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miruka #1
Chapter 77: Omg ㅜㅜ what should I say.. this is one of the best I ever read!!! The plot and characters are developed greatly. Author-nim waeeee ㅜㅜㅜㅜ now what about jaehyo ㅜㅜㅜ I teared in shock knowing his truth ㅜㅜ I stupidly spoiled myself by accidentally scrolling thru comments aaaa this bittersweet ending ㅜㅜ thank you for the great story author-nim, like zico, you are jjang!!
mishhinggyuu
#2
Chapter 77: I can't believe you killed off all three characters... Crying and now I'm reading another one of your stories. Plz don't kill of anymore people or at least save the good peopleeee. I like your work though so don't get negative lol. :)
xX-I_Rove_Ricee-Xx #3
Chapter 77: Not to be creepy or anything but I LOVE U AUTHOR NIM !! haha xD i love ALL your stories and this fanfic is on my top 10 list <3 i love the way you write , usually your stories make me cry or laugh or both xD and the stories you write are never boring ; keep up the great work author nim CC; haha omg im still crying why do they all have to die TT^TT <//3
ch3nya #4
Chapter 77: Even though this story was the one that made me cry the most i freakin love it! Ohmuhgosh it was a freakin amazing story! Oh gosh i'm still crying
emptyvoid
#5
Chapter 77: OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGG! ALL OF THEM ARE DEAD T_T
but...this plot is absolutely amazing.
and tbh i don't even know anything about block b but the plot is just so oijgiaojg thanks for making this story ><
AppleAnt #6
Chapter 77: What a sad ending....but I still love this fic very much!!!
jcx305 #7
Chapter 77: this was really sad, but i really liked it.
-misshellopanda #8
Chapter 77: Yeahh. Love is bitter and sweet. you make me learn something meaningful in this story. I love this story. I like how you make your story different than others and admire how you arrange your plots perfectly. Continue your great work! hehe
xxRizuixx
#9
Chapter 77: I loved it . It was different than any other fanfic . Because of this I admire your work so much for writing a tragic story with an unexpected ending which threw most of us off yet in a way you made the saddest ending the best . I'm not very fond of gang stories but this is an exception .
MsStealYourOppa
#10
Chapter 77: the last chapters had me in tears
This was such a sad fanfic, but it was so perfect
jellar #11
Chapter 77: Oh My God~I only can say this.
Oh my tears are falling..So poor ...
I never read a sad fanfic before but this fanfic is really touch... ><
* Baby Don't Cry Tonight *I should listen Exo song ....
Catherine0303 #12
Chapter 77: why why why did they all have to die ??? </3 Kris my poor baby :(
hongdous
#13
Chapter 77: This so good I'm tearin up. T____T I loved the ending!
tariluvsjotwins #14
Chapter 77: Kris!!! No!!!!!!!!!!!(!!(
*heartbroken......very heartbroken..

""Best story evA!!
GcielrooD
#15
Chapter 25: I'm starting to re-read this story all over again. and I dont get bored.

I told you..this is the best story I've ever read in AFF. trust me. even I'm not kris hardcore. but this Amazing story make me love him more..
tariluvsjotwins #16
Chapter 26: i really feel like smacking the living shiz out of Zico right now!!! just confess already....gaaaawwwd!!
idol-obsession
#17
Chapter 77: This is so freaking amazing. I'm glad you didn't write a cliche ending and this is just beyond perfect. It's so sad but so beautifully written. So many plot twists<3 I wish you had mentions block b though at the end...
TheOfficialDork
#18
Chapter 77: Amazing. Absolutely brilliant. The drama in this fic was too good .. such great plot twists as well. I mean, the cold Jaehyo as Jungah's biological brother ? lol. Dang.
I'm glad it wasn't like most fics where the characters magically come to live & usually there's a happy ending or some . This fic really tears at your feels. ;c I don't think I was the only one that cried. You're an amazing author. I can't wait to read the fics you come up with.

All in all, this whole fan fiction itself was bittersweet. Author-nim, jjang ! ~
pUrplenErd #19
Chapter 77: Omg! This fic has so many emotions, feelings and love <3
GcielrooD
#20
Omg!!! This is
the best story I
ever read..
minchoiho #21
Chapter 77: One of the best stories i've ever read.
Acctually i don't really like sad ending,probably bcs i usually read happy ending stories...
But this one is amazing!!so dirrefent from others..this fic made me laughed,blushed (bcs of kris ofc),cried..
You really wrote an amazing story!! Thank you for wrote this dtory ;;
KaiBaekhyunLoverr #22
Chapter 77: Oh. My. Effing. God..... <3333333333
KaiBaekhyunLoverr #23
Chapter 70: Oh my goodness... do you realize... omg I just cried. No joke I bawled my eyes out. I sound like a pathetic loser but I was crying so hard because of this chapter. Oh my effing god. How could you let zico die like that!? WHYYYY (trying to say you're an amazing author and writer who personally touches your readers' feelings and emotions. Omg)
allorysayshi
#24
Chapter 77: This story......SO MANY FEEEEEEELLLLLSSSSSS </3
Kpopfreak12 #25
Chapter 77: This is sooo depressing and i just cantttt :'(
allorysayshi
#26
Chapter 14: Ermahgerd, this chapter is like foreshadowing the story, if by reading some of the comments my presumptions are correct...... D; ....
iwantchange-o
#27
Chapter 77: This was such a great story, I didn't expect anyone to die though. T-T
nami1298 #28
Chapter 77: Can't explain good job
Nyu_96
#29
Chapter 77: I swear I never cry while reading. But ... I just cried and I'm crying now. I read you story in a few days. It was beautiful. It is beautiful. I don't even know what to say. Your story just show how life could be unfair, just how life actually is. I'm feeling like I learnt something with your story, it's just like I learned how death can be awful and unbearable. I never thought of death with that way. It was like it was me who were dying ... Three times. Your story really add something on me, I don't exactly know what but it's sure. Just thank you for this story, it was awful. Unbearable. But beautiful. Thanks.
PearlxXxRen #30
Chapter 77: TT^TT ........
andreaylen #31
Chapter 77: Its sad ending....make me cry...
baddest_female98 #32
Chapter 77: Omg I've been so into this fic and It's like I've known the characters all my life.
I have never EVER cried SO bad because of a fanfic, really. I got so into this and I can't believe it I can't stop crying,so depressive. But it's one of the BEST fics I've read. Really goood job! <3
mandyxcarrot
#33
Chapter 12: Botox lips..
Brb, dying.
Rosethederp #34
Chapter 77: I stayed up the whole night finishing this story. It is now 4 in the morning where I am. I read straight day and night. I cried so much. Amazing story. Any author that can make their reader cry is just awesome.
idol-obsession
#35
Hahah never read the comments before reading a story. the entire ending was ruined for me before I could even finish reading the foreword...but I can't wait to read this during my long car ride to Florida...
haewifey
#36
Chapter 77: WAEYOOOOOOOOOO T_T Can u make another happy ending? It would be wonderful! but author-nim I LOVE THIS STORY SOOOOOO MUCH!
Exoticelf1215
#37
Chapter 77: OMG..... I'm crying so much right now... I don't think I'll stop... This is like one of the best stories I've ever read... Thanks you..
Wanying
#38
Chapter 77: .... I feel like crying.... So sad....
yougetmeoppa
#39
After reading this, I wonder...why didn't Jungah and them just call the cops?? Better to be in jail than dead! :P
Mistyluvkpop
#40
Chapter 77: NOOOOOO! Oh my gosh, I'm a sobbing mess right now! Why'd you have to go and die! But other than that super sad ending, this story was so beautifully written, and it's so amazing!
Puppyluv
#41
Chapter 77: omg authornim!!!! dz ws 1 f da best stories ever!!!!! i cnt believe dt i cried readn a story..... bt dz story ws worth it... well written i must sy.... jst a suggestion, t wud b nyc if u cud write a sequel and make a story abt their nxt lyf n hv a happy ending... im running high on my imagination kekeke... t ws jst thought... hope ul thnk abt t... cz i rly loved dz story n al da characters... ^_^
gangstaeri
#42
Chapter 77: OMG ASDFGHJKL *sob*
KRIS JUNGAH ZICO PABO YAAAAAAAAAAA author why....

Even though this such a sad story, I really enjoyed reading this. I don't like reading angst, but yeah thanks to Kris, I become interested reading this when I saw him at the poster ^^

I swear I don't regret reading this, you're awesome authornim T.T
You made me screamin with happiness when Kris confessed to Jungah and their sweet moments. Buy you also made me sobbing at midnight~ I had mixed feelings T.T

GREAT AUTHOR AWESOME AMAZING OMG *sobs*
unknowntalent
#43
Wonderful story, it made me feel so many emotions all at once.
MissUnderstand
#44
Chapter 77: Wow!! Beautiful ending!!!
rasikasdil
#45
Chapter 77: Author sure it was a sad story. believe me, But i enjoyed it so much. It's one of best story i ever read. .........................
epicookies #46
This is probably one of the best stories I have ever read. Even though I love the main characters, it really makes the story a whole lot better when it isn't a happy ending full of butterflies and candy. Unfortunately, I read the goddamn comments before reading it. Bad idea. Anyhow, this story, along with 'Leave Us to Fate' made be sob like there's no tomorrow. And I generally rarely cry in stories.

I really love how it has such a dark theme, with drugs and gangs, and actually making it seem realistic unlike pretty much 99% of fics out there that are about 'gangs' but no one does anything. = _ = I love the twisted loveline, and the whole complicated family business just to top it all off.

Definitely an amazing fic. I read it all in one go and now I have no idea what to do. I want to re-read it, but at the same time I want to savour my feels right now. ;;;

Sorry for spamming the comments with this ultra ling message, but I just really enjoyed this story a lot, especially when finding such similar themed stories is such a rarity.
Hunhanmybiasotp
#47
Chapter 77: WAE DID YOU KILL THE THREE PABOS OMG ;;>.<;; /ugly sobs/

PABO ZICO
PABO JUNGAH
PABO KRIS

UGH I CAN'T EVEN---

BUT SERIOUSLY THANKS FOR THIS FIC IT'S TOO GOOD TO BE HATED THUS I FORGIVE YOUR CRIME OF KILLING THEM ;) KAMSAHAMNIDA AUTHOR-NIM, FIGHTING. THIS WAS ONE HELL OF A ANGST
eljo2311
#48
Chapter 77: You killed them /ugly sobbing in the corner/
b2uty4ever #49
Chapter 77: This was an amazing story, just amazing. I normally cannot bring myself to read angst because its so frustrating, but this is definitely something that I don't regret reading.
alyssameows
#50
Chapter 77: This is the only story that I read that the authornim decide to kill all the main characters... *sobs*
But this story is freaking good... T~T
nasomi2011 #51
Chapter 77: Too sad to comprehend... Thank you for writing such a wonderful story! I look forward to your updates for "A Brother's Vow." :)
taemtachun
#52
Chapter 77: i just finished this story and WHY THE HELL U KILL THE MAIN CHARACTERS???? oh sorry i hate u for killing Zico Jungah and Kris authornim.
but ur story is too good to be hated :'(
i thought the 'angst' tag is just for Kris OR Zico dead, not THREE OF THEM. aigooo... I cant help but to fell bad for three of them.
i love u for make such a great and unexpected story. u always be in my favourite author list.
Kpop4meyoonie #53
Chapter 77: Did you know that your the first author that made me cry reading a fanfic? You amazing please make a sequel or something please ...
kellymarshmallow #54
Chapter 77: This was such a good fic!!!!
I'm sad that all three of the main characters died. :'( I really thought Kris and Jungah were gonna end up getting married
I wonder what happened to Jaehyo and Block B.
I hope you can add a special chapter about what happened Block B and Jaehyo after the funeral .... :)
FaizNurSofia #55
Chapter 77: yeah .. What happen to block b ? what if you make a sequel about them ? hehehe
Mintytoothpaste
#56
Ahhh~~~ my heart hurts! I hope my bby Kris and Jungah are happily together in a better place (: This was so beautiful author-nim... But I kind of wonder what happened to Jaehyo and the rest of Block B..? (:
KeiStoneminds
#57
I never thought that all of them would die. I'm glad I was able to read this story. It's awesome TT_TT
I cried a lot and ugh- TT_TT Be happy with Jungah on the other side.
namnamangel
#58
Chapter 77: this is amazing. wuah.
Joslynxo #59
Chapter 77: I really really love your story. It's one of the best! But I hated how jungah and kris never got to live their happy ending till the end. It's so heartbreaking that its a sad ending. Was really hoping them to stay together at the end. Nevertheless , I love your story. Keep up the good work! :)
ForeverThinkinOfFood #60
Chapter 77: Wooow...just wooow!!! I never have read an awesome and badass story like this!!!! My gosh your writing skills is just AMAZING!!! hell yeah i liked this story
Man but i have NEVER thought 3!!! persons would die in the end
johnnyrockets
#61
Chapter 77: Why did they all have to die?! GODDAMNIT!
I thought Jungah and Kris were gonna have a happily ever after.
Aish, jinjja!

LOL sorry author-nim, didn't mean to bash you. This story just made me into a really emotional person.
Oh gawd, my Krease feels ;_;
frostysnowprincess #62
Chapter 77: You want me to cry you a river?! THERE. I'LL CRY YOU A RIVER.
hiimbr
#63
Chapter 77: OMG!! My mom asked me why is the tissues gone.. and I just point to my laptop and said "because this author is so effin awesome. and write this superb story. how can't I cry?" and my mom answered 'aah'


OMG. sorry for the little convo.. haha. OMG. your so good damn.
VivianOwO
#64
Chapter 77: I really enjoyed reading this fan fic. It was nice reading a fan fic where the OC wasn't "innocent" and instead was badass xD
VivianOwO
#65
Chapter 70: Omg I have never cried so much while reading a fan fic. Im like crying rivers right now ;-;
harachan
#66
Chapter 77: I couldn't stop crying when zico died ㅠ_ㅠ btw love your story author-nim~ c:
JiYoon #67
Chapter 77: Keep going with those indescribable fanfics of yours like this one!!!
ren1234
#68
Chapter 77: omg i cried so hard when zico died like really ahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
this is daebak omgggggg
sad ending but oh well is there a sequel?
ChocolateChipCookies
#69
Chapter 77: Oh my God the 3 died T-T /sobs/ daebak authornim but its a sad ending T.T
Otl but I cried when it was Zico's death /sobs the han river/
EvileSmirk
#70
Chapter 77: I CRIEEEDDDD A LOT OH MY GOD T____T Zico then jungah then KRIS that's sooooo sad !! But I loved the story it's AWESOME LIKE AMAZING !! <333
TRE-TRE
#71
On to your next story XD Should be studying but your stories are just so good! ^^
LatifaKim #72
Chapter 77: AWESOME!!!!
lilo_lili #73
Chapter 77: I love your stories ! :')
The sad ending.... *sobs*
It's a great story, love you <3
myung-soopermaan
#74
that was amazing :')
liurinyu
#75
Chapter 51: it's sweet ;))
bittersweet9 #76
Chapter 77: Awesome story!! But I can't help but feel that the ending is quite sudden and abrupt. But it's okay! It's still a great story overall! Good job!
Floqkpop #77
Chapter 77: OMG THIS STORY WAS AMAZING!!!! Holy crap cakes, you are an amazing author, this story had a bitter ending, but that was one of the things that made this story great :)
tteokbokki5
#78
Chapter 70: ZICOOOO :"( *SOBS*
candylights
#79
Chapter 77: This is such a bitter an numb ending...
gabbalicious97
#80
Chapter 77: :O this was deep! It was so sad...such a beautiful love story
liurinyu
#81
Chapter 77: i love this story so much...
Rorokhj
#82
Chapter 77: OMG! I love your stories ... The high school sweet romantic love stories were killing me , not bashing them or anything. Just that I really needed some drama and THANK YOU FOR GIVING THE BEST DRAMA TO ME! You're the best author I've come to know until now ^^ keep up the great work ... Love you<3
FreakyMinnie
#83
Chapter 77: The story is awesome, yet sad at the same time.
love sure is bitter and sweet.
LunaVenture #84
Chapter 77: Thank you for writing this beautiful love story. One of the best story I've ever read in my life.
Whitefall #85
Chapter 1: Hot shower scene >///<
SHINee_SHAWOL98
#86
Chapter 77: This is freaking depressing . HOW COULD YOU ?! OMG . Honestly , I've read half of this story a long time ago , but i never finished it . WORST DECISION EVER . This is an absolute masterpiece . Period . The ending is so asdfghjkl;; *I need more tissues .
ClarissaChoi
#87
Chapter 77: ohhh God, the ending is soooo sad :( I lost my appetite, my mind turns blank. Anyway you are amazing author-nim I LOVE YOU !!
ClarissaChoi
#88
Chapter 75: ohh God I can'tttt T____________T
ClarissaChoi
#89
Chapter 70: I'm officially broken T_T
angartiko #90
Chapter 19: kris typing speedily?? its so NOT kris! LOL!
ClarissaChoi
#91
Chapter 41: freaking hate that promise, it's not fairrrrrrrr *whining*
ClarissaChoi
#92
Chapter 40: I hate that promise so much! I think Jungah's mother is so selfish, they were in love and she has no right to tear them apart :(
ClarissaChoi
#93
Chapter 38: reading it for the second time and still love it as much as I did. this chappie is soooo sweet <3
PalmyKitty99 #94
Chapter 77: But what happened to the rest if Block B and Exo-M?
PalmyKitty99 #95
Chapter 77: This was my second time reading this after almost a year and I swore not to cry this time, but I couldn't help it!! It was too sad, even though it was really good!!