Chapter 17: I remebered Pd101 days, when Daehwi received so much hate. I want to hug him tight and protect this little sunshine. :(
Random conversation from Ong still made me laugh. Hey! Be considerate to maknae line!
About Taejoon and Daehwi's story, well actually my heart gets soft to Taejoon. I mean, his love for Daehwi was genuine yet full of greediness. If you love them, let them go. That's what they say. (Hayaan mo sila na maghabol sayo HAHAHAHA)
All in all, this chapter was so deep and emotional and magical. Like Daehwi and Jinyoung was in a fairytale with magic dust can be seen everywhere haha.
I'm so excited about Chaerin's appearance! (I imagined her as Sejeong like she was smirking inside and planning to wreck Ongniel's relationship) I'm anticipating!~
Chapter 17: i..love..how..you..write..the...chapters..longgggg!!!
but then again it spent me a long time to read it as lately my eyes are playing tricks on me...
i guess i stare at screen for to long since it was also what i did for 8 hours work at office...
i should have renew my glasses or should reduce the time consuming in front of the screen...
but i cant help myself from fangirling~~~~ either watching videos or reading fanfics...
kekekekekek
i also love the way you give explanation on each chapter... it's like you communicate more with your readers. i like it.
i like that Yuejun character.. she's chic...and she's heart-strucked by woojin...
woojin is indeed awesome... i love how you develope 2park friendship here...
all in alll, i love how you tell the story..
keep fighting, girl..
and keep your health too... health is important after all :)
Chapter 17: I'm not sure if i'm missing something, but the last chapter about jinhwi was when daehwi was mad after winkdeep interview gone viral, then jinyoung fighting taejoon, then go haechan somehow kidnap daehwi..so I guess there's missing links? Or I didn't read other chapters properly?
P.s. I like to comment more but my eyes are already threatening me to get blurry so I guess i'd turn the phone screen now and continue later...
Chapter 17: Lots of interesting things I liked about this chapter.
One, finally Jinyoung confessed! Waiting for that for what feels like years somehow? haha. He did it in such a sweet way. Ah, I love that he's almost as deep, philosophical, and romantic as Daehwi himself. They are really a perfect couple in this story and in real life, I totally picture it. They are so darn shippable. Two, Jinyoung's jealousy. That made me smile and laugh throughout the entire story. Surprised and proud that he kissed Dae in front of everyone(lol Seongwoo proud father~ corrupting everyone, huh? Aigoo, my baby). Three, TJ is an enigma. I actually feel sorry for him and really curious(grr this stupid, complicated, evil family of Seongwoo's never going to see the end of it I guess). I think that he did honestly love Dae and something had changed him along the way. It was good to see their interactions in the past, I was really wondering how they could have possibly been friends, you know? It makes sense if he was a totally different person. I know a part of it was jealousy and pain but then another part of it seems to be his secrets, what could they be? Four, the biotch of the century is here yessss. She's saying she's a fan of Daniel? Oh boy, I can picture Seongwoo sharpening knives already. Excited for Seongwoo and this evil girl's interactions.
Last, but not least, SEONGWOO AND DANIEL DIDN'T DENY THE BOYFRIEND COMMENT WHAT'S UP WITH THAT. Love how Daniel is curious about trying new positions with Seongwoo. You're teasing me, Lilica, stop T.T You know how much I look forward to Ongniel's chapters and it's been getting close to two months now? Wow, I miss them...
I understand about your health and your family trip. Sometimes life just gets in the way and things happen. It's alright. I hope that you will be able to complete this story this year. You deciding to cut it shorter because you're tired of writing or worried about getting busy later? Well, I'm sure that if you write long chapters you can put it all together. Good luck, fighting, don't be sick anymore!
Chapter 17: OH MY GOSH BAE JINYOUNG FINALLY CONFESSED I SCREAMED OMG
I really love this chapter,from flashbacks to present time,it gave me a flash of Hwi‘s life before he transferred,like,how lonely he was.And also about Taejoon and him! I was relieved when everything was stretched out and they talked out their closure,I really hope Taejoon is sincere this time around.
AND YAAAS I screamed when Jinyoung kissed Daehwi in front of the members! I also didn’t miss that MinHwan content hahahaa I squinted for that ;)
I have a question though...when Jinyoung said sorry and Daehwi kissed him...did something happen to them after?(okay sorry for this question but I‘m intrigued cause Jinyoung locked the door lmao)
And finally! FINALLY Bae Jinyoung confessed! I‘m so happy and I‘m squealing soundlessly rn cause other people in the house are asleep hahahahaaha I love the confession scene though!
AND OH MY FREAKING GOSH CHAERIN IS ALREADY INTRODUCED OH MY GOSH MY BLOOD IS BOILING
This is by far,my most favorite chapter! And also I missed you <3
Take care of your health first! And also thanks for the update! :)
PS.Sorry for the very long comment,my feels are just bursting rn hahahaha
Chapter 16: Hoping to see that "Billionaire hot daddy concept" of Ong. I think I will choke myself if he did that such thing. And I like that "Twice concept" idea too. (Rest in peace, holy trinity of masculine charm)
Oh my ghwaaad, that Seonho's byeongari dance makes me laugh so hard. (I imagined Minhyun palming his face for nth time, and his twin chick Guanlin released his gummy smile lmao)
I love the new ship too! Jihoon and food. He's so adorable I swear.
And my sweetie Ong~ when will you change your random dirty thoughts? (No, don't you dare change it)
Come here Woojin-ah. Let's break your eleventh-wheel streak and get married. Hahaha
And speaking of married, the fact that Guanlin is the maknae but he's going married first and his hyungs was shocked at the moment makes me amused haha (Honestly speaking, I imagined Kyulkyung as Zhang Yuejun, and hey, I ship some Wanna One members with I.O.I hehe) I really like how Yuejun gets in to Guanlin's life. It makes the story more interesting!
That Panwink moment on the Lantern festival was so magical. Oh all creatures above, every ship was sailing smoothly keep it up
The last thing I liked in this chapter, the plot twist in the ending! (No more detailed stuffs here, I want others to get surprised too hehe) I must say that, wishing you all the best Woojinie~
Wow this comment of mine is longer than I thought, that's it! Keep writing authornim~ Looking forward for more updates and exciting scenes :D
Chapter 16: Panwink moment in the lantern festival is so sweet and romantiiicccc. I love, love, love it soooooo muccchhh :'D I kinda speechless at how beautiful, romantic, sad, yet fascinating scene in this. This scene is full with all emotional feelings and I love it all, panwink's true love can't be clear than this :'D and wow, so Yuejon came to Korea not for Kuanlin but instead for Woojin? I seriously love this surprise lilica, because Yuejun won't bother panwink and instead they all will get a new family member and woojin will get a girlfriend! What a perfect solution for everyone! Wait how about Wooseok? Ah but you can pair that hot y bodyguard with me, i don't mind at all XD Thank you for the sweet and beautiful panwink chapter! I love it so much lilica hehehe, and get well soon my friend, see you on the next chapter ^^
Chapter 16: Uuuuuuwww I love the interaction with Nuest W and Minhyunnn, gosshh I missed them so mucccchh :'D Okay so when the Yuejun girl came out I kinda worried with my panwink ship and my head is seriously fulled with all bad scenes that she might did to Jihoon like in drama XD but then, glad that you prove me wrong lilica. But the funny things is why i feel some strange dynamic but funny relationship between Kuanlin, Jihoon, Wooseok, and Yuejun? Like four of them is naturally funny and you can even make a sitcom ahahahhaha.
Chapter 16: Lilica how are you my dear friend? Hope ur getting better and i'm sorry too for the late comment T^T From the start i love how Jinyoung and Jihoon talk. It's seriously like a talk between bestfriend hahahha I also love the talk between the members, it feels so real and just so like their character. Byeongari reunion is so cute hehehhehhe, what kind of exotic overseas seonho? gosh this chick is soooo cutee. And my baby winkboyyyyy ahahhaha he is so brutal when it comes about food. And LILICAAAAAAAAAAA, Kuanlin kissing Jihoon's cheek to clean the chocolate will be the death of meeeeeee!!! You don't know how i'm smiling like a fool hereeeeeee. Gosh my heart, my heart, need to prepare my heart for thisss.
Chapter 16: Lilica author-nimmm! Happy new year and i'm really sorry for the late comment :') I miss you so mucchh how are you lilica? And wait i will give my comment after this!
Chapter 16: Sorry it took me a really long time to read this chapter for some reason. I got sick last night and I was in and out of the bathroom ugh. Then I have been at a new year's cruise and celebration but it turned out really lame until we saw fireworks at the beach of our resort. I hope you have a fun New year's. There's hardly anything going on in this country but Japan should have something. But maybe you're not a partier like me, now I am too old to stay out all night dancing plus feeling sick and it's raining here so totally kills my mood. Not that I ever cared much for New year's as a Holiday anyway. Pesky to remember to change the year when writing dates.
About this chapter, I really was so excited when we got to the date.but it wasn't able to go fully the way I wanted it because of that girl. I love what you did with her name. That was my Chinese name in Chinese class. I am glad that she was a really chill girl and I actually thought she was Woojin's admirer somewhere along the way but I figured we would learn about it later.
The highlight was definitely the kiss, never expected shy Jihoon would initiate it. I guess he's fully realized and accepted his feelings. So proud of him then, he came a long way in a rather short time we'll in comparison to Ongniel.
I loved the bits and pieces of other couples and their friendly interactions. Excited to hear they will all do Boys in Luv. Actually I think Ongniel would kill me if I ever saw them doing that. Though this chapter didn't have enough Ong for my tastes which probably made it feel heavier because less comic relief. I appreciate how deep and sweet Kuanlin is. I rather enjoy his POV more than Jihoon's he does really seem more mature than his age suggests. And I love seeing moments with them because I am really convinced they are real these days. All the flirting, whispers,bottom taps, and them sleeping together in zero base ahhhh.wish i could get another moment where Ongniel sleeps together on camera though they have probs fallen asleep on each others beds whike talking or watching something.
Glad you have overcome writer's block. Have a happy new year! Pray its better than 2017 was and lots of great things happen for our fav group
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