Chapter 4: I was just about to mope around about the ending when suddenly he's alive. I'm just going to cry a river of happiness.

Chapter 4: wow i love your story! its nicely done i actually felt the tension n excitement kya! well done
love the theme <3

Chapter 1: *w* soo awesome~♡

Chapter 4: This is just mind-blowing... The overwhelming blend of elements. I love it ; v; *ugly sobbing*

Chapter 4: wtfffffff just happened omg.......
wow, that was actually a really good read. I don't regret this at all! I love that they got a happy ending, thank goodness, but I'm so sad for Baekhyun and Chanyeol. I would've been fine if they continued being mean but then you had to go and give them a backstory and awwww. Thank you so much for writing, I really liked it!

i just read the foreword...........











buT DAMN IT SOUNDS COOL


gonna read the chapter 1 ehe

Chapter 3: this had so many amazing elements and contained all the emotions and entertainment that I look for in a read. I am so incredibly impressed, wow. you did sic a great job and made the story seem so expansed within only 4 chapters. I was able to cry my eyes out like a new born baby, but also got the happy ending I wanted. keep up the amazing work!

Chapter 4: Thanks for your fic. I am currently sick.It's beautiful and sad at the same time. I will be happy if I have the same ending like kyungsoo tho and meet my deceased best friend once again

Chapter 4: This was AMAZING!!! I
totally noticed the last name thing before, but for whatever reason when it came to Luhan and zitao, I ignored it. -.-
KAI IS ALIVE!!! ;DI love it!

Chapter 4: This is a really, really, reaaaally amazing story. Swear. I really love the plot and omg the that ending ;-; Thank you so much for making this ( _ _ )

Chapter 4: I love how jongin is so precious and cute and cheeky and protective and ahsgdiekfcodmsj kaisoooooo

Chapter 4: Ohmuhgawd so good I'm almost crying right now the tears are there oh gosh so good I loved it

congratulations!

Chapter 4: Omg author your story is great! It's look like Hunger Games and Divergent in one story. The suppression wristband reminds me of Japanese anime beyond the boundary. All are my fav! The ending is unpredictable, and at first I though that zitao is the aegis haha.

Chapter 4: I was so close to crying, it's ridiculous. But somehow I just knew that it would end this way. Great fanfic, I loved it. :)

Chapter 4: omg omg omg and I thought kyungsoo would die because well, the supreme leader's aegis died and supreme leader would be mad omg omg omg I ALMOST LIKE DOED HERE TOO READING THIS OH MY GOD THIS IS BEAUTIFUL

Chapter 4: Omg authornim this fic is amazing! I love how you used the rose thing I cant believe I actually got it, i only realized that i was right when i read your authors note kekeke i feel smart! Anyway im hoping for a sequel! Well done authornim!

Congrats! :)

This story is one of the best~!! Daebak!!

Chapter 4: I thought the ending wil be angsty. But then it turned out much more beautiful. Thanks for this author-nim. I found this story featured and I read it right away and yeah. This is great. Congrats again author-nim :*