Chapter 4: Omg this story is just so good, no -- _amazing_ and I just absolutely love it. They way every word hit me hard and made me feel so much emotions and I cried so much when Kai died, like seriously, and I just LOVE the plot twist in the end!
Thank you for writing one of the best (imo) fanfics and congratulations on the feature <3
Chapter 4: Literally had to read this in one hour! I just couldn't get myself away from and I had a little hint to myself that Zitao is the Supreme Leader (which made me think of how hot that would be but I'm being biases and I should not) but anyway, this is beautifully written and I'm just dying here and I'd also want to say congratulation on your featured story! But let me tell you, my heart almost stopped in the same time as Kai "died". Gee!
Chapter 3: If there was a way to put sound in these comments I swear I would give you the sound of me wailing in pain and awe at how good this story is and how much it broke my heart. (I ship all the ships mentioned and reading their deaths just....*WAILS*)
Chapter 4: Congrats on the feature!
I read this in one go and now I'm just sitting here, contemplating life and what a masterpiece this story is.
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Kaisoo has a happy ending, so Baekyeol was the one that broke my heart with Baekhyun hiding his tears in the shower and also wishing for a happy ending like Kyungsoo. Ugh. Thank you for not writing about the "wind pair" in detail or else I might be more dead right now >.<
Wow, reading this feels like watching a movie. Some of the parts, like the announcement of the participating sires and aegises and the fight to death rule, kind of reminds me of The Hunger Games, but with some sci-fi and (ahem) gay touch.
Yes, I did realize that the Supreme Leader is Tao. I was expecting it to be Sehun, but Tao's power suits the role better. The ending is beautiful, and even more beautiful because Tao revived Kai and Luhan and that's really nice.
This is probably one of the best mama AU story I've ever read. Keep it up. Fighting!
goodness, this was fantastic (listened to death note and code geass ost while reading this - it fitted the dystopic au and atmosphere perfectly). i love distopic pieces like this and among others this really reminded me of hunger games (and the concept of the aegis dying when his sire dyes reminded me a bit of Eragon)?
thanks for writing this piece of awesomeness <3 keep on writing great pieces like this in the future! hwaiting!
and by the way, congrats on getting featured! ^^ (it brought me here, i'm really grateful for that keke ;DD)
OMG THIS FIC GOT FEATURED!!!! FINALLYYYYY!!!!!
As a reader in this site, honestly for me, this is one of the best fics ever i've ever read, like seriously!! Soooooooo many feels, that I really want to keep commenting everytime I come back here to read it :"""))
Oh my god, seriously... congratulations, gosh, about damn time this fic got featured, because this totally deserves it :")
Chapter 4: This was just heart wretchedly beautiful and tragic in a way. The descriptions were very well written as well as the character themselves. It really felt like I was in their world, experiencing their dread and pain, along with happiness. This idea was very original and detailed and I enjoyed it thoroughly with tears on my face!
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