As a request, i took the challenge to write a story for kyuwook, since i'm new to write for the public eye I feel quite nervous to know your opinion about the story or the way i write. you can comment and let me know what i have to improve so that future stories can be improved with your suggestions.

there is no description for this "story" i just want you to take a minute of your time reading and answering this.   hello AFF readers, i thought about posting my own stories for a while now, but they never seem to be quite right and i don't know the reason why,so i came up with this idea as a way to figure out what i should or should