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Cocoa12-6-5-15
#1
I could really feel all the tragedy... This was so amazing!! i really enjoy it reading it even when it made me really sad... this was deabak
eunJee25
#2
WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA
IT'S THE END AGAIN!!!!!!!!!
AND NOW! A NEW STORY AWAITS ME.
YOUR A GREAT AUTHOR YOU KNOW THAT. WE ALWAYS TELL YOU THAT. ^o^
SARANGHAE EONNIE~! CONTINUE MAKING SUCH AWESOME AND DAEBAK STORIES!!
NAMtika
#3
i'm crying to much on this fic OTL before i always giggled when read how kris teased jungah , how jungah endlessly blush when with kris , how cute and romantic their date:33
but near at the end i'm crying too much bc all the angst:'(
but seriously this is GREAT story , so much conflict are unpredictable:33
chocoinsane
#4
love was bitter
love was sweet
love was bittersweet
amazing how u had referred to the title
first of all, this was an amazing fanfic, and i'm glad i read it, and i'm sad it ended
well... lol, the 3 main died, u can't continue the story, unless you are talking about the afterlife
boog1e
#5
Oh my god.
I love the heartbreaking angst here. I've seen fics where one dies, okay, but all of them? This is something new. And I would know how it feels to even try to kill a character. You know it's just a freaking story but it feels like you're killing a real human being.
But wow. At first I didn't think I'd became so obsessed with this story, but I guess it's all your stories that have this magical way with people. It's a privilege to have you writing stories like this here. We're all so grateful.
I'll be waiting for the next story now~! I can't wait.
ainulhee
#6
cried.....thanks for making kris die too...i cant bear to see him alive wothout jungah by his side....a really sad ending T____T and also one of my fav story.....

thanks!


*move on to the sequel of BADASS OPPA!! yeay!!! got exo too!!*
handyhint #7
Omg it's so sad... Anyway thanks author for having such an awesome fanfic.
BigBang4eva06
#8
Wow it was a great story but also so sad that none of them survive I was hoping that Jungah and Kris would at least make it alive but no all of them die T^T
Off to read your next story
boboful
#9
yay they all died, i wonder if the others survived though :|
JAMLilover
#10
that a one of the most sad awesome end I've ever read!!!*sobs sobs* gahh!!! T^T who expected that the 3 character will die in the end...at first part of the story..I expected to have happy ending.. x( It never crossed my mind not even once that this will be the ending..totally not expected.. T__________T

you're such a good author , hands down! /(^.^)\
shinyiuhan
#11
omg. I really can't believe it ended like this :( I was hoping for a more dramatic reunion between Lay, Chen and Kris... TT.TT
callumhood #12
OMG SUCH A BEAUTIFUL AND TRAGIC STORY TT^TT I cried. Literally. SO SAD! At least Liang died :D so they sort of got what they wanted? ^^ Going to read your next fic!
painful--doubleyou
#13
Okay, so my previous comment...I exceed the limit >.< So this will be the last comment LOL :)

THANK YOU!
Thanks for making such a great OC. Thanks for making Block B so cool and funny (I laughed a lot :D). Thanks for giving Kris such a sweet, though initially cold, personality. Thanks for making me laugh and feel many emotions. Thanks for teaching me that I shouldn't take my family, friends, or lover for granted. Thanks for making such a heartfelt and stunning story that made me cry. Dbskgirl4ever, I LOVE YOU <3!
missgreeningreen
#14
make a sequel and let them be in the other world with powers. No? Okay. I was happy kris died too. Thank you author-nim for writing a kris fic. It's my first though.
vanessahuynh
#15
Whoaaaa I love this so much !!!
Thank you for making this awesome story, unni :)
When Zico died, there was no worth for Jungah to live. And when Jungah died, Kris really didnt have to live anymore :)
I would do the same, so yeah, totally love the way this story ended !'
B2ST43V3R #16
omg definitely a good fanfic!! although all the main characters died, it was actually good and i loved it! >< thank you for this fanfic! :D
AncientWriting #17
I loved it!!! <3 I'm glad to have read it :) You are one true inspiring amazing writer! I hope Kris Jungah and Zico the best. Finally Kris is with Jungah <3 WAH! NO IT'S TOo SAD! I LITERALLY CRIED! I'm just happy no one saw me cry haha. Thanks for the amazing story again <3
addictedtoyou
#18
kudos to u again dbskgirl4ever!! thanks for this wonderful story..

now im up for the next one ^^
painful--doubleyou
#19
And here is my final comment for you on this beautiful fanfic which starred Zico, Block B, Kris, EXO-M, and my now favorite OC ever, Han Jungah!

First, your writing has really improved! You can portay emotions even better now, and I got so angry, hurt, and happy while reading this story, more so than some of your other ones. I hope you're extremely proud of this story...because it's absolutely gorgeous <3

Second, my favorite OC ever is officially Jungah now. Though she is fake, ...I admire her in a way. I'm going to strive to be like her, sort of. Her dedication and loyalty to Zico AND Kris is very admirable. Her love for each man was sincere, even though it was two kinds of love. You made her a brilliant person who I love :)

Ahn/Han Jaehyo. This boy! From the very first remark about him and Jungah looking alike, I had a suspicious feeling. The more they said it, the more I was sure they were somehow related. In, like, the middle, I predicted they were siblings. I was right! Anyway, I also really loved Jaehyo. I'm happy he got over his jealousy/envy and accepted Jungah as his sister.

Kris! I LOVE THIS MAN! He was sweet, passionate, and just plain badass. He worked for what he wanted and he always showed Jungah sweet love. He even killed his old boss for the sake of Jungah's AND Zico's revenge. He is also admirable. Though he was initially cold, Jungah (and even Block B!) changed him for the better.

Last, but most certainly not least, Zico! I continually got frustrated with this man in the beginning & middle of this fic. I just wanted him to be happy with Jungah. But, nearing the end, I was glad he didn't confess until the seconds before his death. If he had confessed before, Kris would never had found happiness. I think Zico, for me, was the most valiant and admirable in this fanfiction. He sacrificed his LIFE for the girl he loved. But before that, he OPENLY gave Jungah to Kris because he knew she was truly happy with him. So sweet! I love him!
THANK YOU!
callycat987
#20
This was such a beautiful story,even if the ending was tragic <3
Thank you for writing this amazing story~
and the gif of Kris made me feel better ;D
Key2UrHeart #21
Hey, at least this story is one of the first to not have a happy ending. Very original
eburnine
#22
oh wow...suprise ending huh...but amazing story as usual<3 thank you for writing such wonderful fics :')
Lmonkeyy2
#23
WHYYY OMG; WHYYYYYYYYYY ;(
This is bittersweet.. dam
congrats on finishing :D
AsianB2UTY
#24
I have to say this was one of the best if not the best fanfics ive read in a while, ive read some good fanfics but this one tops almost all of them. It was a risky move having all three main characters die in the end but i found that, that was something unexpected yet expected in a way. It made your story different. It didn't end in a typical "happy ending" way. You ended it in a way that relates back to the title. It really did show how love can be "bittersweet"
-katya #25
I LOVE YOUR ENDING. IT'S SO EMOTIONAL <3
you're an incredible writer, amazing story author-nim ^^
and yes. the kris gif did make me feel better ;)
kVaIsPs
#26
Ooh wow....now that this fanfic is over thinking back to how I thought the ending would be...this is no where close I hoped for a happy ending...but oh well </3 this fanfic is amazing but the ending is sad
Intoxication
#27
Thank you for writing such a bittersweet story :') it really teaches us many important lessons on love. I love the way you ended it with those sentences...I hope you continue to write wonderful stories like these :)
layhans
#28
why couldn't it be a happy ending? :'( oh well, I LOVE IT! great job!
supermanna
#29
Im glad it aint so generic ^^
muhanui #30
Never cease writing. I beg you.
naemiyoung
#31
Why do I feel like the ending was rushed? :(
hoewon
#32
The Kris gif didn't make it any better D:.
I didn't expect Kris to die :(. I still loved the story though! Thank you for writing such an incredible story.
Lisa_Ly
#33
Such a great ending...
So said T__T
daejaes
#34
.......yep the gif made me feel better
Priscy123
#35
YESHHH!!!! THEY ALL DIED!!!
i feel like such a sadist though....
im happy tht theyall died in the end though, so they can be together in heaven!! ^_^
altho it WAS sad... ;(
kpop_dork15
#36
I was crying! Wae...
Well.... That was a great story!
XiaoxiaoLu #37
THANK YOU!! For this amazing story!!!!!
randomauthor
#38
WAEE. :(((( YOU'RE SO PERFECT, I CANT EXPLAIN MY FEELS.
lovemenot_bear #39
loved this sentence I don't know why...
'what grave sin have we committed in our last life to go through so much pain now' the title was perfect, the ending, even with the death of all three is bittersweet,I loved it thank you very much.this may very well be the last time I read your fics until next year.it was a good memory,by by...<3
jumpinCATZ
#40
*cried buckets* how come they all die??
rachiiekimchiLEE
#41
NOOOOOOO THEYYY ALLL DIEEEEEDDD *sobs*
Hiroeru11
#42
Only one word: AMAZING.
You write such masterpieces and I respect you for that.
I really liked this fic. It makes the people to think about fate stuffs.
I got no words to describe this final ;u; just simply AMAZING.
Thanks you for writting such a great story<3
shinsungra #43
T^T what a sad sad sad ending sobsssssss
such an amaaaaazing story, author-nim! thank you so much for writing this fic TvT
moonie #44
you wrote this so well, even though the ending was so sad :(
can't wait to read ur next fic
-kohaku
#45
T~T it's so bitter sweet. Huh dbskgirl2ever you never make a bad story.. Though my biases died.. >^<
OMGKPOPADDICT
#46
*crying!!!!*
They all died! Noooooooo!
Beautifulove
#47
;A; I CRIED ;A;
swager
#48
T_T
paper_angel
#49
It's over. And you killed all my favourite people. WHY D: But it was so beautiful I couldn't hate it T_T
PigToggi
#50
WHAT THE HELL IS THIS?! THE TEARS ON MY FACE ARE TATTOOED THERE NOW
angstimes
#51
YAY! CONGRATS! AAND it was sad but great! people rarely write sad ending.
Generalchan
#52
*tears* NFGOIDFHG9OFFD. That was SO Good.
Too bad everyone had to die though :(
-dreamcatcherx
#53
This story is beautiful: so sad :(
All the 3 mains died ;(
<3
--Forgotten
#54
Aish... Such an angsty story.. Why did they all have to die?!
*bawling eyes out*

Anyway, great story!!
JinW11193 #55
GIF totally killed me...
Man it doesn't feel like an ending...I don't think I wanted it to end, but I doubt I could take much more of your angst...
Another brilliant story Author-nim~ Thank you
charmallama
#56
Hopefully they'll meet up in heaven :)
INSPIRIT_bumblebee
#57
Such a beautiful ending to a sad, but amazingly written story.... I loved it so much!!!!!! :)
painful--doubleyou
#58
@Ch75- You made me cry so hard, no lie! Jungie Jungie...gone? Wow! Poor Kris, he must be even more devastated than Jungah was! D*:
shampoo
#59
*sigh*that was sad...=(
but at the end everything you said is true.and for the last few chapters that were in pain, crying, cursing, and getting haertbreaks over here and there.!you still find a way to cheer us up! *sob* auhor-nim you really great as your story thus! and CONGRATULATIONS!!!=D this is a HUGE success! well done!,
*applouse*
Kamsahamnida!!!

and author-sshi~
i love you!
wo ai ni!
saranghae! and
mahal kita!

your daebak! fighting!!!^^
taekarebaby #60
Oh my god first story I read that killed off all 3 of the main characters. Thanks for making me bawl a rive author-nim :( I CAN'T EVEN EXPLAIN THIS STORY WAS TO GOOD TO HAVE IT END LIKE THISS NOOOOOOO
celestials
#61
Hdksmshslsnsksj I can't even omg skeblsbdbsjs
redtomorrow
#62
*bawling*

yet another beautifully written story... thank you author-nim <3
shawol_boice92
#63
why you never let kris get the girl? oh well... ;___;

i am dissappointed about the ending, because i was hoping for a happy ending from the beginning. i was thinking of some ways you could bring this story into a nice ending, but then again, i'm not the one writing.

your writing is truly good btw. i'm really enjoying the part where kris was opening himself to jungah, and jungah was started to longing for kris' presence. how they built the love between them, it's beautiful.
it's just that i'm not into sad endings.

i'll wait for your next fanfics. hope it'll include a happy ending. :)
thank you for writing this story.
flamer132 #64
lol forgiven as soon as i saw the kris gif! <3
this story was amaaazing!
so excited for the baddass oppas sequel! :D
gblaq_taemi
#65
I love this! It was a pure MASTERPIECE like MCHA!! :D
I'm glad that Kris died, so that he could reunite with Jungie n Zico in heaven. :)
LIANG IS DEAD BABEH, GO TO HELL!! :DDD
haha thank you author nim for a very nice story!! *claps*
i admire u, u r so great! :D hope u write better stories in the future! God Bless~
and OMO that Kris gif!
panda_poke
#66
I LOOOVE IT :'D PERFECT ENDING!! EVEN THO KREEASE DIED, HES IN A (HOPEFULLY) BETTER PLACE WITH JUNGAH...AND ZICO^^
I CAN'T WAIT FOR YOUR NEW STORY :)
GREAT STORY XD
renanism
#67
I thought the three of them would meet in the end T_T
But great story anyway! Keep the amazing works<3
dinowoobiasedftw
#68
T~T I'm sad they all died and glad Liang was killed then even better when I saw the kris gif GREAT JOB AUTHRONIM!
OnewSarang
#69
ah...

and that wink in the gif.... ahh again!
AmyRose92
#70
TT.TT
This is one of the hardest stories I've ever read. The emotional trauma was great...you really outdid yourself with this fic. It's not the fluffy ending everyone was hoping for but that's okay, because it was beautifully written from start to finish.

Good job girl! <3
netflix8cheol
#71
TT TT I KNEW EVERYONE WAS GOING TO DIE?! WHHHHHHHHHHY!
baboracoon
#72
LOL that gif is famous recently ~
So sad to know all of them died. But it's better for them too! Amazing story you made, author-nim!
Good job. One more thing I like, xiumin got same part in the last chapters lol. Thanks (>̯͡⌣<̯͡)
blingasaur-x #73
*insert clapping gif*
This story was seriously, really good. I'm not just saying it but it was really amazing T^T I kind of predicted all characters to end up dead but I loved how everything fit well together. It really showed how much thought you put into this story. Amazing. ♥
adee_k
#74
Omg simply amazing T_T
rawrkpoptiger
#75
Oh my God. Wow. I'm speechless. I.. just don't know what to say about the ending. Great story is all I can say.
youngdreamer
#76
im speechless. all three main characters all ended up dying...but this is a beautiful story. thumbs up!!
SHILLen
#77
U made me cry to much
xxmadafakah
#78
And they live happily dying after.. TT, TT



OMG! The GIF.. Kreeeeessss Wo. Ai. Ni.
exofafic
#79
niiiiiiice~ though they all died in the end :| anyway~ at least liang died that bastard :///
psxthurism
#80
Omo, all three died!
T.T
At least the bastard died with them, so while the three of them are in heaven, Liang is rotting in hell (:
i always love your fics, unnie! :D
PrincessHakyeon
#81
BIttersweet ending TT^TT
BUT STILL AS AWESOME AS EVER! <3
CLassi #82
no you cant put Kris' gif there just to make me forgive you for killing THREE great great main characters TT-TT unfortunely i forgave you ._. only because of the gif =_=

AWESOME ENDING! :l i knew kris was gonna die -_- bittersweet ending really ;^;
naddykinzz #83
That. Was. So. Good.
And so so so sad.
yeolllie
#84
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH FOREVER SOBBING!!! ;___________;I was right he was gonna die T^T but I'm glad his in peace now :') hes with the person who he truly loves.
Thank you SO much for writing such a WONDERFUL fanfic =) I subscribed on your new story: badass oppas 2. THANKYOU AGAIN!!!! BYE =)
FrozenTears
#85
omg... After Jungah and Zico decided I kinda expected Kris to die too... but OMG.... no that it's actually happened.... NOOOOOOOOO!!
Depsite all three main characters dying, I really enjoyed the story. Thanks for writing it. :)
painful--doubleyou
#86
@Ch72- One thing: I KNEW JAEHYO & JUNGAH WERE SIBLINGS!!
MISCharacter #87
An excellent story. Its the mark of a true author who can give life and kill characters as the story dictates and not force an ending as others desire. Good Job!
iHartCupcakes
#88
:o He died, the three died :(
Well, this was a bittersweet fanfic :)
I hope you will continue writing more fanfics :D
Good Job :D
sarangDB5K #89
I understand completely why you made the three main characters die .
At least the bastard's dead!
sarangDB5K #90
I understand completely why you made the three main characters die .
At least the bastard's dead!
luvMetoo #91
seriously that was the sadest fic i've read. i can't believe they all died.i love it <3
misty-
#92
Please don't be sorry. This was an amazing story! It truly was bittersweet. My favorite story that you have written! I can't wait to see what you come up with next! ^-^
kpopfreakILOVEYOU
#93
...
What?
That's it? THAT'S ALL?! Well, I would ask you to make a sequel but, it's kinda impossible since all three main characters are dead...
This was like, MY FAVORITE STORY!! It's was so daebak!! But it was so sad too. T.T I cried in this fanfic more than any other fabric before. So, 100000x stars for this fanfic!! HWAITING UNNIE!! CONTINUE TO MAKE MORE JJANG STORIES LIKE THIS!! <33