Just tell me if my fanfic is bad or weird...so that I can immediately improve my stories :)

I am a random thinker, i tell you :D

and yeahhh!! 

I LOVE FAHRENHEIT!

I LOVE AARON YAN!

I LOVE GUIGUI!

I LOVE HEY GIRL!

I LOVE ALIEN HUANG!

I LOVE SHOW LUO!

I LOVE THEM ALL!

TOO MANY TO MENTION....