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rynette #1
Chapter 25: Its so good!!!i love it!!i enjoyed my self so much while i read it... :)
Gstwln #2
Chapter 25: I am the only one that always portraying suho as jae hoon whenever his name mentioned in this story? Haha anyway, i really pleased reading your story^^ thanks for your hardwork to make this
Ihveathingforexo #3
Chapter 25: Aww I finished this entire story in 2 hours and oh my goodness it's 4:40am but its so worth it!! This was super well written and gave me so many feels!!
Ihveathingforexo #4
Chapter 25: Aww I finished this entire story in 2 hours and oh my goodness it's 4:40am but its so worth it!! This was super well written and gave me so many feels!!
jstshnn #5
Hello authornim, it's one of those nights where I'm twisting and tiring on my bed, thinking about all sorts of things. Your stories are always my fav, both never let me go and heartlines. It's simple but yet very deep in some ways. I loved how you made the characters feel so alive and it's too real that I actually thought of jongin as the jongin in Never Let Me Go. I hope to read more of your stories; that is if you'll have the time to write a new one. :))

One of your reader ❤️
gyysaxokai #6
Chapter 25: Aww I remember I saved this online idk months ago, but since I want to read your stories I came to this one, and it was wonderful, though the slow pace at first disturbed me a little, but I got it you were trying to build the character and I just realized you were really good portraying their roles. Anw great job
Dorkkamjong
#7
Chapter 25: Once again i enjoyed this story just like how i used to. I remember how i always read this fanfic every night back in 2014. How i miss those times. Whats special about this fanfic in my opinion is how jongin's personality is really simple and real. Just how you create su ji's personality along with other characters. It reflects a real person with a feelings. Lastly, i love how the story is short, uncomplicated and nicely delivered. Good Job authornim :)
pastelkitties #8
Chapter 25: really enjoyed reading this story <33
aaaelle #9
Chapter 25: Wow just finished this in a few hours, and wow. I've never read a good fic in a while and this will definitely be on the top of my list. I've also read your Never Let Me Go fic and.. you really have a knack for sparking connections between the reader and the characters. I love Heartlines because it's very light with enough drama, like just a breath of fresh air?? I hope you won't stop writing and keep inspiring others!
chubbyfatin
#10
Chapter 25: Ohh my poor hearteu.. ♥♥♥ i can't remember the last time i had the feels after reading a fic.. Amazing work author..
realamal97
#11
Chapter 25: Just finished rereading this :`) the first time I read it was 2 years ago, I suddenly remembered how much I liked this fanfic so I decided to reread it (and I`m so glad that I did)
This fanfic is really heart touching and realistic, I liked Jongin's character so much it was so realistic and unlike those fanfics where Jongin is a rich , I love this fanfic so much although the story is simple and not so complicated, but still I enjoyed each moment while reading it, also I`m really thankful that you wrote it <3. Thanks a lot :D *hugs you*
oltaexo #12
Chapter 25: I'm crying...
youngdlady
#13
Chapter 25: Okay u might have heard it for thousands of time but really tho this story is so beautiful. Romance, family issue, friendship u put everything so nicely! I'm really glad Su Ji made up with her mom and she get over her illness. What makes me thinking so much is Su Ji's past relationship. How everything can change in a blink of eyes. That scares me so much T__T But I always believe that if it meants to be, it will be. Thank u authornim <3
youngdlady
#14
Chapter 17: whAT?? But it's not all Su JI's fault tho? Why Eun Hye mad to her I don't understand -_- And Jongin clearly knows she has bf he should confront Jae Hoon instead, try to win her over openly or something not this way Jongin u fool! This way u just going to make her life miserable so selfish ugh
helloilovebap #15
Chapter 25: Omgosh no words could also describe how im feeling right now after reading this story. T.T i really love this story. It's so... lighthearted and.... good (obviously an understatement). My finals are approaching and i have no idea how this story made me wanna work harder in achieving my goals. Thank you for the inspiration as well as writing this story. God Bless. <3
SasaengPandaFan #16
Kim Jongin is a bias wrecker. Love him /sobs
YunGee
#17
Chapter 25: Beautiful and enchanting story.
mashopoto #18
Chapter 1: how can you not see someone's face but see them smirk?
fanficsmaniac #19
Chapter 25: its a beautiful story authornim
fanficsmaniac #20
Chapter 8: 'Kim Jongin is a moving art.' I totally agree with this.