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EXOtic-12
#1
but at least that bastard died for killing zico, jungah, and kris
n_withloveex3 #2
OMGEEE in the end they all died T^Tatleast they are in peace now, they wont hae to worry about going throught any pain or sufferings ..
it was a really good storyy !! thank you for letting us all read it.
THANK YOuUU ~~
salvatore
#3
cam you write a story which zico finally gets the girl? :\
RawrYou
#4
I KNEW HE WAS GOING TO DIE BUT SBSIWYIATQKSBIT SOBS THIS FIC SO SADDDD BUT GOOOD HDKDHDO OMFG KRIS ;A; I- ARGHDIGSJ atleast he got liang ;; hdidhdk thanks for writing the fic <3
coodlesmesenpai
#5
OH GOD!!! It's so sad!!! Good job author-nim! You really superb in making fanfics!xD
Sedlikeskpop
#6
...
I still cant get over the fact that they all died,but this was really good!
like they say here: Chapeau,dbskgirl4ever ;)
ichigomilk
#7
I'm so mad. The story was lovely....but I'm still really mad haha. <3
neomanuisarang
#8
THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL!!! i'm totally ok witt sad endings because i find them the most beautiful that way. GOOD JOB IN ANOTHER OUTSTANDING STORY, AUTHOR-NIM!
EXOtic-12
#9
i loved your story :) just wish it ended diferently :( T_T i have been crying for the last couple of chapters until now Im crying a river!!!! TTTTTT___TTTTTT
kimskais
#10
Omg.
Love it so much it was amazing~!
It was sad yes but I wouldn't say I hate it D___O ... It was so beautifully written and just sldkjfslkdjf
Everything can't always have a happy ending >< And anyways Kris can now be with Jungahh :3
jenjeneee #11
oh my godddddddddddddddddddd, i knew Kris would end up dying...
still, i LOOOOVED this fanfic. it's amazing. i love you for making such wonderful fanfics!
anobonano
#12
WHYYYYYY ))))): OMG........ ;_____________________;

Agh......great story, though but... /sobs/ the ending... ;w;
dyann23
#13
i love it!!!! <3 do another kris fic!!! went u finish with badass oppas 2 xD
wjc912 #14
Noooooooooo!!! Everybody died!!!! That is si saaaaaddddd!!!
SincereSmiles #15
T^T All 3 of them died
At least they'll all be at peace
xNawonnx
#16
SJDHAHXSISYSJ OMG waeeeee did they have to die? T.T They didn't deserve it :/ At least Liang the died >.< Sigh amazing story! I'll be subbing to your next story when you post it! ^^ Fighting!
cxsmile
#17
What I imagined,
Kris dies with the rings in his hand.
Lay finds the rings and wears them as his necklace..
y'know, to like remember his best friend and what his best friend did for his love one..
yup.
lol
Viviheartzz
#18
OMG, amazing story!!!
i especially love your last paragraph about how love is bitter and sweet! you're last few chapters made me sob.
you're the only author that can make me cry :)
keep writing more awesomely awesome stories, author-nim!!!
cheonsa23
#19
no apologies accepted because there is no apologies needed.
you did the right thing. =)
if you let kris live, he would have lived in sorrow because there's no one to live for.

thank you for the beautiful read.
i just wish an epilogue would somehow come out for us to know how jaehyo and the rest of block b are. =)
minanie #20
I'm crying. It's just so unfair... But still, it was a beautiful story. Thank you for sharing this fic, author-nim! Looking forward to see another one of your stories (:
FattyPandi
#21
;O... OKAYY. SO. NO HAPPY ENDING. D; IT WAS GREAT BUT YOU COULD HAVE LIKE.. MADE ANOTHER CHAPTER OF THEM MEETING IN HEAVEN? ;DD well.. Kris killed people before and sold drugs so uhmm heaven... NVM LOLOL IT WAS STILL GREAT ♥ I STILL LOVE IT EVEN THOUGH ALL 3 MAIN DIED.
Oh_My_Hogod
#22
WHY DOES KRIS HAVE TO DIE?!?! *SOBS* WHAT?! But... That was a good story ^^ *goes off to read your new fanfic*
alessahaller #23
You seriously should be published in the future! I mean it.
parallelines
#24
dang this was just sad ; ______ ; All of them died. ekrtherth
Atleast they got their revenge ; ___ ; -ugly sobbing- idhewiurh
PrincessOfAsia
#25
OMG....... This killed me. My hope for love is gone.
riefor3v3r #26
Probably he second most sad story after 'Nightmare'...bu I still loved it...but what happened to Block B?...Jaehyo??
afiqahfauzi
#27
wow.
yunri14 #28
Thanks for this wonderful story. I really love it even though the ending was very sad! Please make a Kai story aswell. : )) <3
inGwet
#29
This fic is so well thought out!! You tied up every loose end and made the story have a real meaning. I loved it!! I know how much time it takes to write just one chapter and its amazing how much time and effort you put into every one your stories. Thank you for being such a dedicated and fabulous author. Never stop writing! Your stories are really the only ones that make me squeal(; You 100% deserve to be the #1 author on this site!
anobonano
#30
SHE DIED....OH MY GOODNESS SHE DIED!!!!! THE F;LKASDJLKASHFDKJASHFDKAJSHFDKJASDVDFBDSFGADFG
hero18
#31
Awwwww I was expecting Lay to somehow save him, but I guess not.
AT least the gif of Kris being y makes up for it.
MY NEW DP <333
I'll check out your next story unnie! :DDD
vannaaaa
#32
I had a feeling it would end like this. For some reason I think it's sweet when the main characters die together cause then I can think of my own epilogue.. like they met up in heaven (sings JYJ's In Heaven, lol). This ending kind of brings me back to one of your earlier stories, Snow Flower I believe it was called. I think that story is my ultimate fave of yours because of the ending, Love Is Bittersweet is now a close second on my list of fave dbskgirl4ever stories! :)
hunhanwhisper #33
THIS IS LIKE ROMEO N JULIET EXCEPT LIKE A BILLION TIMES BETTER!!! AUTHOR NIM WRITE A STORY OF EXO AGAIN TT_TT I LOVE U
RainaTB #34
I actually think it's cool all main characters died. It's a twist. Great ending!
Deewlici0us
#35
;-;
I have no words
That was... amazing
Even though they all died..
The fact that Kris did what Jungah wanted to do, and killed Liang, makes the ending a little less sad
*sob
Two thumbs up for this story, because I don't have more
*clapclap*
violetkecil
#36
I knew something like this could happen.. It's really great story and make me cry... all die T_T
that's why I don't like 'angst' but I read this story and I love it..
u'r my favourite author^^ waiting for your next story...
moongkeul
#37
SO SAD and yes it made me feel better lol
alwaysluvSS501
#38
Zicoooo, Jungahhhh.. And now, Kris.. Why??
jino138 #39
ohmygosh. THIS. IS. JUST. BEAUTIFUL. even though it's a freakin' tragedy, it's wonderful. the first tragedy fanfic i've ever read and read it until the very end.

i'm gonna wait for your next fanfic~
808_Appler
#40
Awwwwww somehow i knew this was going to happen TT-TT I LOVE YOUR STORIES
hunhanwhisper #41
WAT IS THIS ENDING I HATE THIS ANIBUGFIXEINEZFGUHMZDEFGNXDSZ
phaagyu
#42
oh my godd! :'(
I love it!!!! lol
BabyXingXing
#43
....EVERYONE DIED!!!!
Ahhhhhh !!
The gif made me a tiny bit better
iheartskpop
#44
*sniff sniff* they all died in the end! DX aigoo. love can be so tragic! but i love the story! ^^
coercion #45
OMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMGOMG. I KNEW IT.
WTH. :( THIS IS SOOOO SAD. :(
myungup
#46
That was a really good story!! <33 I love all of your stories omg <3
MrsLeeSungyeol
#47
Probably the saddest fanfic that you've written so far. I can't believe they all died >///<
Oh well. It was an amazing fic nevertheless. One of my absolute favorites<3
onejuni #48
you're amazing as always!^__^ but..... yeah stories don't always have happy endings..SAD. really sad...T__T welcome to hell,liang~ and the rest of the characters.:p
seelove
#49
I love this story!!! No matter how it's sad how Kris and Zico and Jungah all died I still loved it!!!!
TakenByZICO
#50
seeeee!!! i knew it would end like this~ usually I would've cried but because i kept telling myself they were all gonna die, i didn't cry~ :3
JDaleun #51
........they......all....died.....wtf
im not disappointed, but i am pissed
lindersaurous
#52
WAEEEEEEEEE??
SHINeesmaknae
#53
PURE SADNESS RN /sobs
I WAS EXPECTING JUNGAH AND KRIS TO SOMEHOW MAKE IT AND LIVE HAPPILY TOGETHER
I GUESS NOT
you should write a little oneshot about them all reunited in heaven xD
oh and what happened to Jaehyo & the rest of exo?
Amazing fic, glad i read it c:
nihichan #54
Oh my god I am crying, I swear reading this was like playing an amazing drama through my head, it was so full of great imagery! THANK YOU FOR THE GREAT READ <33
OnASnowyDay
#55
WAE THEY ALL DIE?
Aish, but the ending about bittersweet love is good <3
Nevertheless, you're still a great author!
HUHUHHUHU. I cried myself to sleep last night, remembering about Zico's and Jungah's death. And now Kris died too...
Gunna cry again. ;A;
Liang, that a! YOU DIE HAHAHA!
Angst stories make me feel great xD
I had so much fun following your updates! Thanks for writing and I will support all your new stories.
Jaehyo was freed and Block B in Korea will forever mourn their loss over their awesome leader, but will be one <3 I'll miss their annoying funny alecks to Jungah. Poor EXO-M. They're out of jobs and lost their leader, but they can live without being criminals forever. Fighting! ♡
Anyway, daebak unnie! Jjiang!
My last words~ : Bittersweet love is a better experience to have than to never be loved. Love will make you feel pain, but you do things for your love to get rid of pain. RIP Zico, Jungah, Kris
/Not for Liang/ >.<
baekhyuuns
#56
SOBBIIIINNNGGGGGGGG

brb I'll make a sensible comment once I've controlled my feels ;~;
Yuriey
#57
in the end all dies~ sad ending to a great story. i really enjoyed reading this!! two thumbs-up author-sshi~ another masterpiece ^__^
chicken_onew
#58
wahh... -clap clap clap- you're evil!! T~T
can't believe they all died... soo sad... :'[ -sigh-
but it's a good story. :] best author award goes to dbskgirl4ever~~ ehehe :]
PipTheTerror #59
If this wasn't so well-written, I swear I'd hate it :P
... But I don't like you right now :P

This is a great story though :D
I'm just a sap :P

- PiP.
phagirl #60
i knew it! Kris dies! hehehe lil but it rook me forever to actually get the guess right lol but wow...
eccentricity
#61
OMMMMMMGGG NOOOOOO ;~; Anyways, I really commend you on the ending. Many authors would have taken the safe and fluffy way out and let them all live and have a happy ending. You on the other hand, took a realistic view on it and really the only way for things to end is if they all died, it was inevitable. All in all this was a fantastic (baby~) story! I really can't wait for your next one~ Authour-nim HWAITING!!<3
spriiiiinkles #62
OHHHH MYYYY GODDDDD WHYYYYYYY
I can't believe that it's already over... I swear this is the best fic I've read so far. SO MANY FEELS, gahhh it's so sad, but so great a the same time. There were so many moments of hope, confusion, and plot twist, and just ughhh this fic was my life for the last month lol. Thank you so much for writing and updating, and keep up the good work!!! <3
seoul-o
#63
T.T Kris!!
HaryatulHarun
#64
Aww :/ i was shocked when i saw completed when i clicked this story, then eventually i know it's going to be a sad ending. Wufan, Jungah, Jiho, i guess they can rest in peace now cos Liang die. Anyway DAEBAK authornim, a good story never have to end with a happy ending, a good story is a story that can gives us so many emotions. So yeah '-- two thumbs up for the bittersweet deal
ilove2smile
#65
That was a great story..
So sad..
KianahSaurus #66
i wanna knw what happened to Block B and EXO without their leaders. great story! look forward to the next one(:
happyvirus_didi
#67
oh i forgot to say, hahahaha when i first saw the trailer for exo-m's going all out variety show, i think the part where kris winked at the camera would definitely be GIFed..n here i saw the GIF..yippeee!! kekekeke..TQVM!!
yoo-soul-a
#68
At least they are together in heaven!^^ Hehehehe
-ximini #69
This is the first time I read a fic where the main characters die.... Wow.
-boundless
#70
asdfghjkl;' /crying
this was such a wonderful story
but so sad T_T ugh, i so wanted a happy ending
but this was so beautiful, it's ok, hehe.. :$
kpopgirl123
#71
Omg, that was really wonderful!!! ^^
Not all stories have happy endings, and I like how yours doesn't always have happy endings lol
Maybe Kris and Jungah will meet in the afterlife?
And at least Liang died .____."
mizaki
#72
sobbing.
Ai_Hasu
#73
I am feeling so empty... What did you do to me author-nim ??! Why?! You're so cruel ;_; ...
svchen #74
At least Liang died ^^ Thank You for writing such a good story ! <3 :)
byungmyungie
#75
Haissss whyyyyyy. At last all died let me go one place a cry my lungs out...
MyloveisInfinite143
#76
Wow. They ALL died! U knew someone would die but not all three of them! Huhu. So sad. >< I loved it though!
Kouki_e
#77
well, since you killed all three, I'm okay with it. It's better than leaving Kris alone in the world :P lol

good job, as always!
abstruse-
#78
asddklgkfg; good story unnie c:
atleast kris got his revenge. <3
happyvirus_didi
#79
AAAAHH I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE THEY DIED...I FELT LIKE THIS WAS ALL MY DREAM... OMYGOSH THIS HAD ENDED ALREADY...I WANT MORE~~~~~xD
GREAT JOB AUTHOR-NIM!!!! THANK U SO MUCH!!! I LOVE U MUAAAHX <3

*sorry for the caps, i am jz too excited n sad at the same time.. :)
nabi_devi #80
going to go cry my eyes out in the corner now,
choizelo #81
What happened to the rest of EXO and Block B now w/o their leaders </3
kaiswifey
#82
THIS STORY WAS SO SAD.
hongbeann
#83
Omo! Kris died! I thought he would make it out alive.
Pretty #84
UGH. I JUST HAD TO FINISH READING IT. good story though. sad, but good. i love you author lady ._. <3 so much...i wish all you're stories could be put in one book. i'd buy it even for a million dollars ;n; <3 MOAR STORIES <3
byulan
#85
ah I predicted it but still it's so sad T.T the ending phrase was so well used! good job :)
Catherine
#86
I KNEW IT! THEY ALL DIED! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY?!
chocolateloverxD
#87
at least liang died too
and krease will reunite with jungah
oppajj
#88
wehhhhhh!sad story!!!! TT_____TT
LALULALIDO
#89
Heehee~ Now I can imagine them all meeting again in heaven. :D
jekyll #90
What a good story! I really didn't expect it to end so abruptly, but oh well!
:D Good job!
Chunnie12 #91
I cried so much T_____T
dbskgirl4ever
#92
Thank you for the support!!!
shineejelly
#93
I actually think killing off the characters was better than leaving just one alive

Amazing story! I really loved reading it ♥
I hope I see a new story from you soon ^^
Fighting!