wowwwww this is superrr amazing.
ok, so first thing first, this is the first scifi story I've ever finished. I read one or two but I never got to finish it, bcs this was something beautiful; fast but not in rush and not so suddenly. and despite being fast, all the emotions and feelings delivered from here smoothly.
kai being an aegis and such (I thought he was something robot alike? am I wrong? I'm sorry then><) is so cute and how could that be so sweet and romantic and---
I stopped at chap 3 bcs I had something to do and my mind was all over this story and thought 'maybe this story should have a sad ending' but then when I read kai died bcs of his heart was ripped out, I cried>< and I pulled back all my nasty thought to have a sad ending. but when the story didn't finish after he went home, I knew it wasn't going to be sad ending. I'm glad that it's not (I'm confused myself about my decision and intention)
I guessed that, tao being the supreme leader, kai going back to life in rose method, but not with lay and kris (I don't even remember that bird cage-collector part /facepalm/)
sooooo most of all, maybe you get 11/10 from me^^ have a nice day authornim, god bless you from writing such a story~o~
Chapter 4: Amazing!! I...i...i don't know what to say...
It's just perfect! And damn...i cried with Kai's death and all till the end!
You're amazing! Love your writing!!!!!
Good luck! and Keep it up! n_n)/
Chapter 4: it has a 'hunger games' feel to it, but the touches of originality are brilliant! very well written and a very interesting plot..
i love it :D
Chapter 4: This is so ing genius, I figured out a few cliché things but I didn't suspect Tao as the Supreme Leader (I thought it was Sehun orz) because he was a child, amazing! I love it!
Chapter 4: omygod this is just afjsdgjskgsj so beautiful <3 i could say that this is already one of my favorites awwww thanks author-nim~ you have a really nice talent on writing!~
Chapter 4: heartwarming story for me….but i seriously am really sad about baekyeol..
it was really sad…i hope they were revived too by tao (although i know they won't) but it was a really good story..tq author
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