Chapter 4: How did baekhyun died?

Chapter 4: This was such a wonderful idea and story all together oh my god
thank you for writing such a masterpiece

Hunger Games. Great.

congratulations!

Chapter 3: the supreme leader reminds me of president snow from the hunger games. that rose loving bastard xD

Chapter 2: Everything is so perfect ugh can' stop crying

Chapter 4: Woaah this fic is soooo cool!! I never read a scifi like this before.. Congrats for the features! Love this story!! ^^

Chapter 4: Omg this is really well written! I always feel different emotions in every scene. Oh the way u described their feelings and love just made me cry sometimes <3

Chapter 4: Seriously, i cried every time u killed off a character. Like i can literally feel their pain?? This is so amazing, congrats on the feature! You deserve it!

Chapter 4: this is beautifully written ohmygod

Chapter 4: This is by far the best thing I have ever read
I mean it's j-just I-I can't even
and omg baekyeol T.T I cried so hard, when they called each other out, oh god, I can't
and yayy Kaisoo foeva
Tao's time controlling powers, just, Epic.
I love this story so much <3 <3 <3

congrats on getting featured

congratulations! (:

Congratulations

congrats :3

congratulations ;)

Chapter 4: ...why foes EVERY fantasy fic give Zitao the ability to control time!? =.=
And that ending was too short~ ><

Chapter 4: Oh my god how am I supposed to even deal..the ChanBaek scene made me bawl. I just….I can't..

Chapter 4: Oh my god!!! Normally I don't read Exo pairing fics, but I'm so glad I read this one!! This was so beautiful! I love the way you wrote the intimate scenes try were really well done :)




Baekhyuns final scene oh my god I'm goin to cry!! The way he called out for Chanyeol as he died was beautiful!!

Thank you so much for that author note at the end explaining everything it makes so much sense now how didn't I see it!! Thank you!! ❤