Chapter 9: O M G
I'm really sorry, this is prolly the first time I wrote a comment and it will be short because too!!! much!!!!!! feelings!!!!!!!!!!!!!! aaaah I NEVER EXPECTED FOR ONGNIEL TO HAVE THIS DRAMATIC PLOT SJHDHDJSJHDH I NEED TO REREAD I NEED A MOMENT
Chapter 8: This chapter was amazing. I love this style too. Great preview next week for my babies coming back. Totally loved that marriage comment haha keep sticking in some ongniel comic relief here and there, it really makes the chapters more dynamic and enjoyable!
I feel so bad for Jinyoung even more. He's been in love and in pain for so long because of clueless Jihoon. How hard it must be to see him crushing right in front of him on other people. I love this supernatural psychic sense ability he has. Tells us a lot about everyone, but i wish he could have read Daehi's mind because he's so sweet and caring and totally smitten and i wish Jinyoung would know so his insecurities and unhappiness will fly away. I was really happy Dae confesses and they're moving fast, i was hoping for that for these two. Not so much the other two. Dae has loved Jin for a long time and Jin has been suffering loneliness, jealousy and a kind of broken heart for years. These two deserve to be happy right away. Good to see Dae is Jin's style from the get go, clearly they're attracted and have great chemistry. Super sweet and fluffy in a very natural kind of way.
My fav part was the kissing. Gahhh so cute! And Jin initiated it out of the blue cuz Dae is so pretty. Love that tidbit!
Thanks for the awesome chapter. I see your subs are going up. I hope you're getting confidence as the nice comments come pooring in. Your diction is amazing, I love your writing style and vocabulary/idiom usage!
Chapter 8: oh my ing god alskcjakbdkahdkabdakbd I didn't get a chance to comment before bcs I forgot lol sorry. ANYWAYS THIS IS SO GOOD!!!!!!! I'm looking forward for the next chap!
Chapter 8: ! This chapter is perfect ! It's practically oozing of creative ambrosia ♡ i loved every bit of lee daewhi i cryyy ~☆ ongniel's chemistry has transcended science tbh, the pair basically screams 50 shades :D looking forward tp the next chapter!
Chapter 8: At some point i pity Jinyoung, this little guy seriously has a lot of insecurities, but daehwi, I swear he's like an angel. He not only push jinyoung, but he will be there to catch jinyoung when he fall either. Daehwi has a big role in Jinyoung in here, and this is really touching :') Gosh you make me falling in love even more and more to Daehwi! XD I can sense a lot of feels in here and i love it so much, you bring balance between feels, fluff, romance, and comedy as well. And you bring jinhwi relationship to a very new level and i seriously love and adore it! I love pentagon too!! Their songs are amazing! I already suspected that but i didn't know it's hui for real XP Ongniel is very cute and full of humour, while panwinkk gosshhhh, you really can't hate kuanlin in this story, he is too adorable! Thank you for updating new chapter, you don't know how happy i am everytime i found ur new update =D
Chapter 7: AMAZING chapter and my panwink, I really hope guanlin start Realizing his feeling for jihoon, I mean he does , but like start Expressing and Accepting it a bit more, Btw I loved ongniel way too much , sungwoo is so flirty and blushing daniel I can IMAGINE ITTT!! Poor daehwi and jinyoung , :( , great chapter Keep up the good work !!! Fighting
Chapter 7: This chapter was amazing! So many different KY couple moments and it was really funny, fluffy and full of wanna one bromance. Of course my comedy duo biases cracked me up the most. But this was mostly about Jinyoung and Jihoon i felt. I hope they make up soon. Seriously Jihoon is frustrating in this story but in a funny, necessary for the plot to be drawn out kind of way. He's clueless about everything, from himself to all that other people are feeling around him. How can he really not get Jinyoung or that he himself is crushing on Kwanlin hard and he's jealous. Ugh he'd so clueless and dense. But such a nice, sweet guy at the same time you just find that adorable. I loved panwinks interaction in the beginning. Especially laughed at the Jihoon dog comments. My favorite part is when arrogant bratty Ong showed his awesome skills and Daniel was clearly into it, oh and their jokes about kissing each other and what not. Ah i love ongniel so much in this story hehe. Great chapter! I'm excited for the next! I wasn't thinking you would have all eleven eventually interacting with each other and possibly debuting together (i thought Jisung and Minhyun were def out). Really glad to hear that is where you're probably going with it! I also liked the Jihoon admiring Daniel greatly, i think that's how he really was on Produce 101 and now. They were rivals but i didn't feel like Jihoon was jealous or spiteful towarfs Daniel because he's actually been his fan the whole timr
Chapter 7: OMG you did it again author-nim! My PanWink feels is getting threatened by the WinkDeep drama :( but I enjoyed it so much! Fighting! I NEED THE Next chapter badly! :*
Chapter 7: I would likely announce that this chapter is my FAVOURITE chapterrrr!!!! #throwingconfetti #huggingauthor-nim #sendingvirtualkisses #fangirlmode #i'msweari'mnotlesbian #i'mstraight *\(^^)/* oh author-nim I seriously love you for this chapter! I seriously love all interactions between panwink, jinhwi, and ongniel! It's so dynamic, lively, funny, cute, romantic, and full of friendships! Thank you so much for make my day brighter, i'm in my office, doing my work but almost boring to death and you just update! =D anyway i grow some fond to daehwi, he is soooo cuteee and give the balance in the middle of chaos. I like his soothing but calming figure. And seongwoo ahahahhahaa oh my god!! Actually i love all the characters in hereee, you write them very well and Jisung ommaaaaaa :'D
Chapter 6: the chapter was amazing there were so much feels, and Daniel character is Really interesting, but Ong's is a bit confusing? like does he really like Daniel or he just teases him? and the fight was Kinda ....hot? its funny that I actually imagine it might've happened in reality during the making of pd101, but I loving it so far!!! next updates gonna be a panwink I guess?(cos its ongniel and you update in turns) im such a big trash for panwink Lol, xD
Chapter 6: I loved this chapter so much! Did you focus so hard on Daniel's characters because I made you feel pressured? So sorry if that's the case hun. I would have loved it even if he was a shallow bore . But you put in the extra length and made my bias the deepest most interesting characters. I love that his other self is just his real self(I was expecting something dark and loose cannon like gangster lol). He hides his real self because people like him and he's worried they wouldn't like him if he broke out of his perfect image. That is so much like real Daniel! Especially about his fans. I know he wanted peoples' love but I'm sure he didn't want the same amount. I dislike the sasaeng fans in Korea or the people that crowd him at the airport. Seriously Dan often looks scared and uncomfortable. And i did notice Ong is often right next to him usually behind him almost like he's trying to protect him or give him encouragement. It makes me feel for Dan so hard. He wants to be liked for who he really is but he's got some insane fans unfortunately that just see him as a piece of meat and don't care for his physical and mental well being. Seriously stop shoving your phones and stuff in his face ugh.
Other thing i loved was Ongniels' dynamic and that super hot fake fight. Seems like they got out some frustration there, i sensed some honesty. I love how Ong is such a badass flirt. I can picture him walking around with his hair gelled all in leather smirking around a lollipop in place of a cigarette. God he sounds y as hell in this story. So glad Daniel is affected by it. Though he's forever in denial, i think Ong knows he's into him. I loved how Ong openly confessed and flirted with him in front everyone pissing Dan off to the extreme. They are so funny and their chemi in this story so far is off the charts. I would half expect them to argue and then in the middle of it they're having a steamy make out session. I know you're not going to put in but these two really are so charged here my mind naturally goes that way. Maybe you should try your hand at . This chapter made me think you could do it with that fight scene and Ongs flirtiness.
I don't know who i like in this story more. Their characters are both so interesting. I want to know about the dark events that caused them to be lonely and in pain and cynical so bad haha. Going to be a long wait I guess. I liked where this plot is going too, i wasn't expecting you to bring in p101 at all. Now it just got so much better! Thanks for making Dan and Jisung friend's they were too funny. Also for making Ong friends with Jinhwi that was so sweet of him to cause a distraction. I didn't think he was a nice guy in this story. I thought he was a lone wolf that hated everyone. Good to know he has a sweet side and some friends. But omg about Ong being a playboy. Yes i love this. I want to be his gf even if it's just for two weeks yessss.
Sorry there's more that i want to say honestly but i need to read One mlre time to remember. Since I've got to go to Japan in the morning I've got to sleep now though bummer. Thanks for the awesome update. I think it was one of your best chapters! This is obviously my fav coupling. They're so steamy and fun! Hehe. Love this flirty bratty couple and how you reversed their bad boy perfect boy characters. I will see you in a week after i get back, hope you can read my updates coming up tomorrow and Thursday! Love you, this is really my fav Wanna One story and you write fantastically it puts me to shame! Honestly...
Chapter 6: Woah daebak, you keep surprising me with surprise element in this story and i love it so much! I falling in love with daniel in this chapter, so smart, quick witted and oh boy, so manly! But the funny things is he easily flustered aroun seongwoo. And seongwoo, behind his cynical attitude i can sense he has a good heart and yes at some time he understand daniel :') i like dynamic progress in this story and enjoyed reading it soooo muchhh. Next chapter is jihoonie again? Waaaahhh i can't wait!! *\(^^)/*
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