AJDSKLFJLAALGA. whyyyyyyy. i want to give eunji a really big hug. the feeling of wanting to hate someone while loving them, in my opinion, is one of the most heartbreaking emotions there is in this world. and your prose is so beautiful. i think my favorite line, if i really had to choose, is, "Such memories, tattooed on my bones and committed by heart..." and reading this makes me feel sad for woohyunnie too </3

lack of gyuji/pinkfinite for the next few months makes me want to cry, too. i need more inspiration >.<

is this the final installment? or is there another sunggyu chapter based on "alive"? tbh i'm really curious for his pov since "alive" is a song about trying to let go of an ex, but in this chapter is seems sunggyu is remorseless?
bluesjuice
#6
no no no!! Lil, oh no!! why I found Woohyun name here...... he's too weak to fight over Sunggyu..........
what should I do.... Im about cry.............

I haven't even read the story, yet here Im being all emotional.. Achini have made Woohyun to fight two Sunggyu(s), TWO LIL! Ack........
/sulks/

anyway, surely gonna check this later after the project done.. ^^ good luck, chingu!!!
sprinq #7
Chapter 2: this is sad, ;; poor woohyun, my heart breaks <//3
i love your writing styles, i'm waiting for future updates. fighting, authornim!
lilsun
#8
Chapter 2: THIS IS TOTALLY WHAT HAPPENED IN REAL LIFE AND NO ONE WILL CONVINCE ME OTHERWISE.
i liked the additional touch of the lyrics ;) and the howon sass haha that fits him so perfectly!
of course gyu should be jealous and try to pass it off as his duties as a leader ^^ poor woohyunnie though, my heart breaks for him </3
the last line was so beautiful that it slayed me. i swear you're trying to convert me into a wooji shipper or something because i can't help but want woohyun to have a happy ending orz