Chapter 2: I hate you so much you do not understand what my feelings are doing to me at the moment. Crying, Shu I am sobbing my heart out omg, why does your writing have to be so beautiful- I'm not dealing with these emotions-- shoves them at you
All joking aside, I hate you. So so beautiful and poor poor luhan omg. And then that last sentence-- he's alive isn't he. He's changed? Squeals in excitement
I can't wait for chapter two <3
Chapter 1: I definitively love that *.* it's so exciting, the end of the chapter gives me goosebumps: what's wrong with Kris? why does he seems immune to the fog? I feel it has to do something with the SM inccorporation, maybe it's why he didn't want tao to take the pills.
The taoris Relationship is once again addictive and wonderfully sweet. Like when Tao slaps kris's arm after the proposal, it just makes me go aidluggfdkfgvhsdghf or when Kris tries to extract Tao from the car and tao screams, he just covers Tao's eyes and cradles him close...this is maybe the most beautiful yet simple proof of love and it moved me.It's exactly what love is: this helpless gesture of protection, Kris knows he can't prevent Tao from feeling pain but he can't help himself.
You convey their emotions so well.<3
The game about the colours spectrum is also something that I like particularly.It gives a particular atmosphere to the story and it's perfect.
Thank you for this chapter, can't wait fr the next update <3
love you Shu <3
PS:the "some people deserve kindness" made my legs go Jelly. Kris, stop trying to be my bias.
Chapter 1: Unnie why don't you just write a novel??? You write reaaalllyy good (gotta say it's not just good but BEST)! You never fail to give me goosebumps before and after (and while) reading the stories! >< Also, you lock your fics, is it because the EYK stuff too? Camille (and most authors too) also lock their fics :/
But anyway, if it's indeed because EYK, just shrug it off because what happens in the fic, stays in the fic ^^ Love you unnie! <3
Chapter 1: oh my God this is only the prologue / the first chapter yet it's already so good I can write an essay about this lol;;;;;;;
taoris relationship here is so beautiful & romantic even though tao got into an accident :(:(:( poor baby.
AND OMG THE LAST SCENE THO. what a cliffhanger D"""": I really can't wait for the next update >.< I like this so much already! <3
Chapter 1: This prologue was beautiful... Oh wow, the descriptions, the storyline, the character descriptions, everything
Haha kris makes me want to squeal-- exactly as I imagined him
And poor poor Tao :( the way you write makes me want to scream and cry and laugh at the same time
You should sit down and poop more o.O
Chapter 1: this is so good omg im so excited to see what happens next! Poor Zitao though that mustve been so painful for kris to see T.T but now they are married hurray! so Tao had abusive parents? im so glad kris took him in I cant bear to see Tao hurt and upset ;(3. Ooo Kris is immune? this is literally so interesting I literally cannot wait to see what happens next!
Chapter 1: OH. MY. GOSH. Something strange about Wufan? Is he like immune to bacteria and viruses and stuff?
THIS ALMOST MADE MY CRY and it's just the prologue.. How am I gonna handle the rest ;__;
Lovely chapter<3
Can't wait for the next one^^
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