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bbh041992 #1
Chapter 51: Thank you for the sudden update author. I hope you feel better!
ahzeeee #2
Chapter 51: Somehow i’d prefer kris to get more closer to lina.. or even channie. Its like even tho they have the least interaction with Lina, its also more of the meaningful encounters.. anw take care authornim, and rest well!
emmanuellachan98 #3
Chapter 51: Thank u for the update really but i cannot help but think about your health.....i dont want u to be sick so i hope that u will take care of your health and be more healthy soon....its okay for u to not update for a long time cause i know we will wait....fighting
davian
#4
Chapter 51: this is unexpected but I thought you were ask not to think. I don't want you to be sick authornim
miicodin
#5
Chapter 51: woah. This is so unexpected. I hope you didn’t overworked yourself. Even though I like it that you updated earlier, I still don’t want you to strain yourself. Health is the most important.

Anyways, Daaaamn. I hope Lina would take Suho’s advice. Minseok is such a tease. Why so hot my baozi and I would like to see more Lay, Sehun, Kai and Chanyeol. Since I haven’t seen them in these last few chapters that I kinda forgot what they were doing I guess that’s my excuse to read this again. Hehe.
munous #6
Chapter 51: Thank you so much for the update!! It's getting more interesting, i want to know all of the secrets that maks suho like that... also, lina baby, who do you think you're fooling? you so like baekhyun, maybe not love him, but you definitely like him girl don't fight me on this.

I would like to see more bonding time with kris or chanyeol, but ofc when you feel ready and healthy enough to update, I to deep in this history i can't just forget it,

Please take care of yourself!! see you next update ~
chewyyang
#7
Chapter 51: dun dun dun...
AceBuddyX
#8
Chapter 50: Friend, take care of yourself and be healthy soon! :D We will wait for you! Your story is a beautiful work in progress and I am willing to wait for you, even if it takes years :') Patience is the key to a beautiful masterpiece anyways.
NoraMyFics #9
Chapter 51: Take care of your health, we will wait !! Thanks for the update!!
Minyun25
#10
Chapter 50: 4:17:30 Reply All
Chapter 49: I want to hugg you rn.
As a older girl i can understand the pressure of being the oldest and main caretaker @21yrs. Caring burden after burden with responsibility you weren't born with but just go on and deal with it no matter what. Your depression should be taken seriously. Putting on a fake smile is the best art out there to disguise real emotions.

You are the star of your family. I wish you all the best...
marilyn01 #11
Chapter 51: Yas gurlll! That is a great strategy. Do what you think is best and stay healthy! Great update as always <3
Handoongi
#12
Chapter 51: The more i read this story, the more i realized that Lina is such a sweetheart and doesnt want to get hurt by anyone and eventually get defensive instead...

i kinda curious how will luhan trying to learn his full power. Did every vessel only bond once with their vessel or it will be a few steps to fully bonded?

PS: i'm glad to hear you've been trying good^^
PuffTedEBear
#13
Chapter 51: Adding the aspect of the non-trustworthy principal/ father is brilliant. It gives the feeling that it will not be anytime soon that all of EXO will be bonded. Don't worry Baekhyun, I love you and I would give you whatever you want. *muah* let's bond often.
pinkyaiah_07
#14
Chapter 51: Whatever you decide to do, you know we'll support you. Take your time to grow and heal <3 Be healthy, okay?

Anyways, for the chapter, SUHO JUST CONFUSES ME SO MUCH. LIKE WHY ARE YOU LIKE THAT??? BUT THEN THERE IS BAEK AND I JUST UWU HUHUHUHUHU HE'S SO CUTE AND HE'S SO BAEK HUHUHUHU
hdez1004 #15
Chapter 51: Stay healthy!!!
kawaii_anime1004 #16
Chapter 51: I believe you involve everyone maybe those who does make appearance very often but also have a glimpse of the others also.
I wonder if Suho and his dad relationship is complicated hmm
Could it be that Minseok was jealous not getting a kiss from Lina?
YAS KRIS PROTECT HER LIKE A MAN CHU R hehe
And it's ok if you chu update later on, it makes it even more exciting hehe
CANT WAIT TILL THE NEXT CHAPTER!!!
bebexol
#17
Chapter 51: Make sure you pace yourself and don’t make your condition worse! Your health is more important than updating. This chapter made me really curious about what Xiumin is up to
baozimaknae #18
Chapter 51: It’s soooo nice seeing u update but I can’t help to worry about youㅠㅠ (I know it sounds so silly) stay healthy rectangular_smile! Your health comes first, ok? :)

I’m worried about Lina though since she seems really sick, and hopefully she won’t have to bond with anyone soon since she need to recover first.... also I hope nothing happens to her when she fully bonded to the boys later on and those powers left herㅠㅠ baekhyun and lina is the cutest btw but it’s hard to ship lina with any of the boys since I feel like she’s better off without them(???) lol but maybe baekhyun is an exception since he’s the cutest lil pup<3
bacontomycrisp
#19
Chapter 51: I’m glad you’re taking things well!! Please do take your time and rest enough!

I don’t have any particular character i want to see in the next chapter, but one thing i wish to see more is the progress of their relationship? Like theres so many small interactions between Lina and and the boys, but it focuses a lot on the bond and receiving their powers/training, etc. I wish i can see them grow as friends/lovers, without having to think about how they’re only together because of the impending bond. Like i want to see them talk about their hobbies, likes and dislikes, family, etc. Maybe even see them all going out for a movie and just enjoying themselves as if they are normal humans without powers (and maybe see the boys get jealous not because she is closer with one of the other exo members but like because of petty things like helping a handsome stranger and giving that person a smile that makes them so jealous because they want to keep that smile to themselves lol that would be so cute).

And Lina’s family! I really hope their relationship gets better as time progresses. Whatever misunderstandings or problems they had in the past, i hope they can slowly move on and accept each other with all their flaws and bruises.

Anyways, thank you for the update! I’ll wait patiently for you!