Chapter 25: I spent roughly 8 hours reading your whole fic. And I must say, it was wonderful. You had some grammar errors, but nothing annoying or out of place, obviously just some typo, and I find that amazing. Usually when I see those things I get quite frustrated and annoyed to the point that I would just stop reading it all together, but your fic was like Jongin's eyes in this story. I basically got trapped by your writing. Usually when I read short fanfics, I'd expect them to be so chessy and cute, but without the proper writing skill. But with yours, I found myself inlove with your transitions and the way you introduced your characters, and just the way you wrote everything as a whole was just marvelous. It made me wonder if I could write something like this someday. I'm quite reservered. I don't share my stories in public, so I have this thing for well-written fanfics, and wonder where I could go with my writing. I guess what I'm trying to say here is, I love your fanfic and your writing style. I think it was wonderfully written despite it being a short fanfic(the good ones I've read were usually 35-50 chapters long). All throughout the story I wondered if Jongin was just going to be a pigment of her imagination in an effort to get into terms with her situation with her mom, and at the beginning, I thought Jongin was the "man" Eun Hye and SuJi were talking about. In summary, I wasn't really sure how your story would end which was a major plus for me. That is to say, I didn't find your fic boring. (Gosh my comment is getting to long) Just, congrats on a job well done author-nim! ^^
Chapter 25: I love this story too! Because su ji got the guts to tell her mum what she really wants to be. And that she had a boyfriend before, unlike some other stories where they're fresh
Chapter 25: I just love it! It's perfect! At first I didn't want to start reading your fic because I thought it was too long, but I started reading this morning and I already finished it ~ I just found myself totally involved with the story and I couldn't stop reading haha' I actually see a lot of myself in Su Ji's character, we have a lot in common. Thanks for sharing this lovely fic!
Chapter 25: I just started reading this story last night and finished it today and i can't help but fall in love with this. It's not really complicated nor too fancy yet its just simply attractive and easy to read. It gives of wonderful feelings to my heart and gives off a smile to my face whenever jongin is being such a sweetheart. I feel so glad that I bumped into this story and realized the wonders behind it. I hope you'll continue stories like this and fill our hearts with love and sweetness. God bless author-nim!
Chapter 25: A beautiful story ㅠㅠ the conflict is simple, the drama is not too much and not too less, and I love how you portray every single characters to be this detailed and complex (you know, not just "bad people" and "good people") and I can relate the conflict to my real life (although I'm pursuing my dream and not forced by my parents but a lot of my friends had this kind of conflicts with their parents) and of course I love the almighty Kim Jongin lol and I love how you combine Kai's trait and Jongin's trait into the Jongin in this story.
Chapter 25: Seriously, this story is really beautifulㅠㅠㅠㅠ it's related to me in some ways lol, I really enjoyed reading this xD I love how the characters are potrayed, so beautifulㅠㅠㅠㅠㅠ
lol i have 2 accounts idk why but yeah i do. An i was reading the first and realised i have already read this lol. btw I LOVE THIS STORY EVERYTHING WRITEN IS A MASTER PIECE!!! usually i only remember stories that i get attatched to and this was one of them! loved your story ^^ xxxxxx
Chapter 25: Huaaa this is the best Kai fanfic eveeeeeeerrrr!!!
I love it! I love it! I love it!
Even Kai's not my bias, but it doesn't matter right? He is exo and your story is amazing!
I can feel what Sujin and Jongin feel.
I also love the way you write this story. It's like you write with all of your heart and soul on it. :))
Chapter 25: This is so breath-taking, affecting and electrifying.
Every word you write and match it into each other was very beautiful. Thank you so much for writing this, and with no doubt I will read your other story. Tbh I'm totally falling for Jongin character for the first time he was so great, you make it so great. Good job and keep up the hard working!
Chapter 25: I know you probably got this a lot, but this is really beautiful. Out of every stories with Jongin in it, I fell in love with this one. The choice of words is impeccable and I like how you calculated even the and the resolution. This is perfect. You must be so proud ^^
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