Since she doesn't know how a guy thinks, Yooae turned to her brother to get some answers out of him. It doesn't seem likely that Myungsoo is gay, so him having a girlfriend or having his heart set on only one girl does make sense. If he is actually gay, that would be a big surprise to her. xD It would be funny to see her have that kind of impression of him when she sees him having skinship with a guy (like Woohyun, for example). Maybe the thing that Airi wants to tell Yooae as soon as she returns from her week-long vacation is the secret that she's kept hidden from her for a while: her forbidden relationship with a certain someone. Unlike the rest in the gang that he hang with, Myungsoo is corteous to step in to pick up the trash that he and his crew loitered in the school hallway. Because he's different from them, it doesn't make sense for him to be hanging around people like that. It's possible that he sticks with them so that he won't have to be alone just so he can have friends by his side. So, he did the things that they do to try to fit in with and be accepted by them. This is the influence of peer pressure. Although Woohyun seems to be acting like a player in her eyes, he's actually being friendly. He must be trying to look cute by turning on his charm, which is what he does whenever there are girls within his presence. There's a way of him giving back the cellphone to Yooae since he knows Myungsoo. They're bound to meet again at the school festival.
I was under the impression that Myungsoo and his rowdy crowd were the same; arrogant, rude, and complete s.
* It should be a colon instead of a semicolon since you're listing the characteristics.
Out of the corner of the eye, I spotted Myungsoo clumsily scooping up a few pieces of crumpled papers and dumping them into the trashcan.
Correction: Out of the corner of my eye, I spotted Myungsoo clumsily scooping up a few pieces of crumpled paper and dumping them into the trash can.
I whispered, then briefly pausing.
Correction: paused
Something shiny on the floor caught his eye, as he bent over to pick it up.
* Uinnecessary comma
He turned over the cellphone, inspecting the sticker on the back.
Correction: He turned over the cellphone and inspected the sticker on the back.
Woohyun pocketed the cellphone, chuckling to himself before walking away.
Correction: Woohyun pocketed the cellphone and chuckled to himself before walking away.
I seriously like this story. Myungsoo, thick-headed! It makes me smile as I can picture such a clueless, bumbling dolt. I love your relaxed yet smooth style of writing; it's very fitting for the tone of the tale. The prose is well balanced with meaningful descriptions that supplement, not drown out, the story.
Eeeeeeeeeee yaaaaaay!!!!
An update!!!
And it's Soooo good!!!
Thankyouu for updating unnie ;)
Ahh my cute L!! Lol & now Namstar's going to pop up !! Woooo ~
unnie, fighting!
Yayy, Woohyun made his grand entrance :D
I can't wait for the next update, to be honest.
I have NO idea what's going to come next =3
Which, is a good thing ;) <-- player's doing xD
I feel like Airi is dating Taemin or something o.O
And I really hope Myungsoo does not really like Airi too >_<
and Airi better not be the antagonist XD
I love the flow of the story, you have a great writing style and I'm happy to see people using punctuation correctly. <3 please update as soon as possible! ^^
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