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layhans
#1
OMG NO NO NO NO WHY IS EVERYONE DYING OMG NOOOOO D:
kaiswifey
#2
ASDSFKVFD WHY IS EVERYONE DYING.
Lovebias1806_
#3
Ohdamn! I was doing my hmwk for a few hours, I come back to read your fic and I find out Jungah died. Why :'( Poor kris :( please get revenge for Jungah. I don't usually say this but, please die and reunite with Jungah. The only way I'll be happy.
duckysoo
#4
NOO WHY MUST EVERYONE DIE T.T
/sobs
Sooyong #5
so Jungah is really dead. . .
i hope miracle happen. .
LauLau_Ahjumma
#6
...please dont let anymore people *cough* except liang and the baddies die T^T
exobuffaloes
#7
WHAT THE AUTHOR?!!!JUNGAH DIED?ARE YOU SERIOUS?!!AND NOW KRIS IS GOING TO DIE?!!!!!!!!!!ARH WHAT THE HECK IS THIS!!THIS IS NOT THE REALITY I WANTED
xhaira06
#8
i hate lay he's just plain stupid he's not even loyal to his own best friend...GO KRIS,LUHUAN and XUIMIN beat the hell out of that Liang bastard aish poor jungah i cried sooooo much....update soon T^T
-MyungYeol
#9
Jungah ;_;
I feel like a lesbo ..
beautiful_ineveryway
#10
JUNGAH'S DEAD?!
OMG
NO
but.
I saw it coming ._.
now Kris will die too.
WHAT KIND OF ENDING IS THIS, AUTHOR-NIM?!
NOOOOOOOO!
taemjjang #11
Revenge; it's such a scary thing.
daelight-
#12
What the--. JUNGAH IS REALLY DEAD?? Hjdshgs
flyylikejunhyungx
#13
omfg.. jungah too ;_______; THIS STORY IS SO SAD BUT SO AMAZING!
Key2UrHeart #14
Holy mother of shiiittt
muzikseoul
#15
this is the most saddest story you have ever written. it is a great story but a sad one, too.
too many people are dying. T.T
Don't let Kris, Xiumin and Luhan die.
shosha_km
#16
Nooo why did you kill jungah :(
TheAwesomeWise #17
I hope this is just a realllyyy long nightmare....
shellybelly123
#18
my heart was torn when Zico died, but now that Jungah died, my heart is shredded.... If Kris dies, my heart can't take no more and be thrown off a cliff, so it can be eaten by sharks. Too sad to handle!!! D':
chrlnntv
#19
it be happy ending for kris and jungah if they get reunited? lol. agree, if luhan dies.... idk how will i react... omg lulu.
shampoo
#20
GASSPPP! two chapters in row!? i can take it! But knowing jungah had really died??!! oh hell! that was toooo MUCH!!! adwaeee!!where is the love there!?

and NOW KRIS! is getting his revenge too!??? and then what?! ended up dying also?!! this is insanely ridiculous!! author-nim why you so meannie?!TT_TT

i sware if that happens i will never eat BITTERSWEET CHOCOLTE ever!! and damn! it was my favorite candy!!but eating eat now wants me to throw up!!! im sooo UPSET!and i hate this!!!TT_TT
JustDreamsAtNight #21
Are they all going to die? Noooooo!
HaryatulHarun
#22
Worse things coming.. Bad news.. I cried already, Kris probably die next.. :/ heartbroken..
lisakins
#23
ASDFGHJKL; WHY IS EVERYONE DYING?
I can't handle this! T.T







I don't mind if Liang dies though.
LightUpTheWorld #24
this story; omg, crazy tears ! ;_;
fatinnasrah
#25
. if Kris dies, i swear my eyes will be flooded.
JinAhh #26
what Jungah died...?! T.T
MissKay #27
she died? SHE DIED??!!! this is soooo...arghhh!!! im going to stop reading this ff
KeiraYukiLee
#28
Noooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYY?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! OHMYGAWD I swear to god THAT STUPID LIANG had better get hunted down by Kris!!!!!! My god, i hate him. He ruined so many ppl's lives...ASFHGKLEDAGJGNKL! Update soon~^^
huntergurl0212
#29
she did really die...i can't believe it...
will Kris die too?
can you still make a happy ending with the main characters dead and gone? *sobs*...

i still love you author-nim!!! you're still one of my favorite authors here in AFF!!!! <3
TingSi
#30
You have got to be kidding me, everyone's dying:/
Kill liang!:)
naddykinzz #31
You've. Got. To. Be. Kidding.
How are two of the major characters dead?!
AHH. This story is too sad. But so gooood.
EviLivE
#32
Wow.. really can't wait for the battle... kkkkk
bunnie01
#33
She died? :"(
niki_chan
#34
I STILL CAN'T BELIEVE JUNGAH DIED!
YES! LUHAN N XIUMIN ARE HELPING!
I THINK TAO IS GONNA HELP TOO :)
TingSi
#35
You have for to be kidding me, everyone's stunt :/
Kill liang!:)
tramnguyen
#36
OMG EVERYONE JUST GONNA DIE ><
StoriesWriter
#37
If Kris dies at the end, I swear... scratch that! I'm not good at swearing. If Luhan is safe and sound, I'll forgive you for killing Kris. *If Kris really dead in the end.*
shaqueela
#38
what jungah died....
Han-Eun
#39
what .. the main character died ? or kris is the main character? O.o Dont tell me in the end Kris has to fight with Lay ??! O.O
jinoishshosheksi
#40
the three better help them too!
HelluvaButlr
#41
OMG YESHHHH JAEHYO IS ALIVE AND YES LULU AND BAOZI ARE JOINING KRIS FOR REVENGE :3 :3 :3
happyvirus_didi
#42
i still can't accept jungah's dead.. kris's one n only love~~~ i felt like kris now, felt like i don't hv the will to live anymore... hu3.. ugh crying like crazy here in my room.. ugh this is so heart-wrenching..especially with the sad song accompanying this chapter.. TT__TT i'm so touched luhan n xiumin help too.. :')
i hope jungah's reincarnated or something so kris can be with her without dying too..>.<
-dreamcatcherx
#43
:3 oh my beautiful Exo are helping
Micky_Mellow
#44
Hmmm~ I wonder where the title fits into the plot? Is Kris going to make a deal or..? O.o
RawrYou
#45
Yey jaehyos still alive ;u; but omg kris sgcidgdit I feel so bad for him ;A;
batmaneatsrice
#46
DIE LIANG DIE!
kiiro-no-senko
#47
just kill all the main characters ;;;;;;;;; /depressed
Xalyx66
#48
Aight! Now where are the other 3 cause exo is ONE BABEEHH!!!
AncientWriting #49
WHY? Please don't let her die! Or Kris Or Luhan OR XUI MIN! :( Or ANYBODY I just want them safe and sound
B2stislove143
#50
Jungah's dead too?!?!?!
I swear this is the saddest story ever!
chicken_onew
#51
-smirks- this is for you jungah. >:]
you're dead , liang. get ready for your death.
etkm_11428
#52
HELLYEAH PAYBACK
glecy501
#53
She realy died!!!?zomg!!:((((this is so sad~~~~
Greend
#54
Noooo D:
lkw1995 #55
I hope the rest joins them. I really have faith in Lay and Chen.
b2uty4maknae
#56
>_< she really died..... Poor jaehyo and kris T_T kris hwaiting!!!!!!
Update soon!!
-bubblegum
#57
OTL WHERES MY BB TAO. GO HELP YOUR GEGE, YOU PANDA.
onejuni #58
why...?T_T
ohsehunfs #59
I cannot believe Jungah actually died. Is this reality or just a dream? Sobs crying so hard rn. I really really hope Kris make out alive /prays
ChristinaGrimmie #60
This story just got better, if that was even possible! God Dbskgirl4ever you rock! You're my biggest inspiration, my motivation, and my key to writing better stories. Thank you :D
taemjjang #61
T.T
hazie_inspirit
#62
I think Tao will help them in silent XD 'I hope'
and Lay also will help his best friend... poor KRIS.. his love dyinh in his arm like Zico dying in JUNGAH arm.
cuppxcake
#63
ASDFGHJKL *sobbing* Jungah can't die! D:
Lynnda
#64
Im crying... A lot i dont know what to feel tss...
baobeii_
#65
ASFKLJSDLKFGJDFGJ I STILL CAN'T GET OVER WITH JUNGAH DYING T^T I HOPE JAEHYO COULD GO BACK TO KOREA SAFELY. KRISSSSSSSS! KILL THAT LIANG!!!!! omg. i'm sorry for my capslock :3
anyuangoci #66
OH my GOOOOOD can't believe zico and jungah died :(((((((( i cried soo much, sooooo saad,
taesdong
#67
Everyone of us has to owe that long something user 50 bucks now......she called their deaths before we even had a clue
purplefreak #68
Kris, please come back to Korea and see Jungah for the last time if u live.
delikizzz #69
Omfg poor jungah. Poor kris. Well he saved jaehyo so yay for that. Omg xiumin and Luhan!! Chen and lay are idiots ugh! Also oh yeah time to kick some asses! Update soon. :)
MissJinJoo
#70
Now 'The oldest' (Kris,Luhan and Xiumin VS 'The youngers' (Lay,Chen and Tao)(plus Liang) >.<
EXO M,please get one and fight for your freedom instead!
rawrxnihao
#71
Author-nim why'd you kill Jungah off? ;________;
billiondollarbabyy #72
DAMMIT GO KRIS
peachcloud
#73
I don't want Kris to die :(
b2uty_inspirit_angel #74
I HAVE NOTHING TO SAY!
..................................................................
camsthemonster
#75
the title of this fic should be 'revenge' xD
lethargic #76
:~:
igotsanokcat
#77
Buahahaha everyone will die
ghxstly
#78
Holy sh-- GO KRIS!
Damn, Jungah died.
I was hoping she could at least live -.-
lyza0731
#79
i cant believe she really is dead now no happy ending for jungris
:((((
ryzella03
#80
Jungah died ! aaaaah
please dont let kris died too huhu
-sleepyhead
#81
NOO WHY THE K DID JUNGAH HAVE TO DIE!?! DON'T GET ME WRONG I LOVE THIS STORY, AUTHOR-NIM BUT WHY?? DDD:
dinowoobiasedftw
#82
But you are still loved ^^ and go get re-revenge KRIS!!!!!!
adee_k
#83
why are you making me cry so much?
panda_poke
#84
PLEASE DON'T KET KREEASE MY HUBBY LUHAN AND XIUMIN DIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE PLEEAAASEEE DON'T :(((
Lol u do update like a ninja :3
teddysayboo #85
I'm speechless .........
T________T
akodawsileni
#86
-void of emotions- Yeah...
shineejelly
#87
OTL this makes me want to sing Fiction:
"I will bury the fact that reality is seeping into my skin for now"

If kris dies, then Liang better die with him
hero18
#88
I can't believe that Jungah is actually dead T____T
I hope Kris and the others don't die.
Update soon Unnie :DD
TheThena412
#89
Oh snap. s 'bout to go down.
yoo-soul-a
#90
I think they are all going to die...
its-k0nsoul
#91
JAEHYO T____T !!! The main character died... Jungah!! = ^ = Hell yeah Kris, go take Liang down! :)
ainulhee
#92
still cant accept jungah is dead...... seriously! i cant accept...cos now jungah and kris can be together...please make kris die too....pnly that way they can be together....