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svblimehysterix
#1
Chapter 11: why am i so sad that it ended? huehuehuehuehuehue
Humanoidchicken
#2
Chapter 11: Chapter 11: this is sooOoooo good and the household situations are relatable, I legit cried as I could relate to Irene. I love how you put a bit of kryber in this story
naepittamnunmoon
#3
Chapter 11: oh i was so mad last chapter geez
Eris78
#4
Chapter 11: So good!!! Such a beautifully written story!!
Eris78
#5
Chapter 5: Baby Jung to the rescue!!!
Eris78
#6
Chapter 3: This story is getting to me, and I am enjoying it!
Hyphen-bae
#7
Chapter 5: Love the way you write!!! LOVE THIS STORY! And love how you slyly put in kryner ship...man i love you! ?
Universe12345
#8
Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Hmmm. I enjoyed it but not as much as I expected to when I read the foreword.

It's nice. I like the build up between the two. I just hoped that there was more to it. A few more chapters, maybe two or three would've done it for me. A little bit more grind if you catch my drift. It was quick, but beautiful nonetheless.

Then the relationship between Seulgi and Irene itself. It's something that the youngsters these days should read. There's a lot to learn from it. It shows that love does not discriminate. Be with someone who help you grow as a person. Learn to understand someone's imperfection. It's okay to be not perfect. You don't have to be in order to be loved by someone.

Another thing that I liked about this story is the formating. Most of the stories I've read so far tends to clump to much lines on one paragraph or they loved putting one liners too much.

Needs some proofreading because sometimes some too became to. Well that and some word choices are weird... especially that "cavern between the legs". That killed my immersion as that passage made me LOL.

I like how the love-making part was written. It was sensual and romantic. It's not overly done which made it look like an act of love instead of just act of pure impulse due to animalistic desires.

All in all I really loved it. Will now go to your other works! :)
sagwalli
#9
Chapter 11: how do I stop crying T_T
chocochipc00kie
#10
Chapter 11: This is beautiful! I really enjoyed the ride. Thank you so much for sharing this with us ;)
LxttleRebel
#11
Chapter 11: This was honestly such a cute lil story that lowkey packed a few lessons in it I love it. I really liked the slow progression in their relationship, it was slow but not like EXCRUCIATINGLY slow I really thought it was just nice. Honestly it was so cute how Seul was doing all these things she USUALLY wouldn’t do, for Irene. I won’t lie I actually shed a few tears during the convo between Seul and her dad, kinda just made me remember a particular moment I had with my dad :’).
jjae96
#12
Chapter 2: oh, slow build, dis good, i approve.
justsomeanimelover
#13
Chapter 11: I just finished rereading your story :(((( its really beautiful <3
MattTruman
#14
Chapter 11: I love these light storieszssss ugh my mind is clear. What a cute ending though, love it.
MattTruman
#15
Chapter 2: So much uwu's ♥
jinhyxns
#16
Chapter 11: Chapter 11: I lost count of how much I've read this masterpiece over and over again...seriously amazing
firexpunch
#17
Chapter 11: Crying happy tears rn
skyheart
#18
Chapter 11: It's almost 3 am here. And I finally finished reading this one. It made me laugh, cringe, cry, heart fluttering, and many more all at once in this fic. Gosh. Thank thank you for sharing this with us. I just loved the flow, how they fell for each other and how they overcome the challenges. How they finally understand each other through communication. With family, friends and all. Seulrene hoped for the best as they expected for the worst. And eventually had each other back together again. Haha i need to sleep now. I'll probably have a dream of seulrene after being in their dimension. Haha. Thank you for this one!!!! :))))
skyheart
#19
Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wow, i think i might stay up a bit longer this time til I finish this fic before sleeping. Haha jjang! :)
fumtuboo #20
Chapter 11: damn “we come to love not by finding the perfect person, but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly” is actually quite a beautiful quote, just like this story. would honestly give this multiple upvotes if that were even possible, that’s how good it is. thanks so much for writing this, i’m so mad that i didn’t find it sooner. this is probably one of those stories i’ll find myself reading again sometime in the future :)
fumtuboo #21
Chapter 8: what seulgi’s dad said to her brought tears to my eyes :’) it was truly beautiful to see how accepting he was, why cant everyone in the world be as accepting as he was?
SongBaeMino_
#22
Chapter 11: Omg the story is so good and I learned a lot of things and qoute a lot in here thank you author~
mariaedwu #23
Chapter 11: ??? i loved it ty writer nimmm
Juno_Hyun
522 streak #24
Chapter 11: This is so f$%&#*%& Great!!!!
shotsofnyquil
#25
Chapter 11: Great onee honestllyy. <3333 SeulRene ftw as alwaayss
shotsofnyquil
#26
Chapter 6: Ofcourse ypu both are inloovw <3333
shotsofnyquil
#27
Chapter 3: "When a gitl says nothing, it always means something" indeed
shotsofnyquil
#28
Chapter 2: All the uwus has escaped me for this chap asdfgvbn
shotsofnyquil
#29
Chapter 1: Giving this an upvote for the very first chapter cause its THAAAT good!!!!
Michae47 #30
Chapter 11: This story is kinda remind me one of the manga that I read, and its also a yuri genre..... Cool story???
ndrewmaskell
#31
Chapter 11: I AM CRYING THIS IS THE SOFTEST THING I'VE EVER SEEN
JDSaint
#32
Chapter 2: Damn her mother didn't even remember her birthday Dx .. Irene buying her birthday cake herself (╥╯θ╰╥)
JDSaint
#33
Chapter 1: I find it amusing that just like Bogum, Hyuna is typecasted too, always a y bully
ethorns
#34
Chapter 11: oh my GOD this is one of the greatest fics ive ever read and it's just so GOOD!!! it literally gave me goosebumps everywhere!!! i just cant express well about how good this really was!!!! thank you SO MUCH for making this story!! im so happy!<3
Jaesung27 #35
Chapter 11: omg if this isn't one of the bestest fic i've ever read then I don't know what it is. And I read a lot, a loooooot of fics believe me. Your writing is so great that I could picture the story like a movie in my head. And I enjoyed it so much!
Thank you for your amazing work, it was such a beautiful adventure with the girls!
justsomeanimelover
#36
Chapter 11: This is so good T^T i want more
justsomeanimelover
#37
Chapter 9: Feels trip ~ and seulgi is such a XD
justsomeanimelover
#38
Chapter 7: Mrs.Kang OMG!!!!
justsomeanimelover
#39
Chapter 6: My poor heart I love how they survived this chapter
:( my poor irene baby
justsomeanimelover
#40
Chapter 4: Poor irene ;( !!!!
justsomeanimelover
#41
Chapter 3: Hmmmm I really like this fic I cant stop reading lmao !! Its already 2 am here XD
justsomeanimelover
#42
Chapter 2: Im really liking this :D please Seulgi love Irene
Val1711 #43
Chapter 11: OMG, me enamoré de este fic ;;;
gorjessie #44
Chapter 11: Thank you so much for the storyyyy! This is beyond beautiful <3
AliceODonnell #45
This story is amazing, thank you so much!!!
jenlisagirl
#46
Chapter 11: one of my favourite seulrene fics ever. re read for the third time!
SwagON
#47
Chapter 11: omg...this is one of the best seulrene fics out there. I hope you'll never delete it cuz i want to reread it in the near future. GREAT FIC! THANK YOU SO MUCH AUTHOR-NIM !!
BTS_ARMY_4_EVA
#48
FUKIN UPVOTED
BTS_ARMY_4_EVA
#49
Chapter 11: Ya I am. Xp
BTS_ARMY_4_EVA
#50
Chapter 11: Umm... I might be gay now...
tacosareyum
#51
Chapter 11: I'm definitely gay
tacosareyum
#52
Chapter 11: first off dang that m tag wasn't expected but I'll take it ;) this chapter is my favorite just because the quote is so- it describes the whole entire story in one quote and I think it's just amazing. did you come up with at quote or did you really read it in a book? also replying ro the author note, I think your English is better than most people on this website and I think this story is incredibly well written. Thank you so much for this story, it's really just.. beautifully imperfect. (wink)

with that being said though.. I think I might be gay?
tacosareyum
#53
Chapter 10: "huehuehue" I was going to complain about the angst again but my girl soojung is the REALEST oh my, I'm positive that if it weren't for her, seulrene probably would've took longer to get together.. thank you for this chapter :)
tacosareyum
#54
Chapter 9: a few things: first the little peek seulgi took wasn't so little
second “You put her name as ‘Seulgi ♥’ in your phone.” LMAO I DIED AT THAT PART, why is Irene the slower one in this fic haha that's so adorable
third can this fic not have people interrupt the love birds and let them have a proper moment?? it's either mrs.kang, seulho or mrs.bae.. oh my god I think I'm going to die of old age before I live to see the day they don't get interrupted
tacosareyum
#55
Chapter 8: what in the angst
tacosareyum
#56
Chapter 7: one word to describe this chapter: nodoubtthefunniestandthecutestohmygodwhyisitsofluffy
doodledood
#57
Chapter 11: wow i must be living under the rock because i just now found out this masterpiece. its beyond beautiful, thanks so much for this :")
tacosareyum
#58
Chapter 6: okay so I accidentaly couldn't help myself and my hands just magically flew to the next button, it was all worth it though because this chapter was sooo good.. from the “I like girls. I’m gay. I am only ually attracted to girls.” (bc girl, we've been knew) and the "you're the salt to my pepper" to the kiss and finally, everyone.. The famously slow sluggi finally realized that she's in love with bae joohyun. Gosh that took her six chapters girl get yourself together haha, really glad I'm ending my night like this because the last chapter was a bit angsty. thank you for this chapter as always. :))
tacosareyum
#59
Chapter 5: “Because she…?” Seulgi tilts her head, waiting for the continuation of the speech.

sHE IS A LESBIAN WE'VE BEEN KNEW, BAD BOY JUST FURTHER PROVES HOW OUR GIRLS AINT STRAIGHT;))
I promised myself to read 5 chapters only.. this is kind of a cliff hanger if I leave off here.. I guess I can have some self control but then again I didn't hold back commenting... I can't decide omg I'm so conflicted this story is too good
tacosareyum
#60
Chapter 4: let's all be honest here though, nana deserved way more than a slap. A slap is basically letting her go off easy, thank God for Kang Seulgi hopefully slapping some sense into her.. That bringing someone down won't make you shine brighter.. It will just reveal how lowly you are. Even though this chapter was painful to read, it was really nicely written like always. Thank you :)
tacosareyum
#61
Chapter 3: gosh I promised myself that I'd leave one huge comment when I finish it but this is way too fluffy so I can't hold back, thank you so much for this story.. I'm trying to savor it but at the same time I'm curious as to what happens next arghh it's so conflicting ahaha
shimar #62
Chapter 11: I'm so glad I found your story, is so good so thank you very much for share it us.
Ballerina_Belle
#63
Congratulations on getting featured!
Thousandsunny #64
Chapter 11: i love this fic so much that i can never get enough of it. this is probably the tenth time i’ve read ever this since you’ve completed it about a year and a half ago, but i still experience all those fluttering feelings and other emotions each time i read it. i seriously can’t describe in words how perfect this story is to me. on multiple occasions this past year, i felt that there were no good new seulrene stories being update and during those times, i kept coming back to this story to raise my spirits. for some reason, i’ve never commented on this fic despite reading it so many times, but i really want to thank you for this great contribution to the seulrene community. i think my favorite thing about this story that separates it from so many other seulene stories is that you remember the fact that they’re both girls and they’re both fragile and soft. many writers and shippers feel the need to write seulrene as a straight couple and forget that they’re shipping a girlxgirl pairing and it’s honestly kind of frustrating. seulrene are both sof cuties in real life and i love that you portrayed them as such in this story. once again, thank you for this beautifully perfect ;) seulrene fic <3
p.s. i love your other seulrene oneshots too :)
p.p.s. i love exo as well, but never really shipped taoris because kris left when i first got into them then tao the year after :’( i feel like i would have shipped them after watching showtime, but i forced myself not to in order to avoid the pain
Miokon
#65
Wow. I'm amazed.
First, this is actually my first time reading a Seulrene fanfiction (I'm a new reveluv) and was because of this courious. When I just read the first chapter, I was impressed and knew that this ff would be good. And it was true. I fell in love with this story. The plot was actually nothing new, a high school ff with first love. But you're writing style, characters and something else that I can't describe, is just perfect .
I myself now think about such things like: "Is this perfect?", or "What should I do now in the future?". I also have my graduation in a few months and actually I'm afraid about my future. I'm not perfect, I have no impressing talent or good looks. I have because of this self doub but then I sometimes also know that nobody is perfect and I'm just one of the imperfects humans. I'm always somehow manage to kill my self doubt and say to myself that I'm unique of my own way.
That's why I really empathize with Seulgi and Irene. You made the both so real, with flaws, problems and humanity. Their love was so new, pure and exciting, just fluffy and lovely. I also love Seulgis character change. It was slow, only piece by piece and that was good. I had already write that this is so close at reality, but this is one thing I love so much about this story. And that Irene went to study overseas was also a good thing. She want to make her dream come true and must developed.
I'm actually really sad that you have this regret. We should chase our dreams and shouldn't regret why we didn't it. But I also think that we learn about our mistakes and regrets. So I hope you now live happy and don't have many regrets.

Okay, I really wrote too much (I think my longest comment ever and my english isn't even good).
In short form, I love this fanfiction and thank you that you wrote 'Beautifully Imperfect'. I enjoyed it so much.
EmptyTinkerbell
#66
Chapter 11: Despite it being the final chapter meaning that this is finally the end, it's my favourite one from the whole story! There was just so much fluff in here, and sweetness aw. The fountain scene was just the best! It was so romantic <3 And then the - you did a really good job in there! And later the girls finally met after two years of the break. How lovely *^*
I'm very glad that this story ended so happily, the girls deserved it a lot! I enjoyed reading this story, I think it's really great :) Thank you for all the hard work put into this story! ^_^ <333
EmptyTinkerbell
#67
Chapter 10: Ahh, one more chapter left! Noo :< But this chapter was so sweet aw :3 Maybe not when Seulgi was angry at Irene, but the rest was pretty cute haha It's good that Seulgi was okay with Irene going to the U.S, Irene would probably regret not going some time later in the future. I'm proud of Seulgi ^_^ It's such a pity that you yourself couldn't study overseas when you had a chance, but maybe there will be something good on your way someday! :)
EmptyTinkerbell
#68
Chapter 9: Poor Irene. I wouldn't be surprised if she and Seulgi caught a cold. But her running away did something good! Her parents will get closer to Irene I think. It's very good ^-^
Now, that I think of it, no one else have to accept their relationship. What's important is they have each other and their parents, and if someone doesn't understand that they just love each other, then they can go and fxxx themselves >.<
EmptyTinkerbell
#69
Chapter 8: It's a good thing that Irene let out her feelings and thoughts to her parents. She kept it for herself for years, right? It hurt her so much...
I'm kinda sad and disappointed with Mrs Kang. Like Seulgi, I expected from her to accept her daughter's uality better, but I still believe in the boss! I know that she will be okay with her daughter soon haha :D
When Seulgi was talking with Seulho I couldn't stop smiling. Their conversation was so funny! Now, I'm praying that Joy, Wendy, and Yeri will accept the girls. They're the last ones that opinions matters...
EmptyTinkerbell
#70
Chapter 7: Oh . Please don't let the girls be in trouble with Mrs Kang! She's a boss, so I want to keep faith in her.
Now, the girls can be only happier and happier right? I hope everyone will accept their relationship :|
EmptyTinkerbell
#71
Chapter 6: Kyaaa, they kissed dhjsgsygdsy How fweaking cute! Aw *u*
Poor Irene, she had to experience such a horrible thing :( The teacher better spend long years in jail and realise what he did was a bad thing. And he better don't show in front of Irene or Seulgi ever!
But I'm so happy for the girls <3 And Seulgi realised her feelings! How good ^o^ I'm proud of her :3
seulgittarius
#72
Chapter 11: this is the 4th time I finished re-read this fic. My one of favorites seulrene fics here in aff. whenever I craved for something fluffy I always come here :" Bless you and your imagination! Sumpah ga pernah ga fluttering tiap baca ini. bikin terus pengen meluk guling mulu wkwk.
OTrizy #73
Chapter 11: The amount of fluff and angst was great, love the fic
EmptyTinkerbell
#74
Chapter 5: *squeal!* The last scene! Omg, so cuuute :3
It's such a pity that Seulgi and Soojung's friendship had a break. Seulgi wouldn't be as lonely during these 2 years... But that way, her and Irene's friendship seems more special, right? ^o^
Soojung did well asking Seulgi if she loves Irene <3 Seulgi will realise her feelings sooner that way, right??? :D
Gosh, I still can't get over this chapter's sweetness XD
EmptyTinkerbell
#75
Chapter 4: Oh man. I didn't even take into consideration such a negative scenario. Poor Irene! Seulgi did well though. She could punch Nana and not just slap her (just sayin') lol But it would be probably too much XD
Mrs Kang is such a boss! I hope she will appear some more in the future. Her advice was gold :DDD
Damn, they said I love you to each other! How cute. Now they have to fall very deep for each other. And to do this Seulgi have to make Irene feel better ^o^ (tbh honest I don't think she HAVE TO lmao) XD
EmptyTinkerbell
#76
Chapter 3: Something is definitely wrong with Irene... If she wasn't bullied then what? Maybe she was accused of having an affair with a teacher? Or someone much older, if what Nana said had some truth into it. Or maybe someone found out that Irene is lesbian and the word got around? I can't think of more theories right now haha
I'm happy that the girls were having fun together and Seulgi has some friends now. It's so nice to read about Seulgi finding happiness and all ^o^
But I'm afraid of the next chapter, what if... Irene murdered someone!? :O Nah, she wouldn't XD
heartwaves
#77
Chapter 11: ;-; this is so fluffy, I like it
EmptyTinkerbell
#78
Chapter 2: I love this story already. The talk between Seulgi and Irene... Them baring their feelings to each other... It was seriously beautiful and so pure. I hope there's going to be more fluff than angst ahead of the two. Both Irene and Seulgi are already hurt, so I hope there will be mostly happiness when it comes to them >3<
EmptyTinkerbell
#79
Chapter 1: I can relate to Seulgi on spiritual level lol We have so many things in common, but I can't sing and I don't have Irene next to me lmao
This story intrigues me! The first chapter gained my interest already, and makes me want to read more ^u^
Gonna check the next chapter quickly then! <3
paboyerinn
#80
Chapter 11: MOST AMAZING AND HEARTWARMING FF IVE READ SO FAR!! ❤️ So beautifully scripted and written!! Honestly, I randomly came across this ff and decided to just give it a try!! I’m not even a reveluv, what more a seulrene shipper? HAHAHA BUT AWWWW I could literally feel the love between them!! ? thanks author-nim
Xp_dani #81
Chapter 11: I usually don’t like reading a story that has little bit of chapters, I don’t know why. However this story is beautiful. I finished it and all I can say is WOW. It’s so sweet with a little bit of spice. Good job
author-nim.
-BoysAreFire
#82
This is really good definitely checking it out
ajoomma
#83
I really love this story~
Nayeon74
#84
this story is so cute that i can't stop re-reading it
supkfans
#85
Chapter 11: Ohhhhh myyyy goshhhhh this is absolutely a masterpiece. Such an amazing story you have here. It was written very well and if you say english is not your 1st languafe. Trust me it was absolutely fine and great. I hope you'll write more stories. Thank you for this author-nim
ramennn #86
Chapter 11: thank you.
xyuzamers #87
Chapter 10: thank you for writing this book. i'm not finished reading it yet but i know ill love the ending. i am also sorry you didn't go overseas but i hope you get another chance to chase your dream
FanficLover36
#88
Chapter 11: Thank you
FanficLover36
#89
Chapter 11: This is definitely in my top RV fics now
ZicoAnTi
#90
Chapter 11: bEAUTIFUL
winterleaf
#91
congrats on the feature!!!!!!!!
Dinaakyungsoo
#92
Chapter 11: This is the first girlxgirl story I've ever read. And it's so beautiful. I love them both. They're my two biases in the group ^-^ and I loved their story so much *-*
And I know I'm late but I wish for you a happy New year ^-^ <3
ramennn #93
Chapter 6: i mean like i like rv but i dont stan them and,,,,,,
this is so beautiful :'))
ramennn #94
Chapter 6: aAAAAAASGDFHFKDKALXKXJSNWNJA I LOVE MY FEELS HUHU U THE BEST AUTHOR
chaelisajensoo
#95
Chapter 11: This was super good!
wonhaebunny_
#96
Chapter 11: ok uhm this is the first girlxgirl fic ive ever read bc i dont stan many girl groups and theyre just not as common to me so idk its hard to find one that catches my eye,,, i saw this and i dont even stan rv??? but like i know their names at least so i was like heck why not and wow this is so beautiful?? what have i been missing??? its literally so good thank u for creating this art :'> anyway my comment is already too long and i have to go bc i need to learn more about rv now, you've gotten me interested c:
thank u so much for this fic, and congrats on the feature ♡