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chazzsm
#1
Chapter 17: Oh my god... the last part. The last part is what I hate the most over everything else in the universe. Although it's not me who's being thrown in the trash can, but it sure tore my heart apart seeing the flowers originally intended to give to me was harshly threwn in the trash in front of my eyes. God I would never forgive a guy who do that..
chazzsm
#2
Chapter 6: I was just about to comment that Jongin's kind of fluffy in here! You beat me to it. He's more open, and more interactions. Coooool ?
chazzsm
#3
Chapter 1: Kim Jongin with his smirk oh my god oh my god *breathless*
Luhanreindeer
#4
Chapter 25: I reread and i fell in love once again with this story!!! This is beautiful!!!
MelodyYingLim #5
Chapter 21: Not finished reading this piece but i absolutely love it! The emotions through every chapter is well protrayed :) Also i would recommend to add an "angst" tag and "sliceoflife" tag coz i never knew this story would be so sad all the time haha. I thought it's a sappy love story when i first read it (well i love angst too)
Huiyoung2824 #6
Chapter 12: Lyra would be their child's name in the future ;).
Chippy_EL
#7
Chapter 25: I like this. A lot. It felt so intimate and beautiful. Like how you touch on the characters's issues with family, friend, love, illness and more. It felt so realistic with the mention of common problems a normal teenager face in real life - chasing after dreams, love and maybe with the society. Thank you for the story. Have a nice day :)
kaikookie #8
Chapter 25: God! This is just soooo good. And the last part U talked about love, that is exactly what I really wanna experience. Thanks Author nim it was a great story
tripleH
#9
Chapter 25: This is so breathaking i swear. Everything going slow pace and beautifully written ❤
Luluyoongi #10
This is so beautiful, really.
I love their charachter here, you really do a great job. Thank u for all of your beautiful stories. I've read some of your stories. I want to give a comment for each story but I can't because my phone is not really a good one to type.. cuz the glass is broken and... Yeah, it's hard to type with my phone. So I just can show you how grateful I am by upvoting your stories. Im so sorry and thnk u for making this beautiful story

*OhMyGod my fingers hurt like hell because the long typing :(( *
galaxist00
#11
Chapter 25: Double thumbs up :)
Miley94
#12
Chapter 16: "Those people with the most beautiful and brightest smiles are the ones whose heart got broken in the most genuine and agonizing way"
Now I have a quote from you :) I find it very true.
Undulating_IN #13
My number one fav kai fic, just droppong by to say hi to it and vote with my new acc <3 dont ever delete it i will ing die!
hiko_shin #14
Chapter 15: Save me from this flood of crying
missq_apple
#15
Chapter 25: this is so amazing :')
cathy_L #16
Chapter 25: you got me crying on 1am.