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Em1412 #1
Chapter 25: WHOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! BEST STORY EVER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I really felt that I could connect with Su Ji because in a way my life is similar. Thank you for writing this wonderful story author-nim!! :) :)
Vaalya
#2
Chapter 25: OK, take everything back. Cheers for her mom, she actually is a decent human being, even if she had such a hardened and cold exterior 24/7. And cheers for Jongin and Su Ji FINALLY OMG. I WAS WAITING FOR THIS MOMENT EVER SINCE IT ALL STARTED.

All in all, I really enjoyed this story. Even though I found some grammatical errors (they can be easily overlooked though), and some parts were overly dramatic (then again so am I LOL) I loved reading it.

Keep up the good work!!

P.S: I really, really really really was left with the urge to read more JonginxSuJi moments. I WANT morrree. SOMEONE SAVE ME FROM MYSELF HAHAHHAHA.
Vaalya
#3
Chapter 22: Oh my God, that woman makes me cringe in disgust and rage. Su Ji didn't deserve such a mother but someone who actually listens, tries to at least understand AND trusts her daughter. Someone who respects her decisions, her passions and supports her.

That woman couldn't possibly expect to have Su Ji live a life she had already planed beforehand, and be OK with it.

What was she doing, really? Adding pressure and pain, forcing her own ideals upon others. Turning her daughter into a 'perfect' doll that, in the end, was never made to fit in a dress that wasn't her size.

I'm furious and severely disappointed. I hoped she would at least show some concern for her daughter's well being, REAL concern. But what we got was a slap, harsh words, judging stares.

I guess I was expecting too much after all, huh?
Vaalya
#4
Chapter 21: Get together already OMG. PLEASE DON'T DRAG THIS ANY LONGER. MY HEART *weird pained noises*
Vaalya
#5
Chapter 16: It had to be this way, huh. It had to be this beautiful, mesmerizing and ing perfect Jongin-ish confession; and it went down like that.

Oh my God.

I need air and SU JI NEEDS TO CLEAR UP HER MIND OR I'LL GO BERSERK
Vaalya
#6
Chapter 12: Oooooookay. This is... um. Unexpectedly expected. The need to punch something is STRONG. Damn I didn't think this would happen, even though the storyline had been hinting it for a long time.

I tried to convince myself that it was just me, I did. But NO. I WANT TO SCREAM GOD DON'T DO THIS. AUTHORNIM YOU DIDN'T.
EXOSSS
#7
I CANT BELIEVED I JUST FOUND THIS STORY!!
doveheart
#8
Chapter 5: People ask me, "Why are you reading this at 3:00 AM?" Well, because this story is amazing.
xolovekeyy #9
Chapter 16: it's around midnight right now and i just can't stop reading this story! by the way i do like lengthy chapter ^o^
xolovekeyy #10
Chapter 12: omg this story got more complicated:( (not that i complaint tho, that is what makes me enjoy the story the most) as much as i want jongin and suji to be together, i'm sure her mother will be disappointed again, just when i thought it's the only problem between their growing(?) relationship, her bestfriend likes jongin too! i really didn't expect this to happen at all :| and Jaehoon! omg how about Jaehoon then? i'm dying to know what will happen between them! i like how this story is unpredictable, how Author describe the character, your writing style is just amazing! wow i think i can go on all night too explaining why i love this story! Good job Author! your stories never disappoint me<3 keep writing because you really have talent on it! (sorry for the long comment and bad english)
exotic899
#11
Chapter 25: Thank you for making such beautifully written story. It's so lively and the emotion flowed from the oc character soaked me with those emotion as well. I'm truly amused with your story. I have read this story long ago and im not sure if i left any comment on the comment section, so here i am, reading back the story and left you a comment to give you some encouragement. You're a great author and could possibly make it big in the future later. Please do write more amazing stories! Sorry for the long comment tho :)
sekaibyun
#12
Chapter 25: this is so beautiful. I'm so in love with your writing style, author ❤
eilya1234 #13
This story is so painly beautiful.
cheonsa522 #14
Chapter 25: idk why but i imagine junmyeon as jaehoon lol
moonlight12
#15
Chapter 25: I fell in love with the story<3 Amazing how you describe everything, their emotions,the scenery, their characters. Just wished there were more moments of them together but still love it so much!
MZ0077 #16
i just realise that i havent upvote this story, and also just realise that you are the same author that write Never Let Me Go
uuuh, how can i be this ignorant
anyways thanks for writing this beautiful stories
i really enjoy reading them
xcriii
#17
Chapter 25: Loving this story! So beautiful ;w;
Jongin's character in here is just well-written and somehow it makes my heart flutters in a good way XD haha this story is amazing!
kimmiekimmuackzzzzz #18
Chapter 3: i am married to heartlines. haha its amazing how i am so in love wz it. I may drop comments now n then. like i used to do.
JUNMAsWifeu #19
Chapter 25: Loving this story :3
2yLight
#20
Chapter 25: Second time reading this and it's beautiful. Amazing. Awesome.