Chapter 5: WOAH I loved the Fic, especially the panwink part I can totally imagine it that way, its like You know Them inside out and so were able to write their parts so effortlessly, Jinhwi part is v emotional cos I've a crush on a guy too and I can relate,, AND ONGNIEL GOSH I love them sm, And is Daniel having a crush on Mr OnG now? , .
beside that I really like the style of your writing , its v detailed and Greatly described, plus I like the characters and their personality it Matches to the real person a lot, keep up with the good work authornim! waiting for the next update.
Chapter 5: Oh it was a pretty long chapter this time! I love Daehwi's POV second to Ongniels~(but I should save first or second for Dan's coming up I guess since it's my bias and his character seems really interesting). Daehwi is so sweet, mature, and sad. I'm very interested about his secrets. Love mystery Daehwi. And the fact that he's liked Jinyoung for a long time. I thought you were going to make them both gradually like each other from their first meeting. But this is so much better. It makes it hard to read a bit because I feel so bad for him. Jinyoung, please like him quickly and stop obsessing over Jihoon~ But he had to go and misunderstand that he likes Kwanlin so that makes everything more complicated. But I like things like that, no worries. Love these love triangle/squares. Oh, I didn't know that's why you chose those songs. I didn't play the musician so I didn't know. Daniel chose Get Ugly? Nice~! And Jaehwan singing Skyfall is pretty amazing(I should put that in my story during the Wanna One times and have Minhyun go all gaga about it).
What are you doing tempting me with Ongniel at the very end, evil author-nim? You know I've been waiting weeks to read about them and now I'm going to be sitting here another week wondering what Ong did to get Dan pissed enough to fight haha. I want to see their interactions so badly~! I hope it's an awesome chapter as well ^^ Hope you have the time to update soon!
BTW, both my stories have updates, if you didn't notice yet. Waiting for your amazing comments!
Chapter 5: Aaaahhh i feel a little bit pity to daehwi. He is one strong little guy, but hide so many things in his heart :') i feel like i want to hug this little guy :') and i really tempted to kick jinyoung's , at least to notice daehwi XD anyway hahahahahha i'm laughing at ong picking fight with daniel, oh boy this story is getting more and more interesting!!! Thank you for updating, i can't wait to read more surprise from you! Saranghae author-nim! ^^
Chapter 4: What how is English not your native language but I feel like yiu write better than me huh? Curious where you're from then. Haha. Anyway besides the fact I am jealous of your awesome advanced writing skills, i thought this chapter was bloody adorable. Seriously fluff attack. Guanlin is really up on my wanna one bias list because exactly how you described him. Wow you know your bias so well. I picture him just like this tho i at describing him compared to you really. I think I will take some pointers and make him tease Jihoon and be a bit more cool and innocent. I love how he's so forwarding with skinship and says things just to get a rise out of people. He just enjoys being funny and playful rather than serious or quiet. I bet he's even more so at home in his native language. I think Ong will teach him a ton as well about how to joke in Korean and even do puns. Now i wanna do a humor lesson with them it would be adorable. Eh hem. Anyways, i love Jihoon here too. He seems so in denial but obviously falling hard. I think they're both a bit that way. Part of them knows they are at least attracted each other but they're trying to remain oblivious. I can't wait to see them grow closer emotionally and keep it up with the skinship. Flushing Jihoon and smily mischievous flirt Kuanlin are the most adorable things ever. Oh and this was the first time i liked Woojin in a story. What a preverted slightly jerky dork. He cracked me up. He reads fictions lol that's genius! I'm going to mention fics later and I'm going to put scenes from.real fics like yours in it later. Ong and Daehwi and Kwanlin will translate for others and get all awkward and shy abour things they reas. Love real life mentions like this. I love the idea of Woojin corrupting Lin and knowing Jihoon has a thing for pretty boys cuz he so does lol. Please teach him more so he can torture Jihoon to all hell! Great to have beem blesses to Read four chapters of this awesome story! Keep up the good worm. Don't rush yourself. Aren't you tired?
Chapter 4: Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa i wanna cryyyyyy, this panwink chapter is so damnnn goooddd and you write the plot very well about kuanlin whose love to teasing jihoon without realizing the effect on jihoon, poor jihoonie XD Aaahhhh i love this chapterrrrrr, my panwink is getting even better and closerr. And i love woojin! The way you write it, gosh, woojin is very sharp and playful as well. Very happy to see panwink and 2park here =D
Chapter 3: What genius was that? Oh wow i love ongniel's dynamic so much. I think i need to go read this chapter again to see what i may have missed out on. They're so cool and funny and edgy. Very different feeling between them. Theyre like natural enemies with a ton of . I wasnt expecting you to make them roommates but that's so awesome. Dan is so stiff and boring except for his stripping(seriously why is he like that lol, he's just way too comfortable in his own skin). I think that Ong will crack him out of his shell slowly, there's something else in there besides his perfect model studebt behavior. He seems slightly amused and intrigued by Ong but trying to hide it under a cool facade. Im sure he's secretly attracted and wants to talk to him more but his pride stops him.
Ong's character I absolutely adore. How did yiu think of this? He's so sassy unpredictable flirty witty and fun. I love the idea of him being a super outspoken rebel with this dark past. I think it's probably true his fam was pushing him to be an actor more than a singer but he fits both, people should let their kods do what thry want seriously especially if he's so multi talented like Sekngwoo. Really curious about his incident, but I hope it doesn't make him a bad guy, I wish he's just misunderstood not a really bad guy. It's so opposite from his model character i picture he was really like in school though so it's intriguing. I love mischievous Ong, even if he's being nasty just so he can spite others and get moved to the idol track as I suspect. Ah i would so be one of his fan girls that tried to cause trouble with him. Oh and that was hilarious him thinking of Dan's fan girls and how he was scared of them and thought about turning them on his enemy the principal. Oh and I was right about Kuanlin!!!! He is rich haha.
Wow in conclusion this story is great so far! Fast paced and dives right into the plot but doesn't reveal too much. It's very interesting! Goid luck on future updates ~~~ <3
Chapter 2: Ah I think someone like Jaehwan would piss me off. Being filfthy and always singing and he's so arrogant and thinks he's funny but not really most of the time. I know some people find it cute but I'm still meh about him. He has some funny precious moments when he's just bring himself tho. He's pretty funny here tho, i like the childlike element. Lol at the thought of Jaehwan having a lover's quarrel with Min and him having a crush on Daehwi. I never picked up on that but it's sure to be possible. I think everyone had a bit of a crush on the cute younger kids, they're irresistible, especially Daehwi. Poor Jinyoung, I can sense a heartbreak coming. I doubt Jihoon knows anything for years, he's too dense while everyone else probably knows. I hope Jinyoung can get out of the F level. I remember when he was so scared and unconfident he only looked at the ground sweet thing. I'm sure Daehwi will help a lot. I love the idea of him being Bae's tutor. It kind of fekt like on p101 that's actually what happened tho therevwas no physical shot of it. They hung out a lot and Bae's personality plus stage presence really completely changed which wouldn't be possible just him in that short time. Their interaction was funny and sweet, I liked teasing each other about being skinny and how their skinship already is natural. Daehwi seems like he kind of likes him already? And at least Jinyoung acknowledges the other is cute. Off to read my babies~~~
Chapter 1: Oh feeling in love with panwink already!! Jihoon sounds so flipping cute, all shy and easily blushing and totally crushing on Guanlin. Guanlin is hilarious. So cool and bold about his feelings and then playing it off as a joke. He is so like that and Jihoon always takes things so seriously and gets way too affected. I hope Jihoon gains more confidence and stops having money troubles. Maybe Guanlin is rich? That would be great. Guanlin like his sugar daddy haha. Really cute first meeting. Gotta love love at first sight scenes. I wish I had done that in my story but at the time I was debating about wether to progress from friends or not with all my couples. It was going to be just a bromance fic but then i said wth cuz romance is more fun to write. On to next chapter~~~
Omo omo omo. First i am enthralled just from the forward honestly! The plot seems really deep and thought out already. Aw i sense a love triangle and heart break for Jinyoung. It's good to see they all have some complexity to their personalities and interesting deeper back story. My babies are a troublemaker and a model student in charge of whipping the brat into place? Lol. Hmm i wonder what is Dan's real self... I'm sure i will enjoy reading this with all the various couples. And i do like panwink and jinhwi as well. Read soon! Good luck writing!
Chapter 3: Trust me author-nim, we readers love LONG CHAPTERS so no, i don't mind at all XD and seongwoo in this story just WOW! Never thought he will be a badass here, and daniel just being daniel hahahha. To be honest you built up the plot and the tension very well, make us curious what will happen after this, what will happen to them, etc. Every chapters always make me excited for the next chapter, so thanks for youuuu ^^
Chapter 3: Thanks for this lovely story I've become in love with it and I totally agree with you I see daniel as a total bottom and ong as a top waiting for your next update fighting! ^_^
Chapter 2: Omggg its become more interesting i love panwink meeting each other and jinhwi tho omg! So adorable i can't stop smiling while reading it ❤ i didn't know that daehwi really close to jaehwan here but i know that jaehwan really like daehwi because daehwi looks pretty XD ongniel next? Uuuu can't wait! And yea jaehwan just go to your minhyun XD Anw update again soon ❤
Chapter 2: Woah this is really interesting, i really curious with what will happenned next and yes! Ongniel! I love ongniel too, they are science XD keep writing author-nim. This story is really good and it's just a matter of time before others find this adorable story too ^^
Chapter 1: Ah I know you author-nim, you're active in panwink onehallyu thread and write stories about them too in ao3 :) Nice to meet you, you've got another panwink trash here, i'm so ruined with panwink's closeness which sometimes make me think are they even real XD i'm lurking in onehallyu thread too but as a silent lurker hahaha. Anyway this story is so COOOOLLL!! I love it! It feels so real, have a good plot, long chapters, and a good introduction as well. I will follow this story too, and once again thank you updating such a sweet story like this ^^
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