To Sungjong, the world is blind.  Blind is a word that holds many meanings.  To be blind is to be visionless.  To be blind is to be uncontrolled.  To be blind is to be hidden and to be aimless.  To blind is to cover, to hide, to shock, to cheat and to trap.  Blind is a word that holds many meanings.  And to Sungjong, the world is all of them, but something Sungjong doesn't realize is that perhaps, he's the one who's blind.   ____

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