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sarahfwz
#1
wowwwww this is superrr amazing.
ok, so first thing first, this is the first scifi story I've ever finished. I read one or two but I never got to finish it, bcs this was something beautiful; fast but not in rush and not so suddenly. and despite being fast, all the emotions and feelings delivered from here smoothly.
kai being an aegis and such (I thought he was something robot alike? am I wrong? I'm sorry then><) is so cute and how could that be so sweet and romantic and---
I stopped at chap 3 bcs I had something to do and my mind was all over this story and thought 'maybe this story should have a sad ending' but then when I read kai died bcs of his heart was ripped out, I cried>< and I pulled back all my nasty thought to have a sad ending. but when the story didn't finish after he went home, I knew it wasn't going to be sad ending. I'm glad that it's not (I'm confused myself about my decision and intention)
I guessed that, tao being the supreme leader, kai going back to life in rose method, but not with lay and kris (I don't even remember that bird cage-collector part /facepalm/)
sooooo most of all, maybe you get 11/10 from me^^ have a nice day authornim, god bless you from writing such a story~o~
key_to_me #2
Well. That was damn good. Not too long not too short. Urgh did me in though. Really cool :)
Juliet_123
#3
Chapter 4: Amazing!! I...i...i don't know what to say...
It's just perfect! And damn...i cried with Kai's death and all till the end!
You're amazing! Love your writing!!!!!
Good luck! and Keep it up! n_n)/
mrsxiumin
#4
Chapter 4: I cried. Like... 6 times. You're so perfect. Thank you.
pitachesser0456 #5
Chapter 4: I absolutely LOVE this story. I cried so many happy tears at the end
pendosa #6
Chapter 4: I wanted to see your fanfic as a box office movie one day.
pendosa #7
Chapter 4: I wanted to see your fanfic as a box office movie one day.
Frostbloom
#8
Chapter 4: this is amazing and i cried and then i cried happy tears and just
wow
itskika_biss
#9
Chapter 4: it has a 'hunger games' feel to it, but the touches of originality are brilliant! very well written and a very interesting plot..
i love it :D
IshaUnnie
#10
Chapter 4: Impossibly well written my dear... the aegis' and sire's bond, the twists and turns of the plot... very well done. Loving it.
HarukaNanase
#11
Chapter 4: This is so ing genius, I figured out a few cliché things but I didn't suspect Tao as the Supreme Leader (I thought it was Sehun orz) because he was a child, amazing! I love it!
sweetmotherofkai #12
Chapter 4: omygod this is just afjsdgjskgsj so beautiful <3 i could say that this is already one of my favorites awwww thanks author-nim~ you have a really nice talent on writing!~
musicbeat
#13
Chapter 4: This was also intense.... esp during the first match. It's heartbreaking to see the fallen contestants and their demise....
musicbeat
#14
Chapter 4: This is so aewesome!! I wish I could write something this good! I'm certainly a fan~ gotta love mama au…
Hate8Love #15
Chapter 4: heartwarming story for me….but i seriously am really sad about baekyeol..
it was really sad…i hope they were revived too by tao (although i know they won't) but it was a really good story..tq author
nocturnalrescue
#16
Chapter 4: OMG I guessed it I guessed it I actually guessed it!!! I never pick up on context clues but I got it this time!

Wonderful story. Kind of a mix of hunger games and mama and maybe a little (something I can't recall the name of)

Thank you <3
920506_ #17
congrats :D
hananii19 #18
Chapter 4: God this was an epic roller coaster♥♥♥♥♥♥ so cool! Congratz for being featured and thank you for writing this amazing story :D!
hananii19 #19
Chapter 2: OH GOD JOONMYUN AND CHENN! Nice combination thou...