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swag_er
#1
*wiping my tears* One beautiful story.. You make me cry again.. All of your stories are beautiful and makes me cry.. I just really really respect you..

Oh right, in your all stories lead roles are all my biases.. :D that's why I love it even more...

I'm looking forward your next stories.. See you next time~
BestUsernameEver #2
Your story made me cry, literally.
baekyeollie
#3
The end is so devestating ):
but i loved this story!
*Sobs*
LeMadHatter
#4
Authornim, u made me cry a lot... T^T I love your stories and will always support you! I need another box of tissue..
-inspirit
#5
I knew what was the result or the ending but I couldn't help an continue to read until the very end! To be honest, when I read the foreword I wasn't so Intrested in the fic but subscribed as always to your amazing stories and this story is one subscription I won't ever regret! Amazing story! I don't even know why I doubted it in the first place! One of my favorites <3333
phyllislovesdance #6
Forgot to comment after I read I think :x but wow. I cried like mad for the last few chapters... It is so sad ): at the same time I don't want them to die, but somehow you put it in a way that makes this ending so beautiful as well ^^
gretzelle #7
Omg I'm trying not to cry on a crowded public Subway lol. Finally got to finish this story since u took it down for awhile. I was very attached to this fic.
turnbaek
#8
i read this twice and i cried again ;'c
baekyeollie
#9
YAY THE STORY IS UP!
time to read keke <3
6Minlover #10
the end devastated me... :'( but the story is great! Thank u
SilentNight
#11
Yay! Its public! Thank you XD Heheheh I will enjoy this well :)
Unnie4 #12
YAYYYY!!! The story is back up. I'm so happy.(does happy silly dance) Thank you dbskgirl4evr!!!
angartiko #13
thank you author!
EnitsujNahc
#14
Wow. This was awesome. Seriously.
Kinda upset all 3 died though. My top two bias... ;~~~~~~~~~~;
After Zico died, I'd actually thought Jaehyo would die too xD You know, trying to get revenge for his sister, coming back to help Kris, but just dying in the process .
I was still expecting a happy ending though *foreverpouting*
The story was still great <3 Thanks
psxthurism
#15
Reading the third chapter for this again, with Zico and his bubbly smile, reminded me why I love this fic so much! I laughed so hard at the part where he said that ever since he entered Jungah's life, her cloudy life became sunshine and happy like a duck on a lily pad.
Then again when Jaehyo called him a hippe freak xD
moo_imma_fish #16
ALL THE FEELS ;A;
-paperhearts- #17
The gif doesnt help =.=
psxthurism
#18
Thank you, author-nim, for putting this story up! ^^ I hope those plagiarizers will stop plagiarizing D:
turnbaek
#19
sankyu for reposting this unnie ♡
JiahengOfYourDreams
#20
Yo! It's back! Thank you, thank you, thank you! I love you, author-nim! :">
irawrsviv #21
AAAAAAAAAAHHHH YOU REPOSTED THIS <3
Sannin
#22
What happened to the rest of Block B?
O_O
alamak
#23
ohmygod~ you made all of them die. tsk. tsk.
--namu
#24
i knew this would happen all of them die.. not so damn fair!!!
--namu
#25
wah jaehyo come to save the day!!!! hope so
--namu
#26
wtf!! jungah die too? oh no,,, now i have two more chpter two read...
--namu
#27
told ya' zico is her brother
--namu
#28
yixing u u aghh i hate u although i love u XD
--namu
#29
first and last kiss from zico.. u zico for being dying
--namu
#30
no!! zico dont die!!!
--namu
#31
jungah n kris are on the way to save zico!!! liang is here.. zico n block b please be save,,,,
--namu
#32
ahh jungah u also make me surprise too!! did u just call b-bomb an oppa? wow amazing
--namu
#33
poor u zico..
--namu
#34
zico!!!! jungah please cheer for zico
--namu
#35
ahh jungah now realize how important zico is
--namu
#36
asdfghjkl finally kris and jungah slept together? ohohoo i need bookmark this muaahahah
--namu
#37
oh no!!! she know about kris now!
--namu
#38
wahh i want that breathtaking kiss too
--namu
#39
i just back and start reading.. gash kris knew zico's work
escapism
#40
I just finished reading and I'm in tears. Why does life have to be so cruel? All three didn't deserve that :(
KissMe_Angel97
#41
WHYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!! POOR ZICO!!! POOR JUNGAH!!! POOR KRIS!!! POOR JAEHYO!!! POOR EXO M AND BLOCK B!!!! WHY DOES IT END LIKE THIS?!?!?! NOOOOOOOOOOOO!!
deadanydee
#42
omg i have an important test in few hours but im still here OMG I DIDNT EXPECT ALL THREE WOULD DIE LDJFKNVLKFBNFLKBNFKBNLFKBNLKNCBFKJBNFLKNBFKLNKFNLKFF NOOOOOOOOOO
JOYCEpotatooo
#43
KRIS, JUNGAH AND ZICO ALL DIED. ;____________; HUWAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHH SO ANGSTY
blueroses #44
HUHUHUHUHU WHYYYYYY AUTHOR-NIM WHYYYYY TT__TT
Oh well, at least they rest in peace :_) thank you for this fic by the way, it's awesome!!! <3
GDsLurverz
#45
OMG. They are all dead!! Dead!!!!!!! I can't believe it!!!!!! They are dead!!!! DEAD!!!!!!!!!! Ahhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!! Write more!! :)
JiaHuey
#46
Author-nim~~ wae you killed three of them?.. T^T
Anyway~ thanks alot for writing this amazing story~
I LOVE YOU~~ :D
sugarandalmonds
#47
before reading the miss chapters, it became a habit of mine to read the comments first, it's weird right, along the way i am really hoping that none of them will die, but when Zico died, and jung ah followed, i really wished that Kris too, i'm sad yes, but not questioning how you ended the story, yes it was sad, yes it made me cry, but i really enjoy reading every chapter, the fluff, the romantic side of the story, that even gangsters have the right to fall in love, but then, maybe it's not the right time for them, since they had done a bad deed, but congratulations on finishing this story!hwaiting!!
So-Tiffany
#48
Can'T you wirte stories with a happy ending T_T
I wanted them to live a happy life all together...
Secretmoonlight
#49
JHSAJKLHSKLJDFHSAKLJHFLAKJFH;AJ /le sobs
another awesome story from you.
can't believe you killed them all T^T
kpopfreakILOVEYOU
#50
I miss seeing 'The Bittersweet Deal: Updated!' every time I went on AFF... =(
jacqdongho
#51
So, beautiful. though i am curious of the rest of Block B, and Exo-M. :/
dbskgirl4ever
#52
Thank you for reading~
jaywalkerlove
#53
Wow...my keyboard is drenched in tears. I think you have really grown as a writer. You embellish your characters and spend time on the plot and storyline. I really really really like this fanfic :) You did a wonderful job
krnstarluva
#54
I think this is the most I've ever cried reading a fanfic. I loved it so much. Keep on writing. <3
pizzarollin-
#55
I just stayed up for hours reading this and I cried so much ;____;
This story is so completely daebak I can't even, explain how amazing it really is.
The end, oh my gosh I'm still in tears.
You write so well! :'D <3
05Rose05
#56
OMG!!! I cried so much while reading the last few chapters, I was sobbing like crazy......
But still, like always, I loved the story =)
Chicken_curly #57
OH MY FREAKING LORD! I CRIED LIKE A BABY! Love this fanfic sooooooo muuuuch ♥
cxeeth-j
#58
This is one hell of a ing awesome fanfic ♥
Aweshume_Inspirit
#59
Why must all of them die?! D; I seriously never expected that! You're so good in making story full of angsty like this <3
kikichai
#60
Omg.. so good..
hoboprincess
#61
Omo omo such a touching story ;~;
U have a real talent for writing
And LOL the kris gif at the end is sooo hawttt! :p
MsSimple8D
#62
TEARS.
THIS STORY IS SO BEAUTIFUL T.T THANK YOU SO SO MUCH <3
NoBodY_KnoWs_Me
#63
Love this story!
Bloody_Vampire_JL7
#64
You had me crying a river here. I swear one of the best, but then again, all you can make is the best^^ Loved the sad ending approach so much! Really good ending and story. TT.TT I'm still crying. It's just sooo good! I really didn't expect Jaehyo to be her brother. I cried and cried. Sooooo good. >W< I'm like awwing at your awesome story. >M<
-inspirit
#65
I'm almost finished with this story but I got to hand it to you, one of your best fics ever!
Greend
#66
Great story!
TheNerves #67
OhMyGod, this is daebak! ^^
flabbycow #68
I seriously thought Kris and Jungah would live and be happy together and all that but... At least Jaehyo isn't dead, right? *sobs* Love this story!
Sandi_lwin
#69
The story is... so sad. But Kris gif makes me happy again. :) Nice story, unnie.
itsjustme
#70
ifhkfjkbjkfdjbfjbif T__________________T <///3333
tae-mir
#71
Omg, this is the best! :')
Ekaterina1215
#72
Guys.. please.. calm down it was a story, be glad it wasn't real. But the story was AWESOMEEEE!!!! I loved it but sorry to disappoint you, I didn't cry. I'm actually smiling at what a great author you are. You made a story that could have been made into a drama, too bad it didn't.. what a shame. Well, I hope you continue to make awesome stories just like this one, and I will continue to support you. :)
chah0307
#73
What a nice ending! :')
DaSangtaeIsDubu #74
Oh my god i cried and it was hard to breath when Zico died and then Jungah died and now Kris omg im crying my eyes out omygosh i wanted both jungah and kris to die just so that they could reunite with Zico but i have this depressing feeling, just because of the fact that theyre never going to be alive, on earth again. Oh gosh i feel so sad omg bawling rn D""""X oh my god this story was absolutely amazing but omg kskaldhf this was literally the best angst story i have ever read and most likely one of the best fics i have ever read if not the best.
this was your best one so far, in my opinion, but all your stories are so amazing and omg
I feel like this impacted my life or something lol
when i read that Zico died i was like, suffocating and it felt like an actual loved one of mine died *o*
omg this was an amazing story holy its breathtaking. I will always remember this story and i will no doubt come back to read it again in the future.
i wish this was printed on paper so i could keep it forever, like a book. If you fricken printed this out i would totally buy this omfg so amazing xD
I LOVE YOU AUTHOR-SSHI XD
DaSangtaeIsDubu #75
OMAHGAHD
I got in trouble a few days ago & had to sneak online and I am on chapter 58 but i see in my updates THIS FIC IS COMPLETE OMGOSH I MISSED OUT SO MUCH :ASDFLKSADF:LKDSAF
i must go rread this now XD
maaan, i log off for a few days and it's already complete!?!? THIS !!! I missed out on getting to spazz & comment after every new update XDDD
arrrgh asdl;jkflsdajkf;lsadkjf
chicken-lover #76
OMG BEST STORY EVERRRRR!!! I LOVE U AUTHORNIM <3
Ohmymyungsoo #77
You're truly the best! I cried my heart out ;_________; I can't believe it ended so fast! Thanks for writing this story! One of the best c:
chocolat748
#78
What a sad ending! T^T Thank you for another amazing story! <3
happyvirus_didi
#79
i can't stop reading this fic again n again..sucha heart-wrenching story!! can't stop crying!!!! this hd definitely taken my 1st spot of fav ff.. :')))))
daebak author-nim! continue writing awesome stories!! <3
misscharm #80
I will surely miss this story...
Chelle3lf
#81
I cried the whole ten last chap
bubble96 #82
So saddd T___T well knowing that kris die alone makes me burst into tears..but however this story is really good (Y)
MelodyLovesKey #83
So sad TT^TT i like happy endings more...
lexayoo
#84
The story was great. I wish they didn't die though. :( I loved the Kris-Jungah couple, they were great together.
I love your writing style and you're a great author, but I think I will never read any angst again. :( My heart can't bear it.
chocostring
#85
I was expecting them to die. Knowing you and sad stories. But, . It still made me cry. T__T /off to your new fic
heyluhan #86
EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEH WAE????????????????????????wae sad ending?is it angst fanfc shud ended with sad ending????????i dunno my feels..<//////////////////3 thanks authornim for awe ff.................but i wnt a happy stry,im sorry
fishlover28 #87
Oh this is so ...
Ohmygoonie. My feels.
applelover8943
#88
agh... i still need to read the last chapter... and tomorrow i have homework... bad luck for me, i guess. -_- I WANNA READ!!! and the second last chapter is really unexpected o_o
cutesandeul1123
#89
omona~ so sad T.T still not all ends in happy ending cause that's life...BTW coincidence....#MyLastWordsBeforeIDie was a trending topic in Twitter when i read this and i was like...Kris's last words were "Go to Hell" im like \m/ I STILL LOVE THE STORY <3
aurorahyunhee
#90
Ohhhh, that's really sad :""""( I kinda dislike a sad ending, but this is one great story ;) the moral message is so meaningful...
Thanks for making such an awesome story!
Good luck for the next story~ we love you,author-nim!! :*
tofuuchan
#91
This is such a great story! It really matches the title. I was really super sad that the main characters died but still it's such a bittersweet ending. I love it. Maybe my second favorite angst story. First for me was Fact & Fiction. One of the best stories I have ever read. In my life. Love this story a lot dbskgirl4ever! I love you too! XDDD
essenarade #92
Whoaaa! It's end already?! Aaaaw.
So, it's Tragedy eh? :( I feel bad to Jaehyo and the other Block B & EXO members.
But atleast Kris, Jungah & Zico are together now.
Such an amazing story TT^TT

THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS STORY~
miss_amma
#93
oh why ended up in... death ;____; my wu fan oh poor my wu fan ;______;
but after all...
I enjoyed reading it :') again, you played my emotion with your fic.
thanks a lot :')
aderanoyy
#94
my god the gif at the final chapter shocked me, so handsome XD fffuuuuuu krrriiiissss!!! btw even though it's sad ending, but still I like it! author nim you're the best.... ;__;
sheerah6jaya
#95
Yay! THe Ff is finally done! RIP all the 3 mains, Jungah, Kris and Zico! Forever in our hearts! *still crying* =D