Chapter 26: CLARA'S INTERACTIONS WITH SVT IS TO DIE FOR OMG
HOw they treat her like a lil baby
how excited they got about her achievement in speech class was the greatest thing omg
and seungkwan not letting his best friend go at any point in time XD
and when the siblings were talking about their pre-debut days, i really felt the nostalgia?
reminds me of how carefree and chill everyone was back in HS
meanwhile college is a complete dip, i've never felt more lonely?
everyones' busy with their jobs and school work, i haven't hung out with anyone since summer lmao.
i'm so happy to see more interactions between venus and sehun lmaooo
and ofc it makes it so much better that kaistal was around!
i'm really looking forward to seeing more of their interactions hahahhahahaha
lol i'm biased, can't help it xD
omg sophie is hilarious!!!!! i think she's my fave character in this chapter
or maybe her ukulele was XD
and the interactions between jj, sohpie and chase was hilarious!!
awwww my poor myungeun heart omg
myungsoo why u being like that ugh
i'm dying to find out why!!!
it was also nice to read about naeun and gigi's friendship
but oh no tina auditioning to the drama :(
i kinda skipped ahead to read the soompi article and now i'm wondering what gigi did to poor tina ugh ugh ugh
but i really like the girls' relationships with each other
and how quickly they sat naeun down with ice cream and what not to cheer her up and talk about
you can really see how much the girls care about each other
that ending tho omg
but yess i am on a roll with these comments, so happy to be catching up hehe
i missed so much and i fully regret it otl
Chapter 24: I AM FINALLY WITH A MUCH DELAYED COMMENT OMG
SO SORRY BOUT THIS
BUT OK CAN I JUST SAY, I ADORE THE INTERACTIONS THE GIRLS HAVE WITH OTHER IDOLS?/
chase babying bambam
sophie's friendship with btob and esp sungjae was so great omg
ayyyy hyunsik and jj
jb and jj
sangmi finding out about mamamoo is probs my fave about this chapter lmaoo
chase's relationship with yoongi is bff goals af omg
and i love how yoongi got lowkey salty bc of yixing lmao
it was so cuteee
tina' relationship with tae was also such a nice read
and her asking bout leo at the end LOOL
and i'll end this comment here before i start quoting basically everything that happened in this precious chapter haha
will try to get to the other chapter comments soon!
once again, sorry for sucha delay!
Chapter 28: Alright, onto that Halloween goodness. HAH yeah she's probably here for Twice, there's no way she's coming to flirt with a certain boygroup member naaah xD "Just hit them back, they deserve it" OMG. Truth probably xD AW she made him scream omg, lil weenie. I love his reaction when he finds out it's her. Of course Jackson is the bigger weenie though xD He's such a dramatic I love him so much.
Aaah I don't have time to comment anymore I have to go. That was really quite, and it's nice to see a shorter chapter that just follows one member too! (Also i c u using that APINK/BTOB photo xD) Aaah but of course it might not have been a good idea to do a boy group video after the whole Tina thing. As ty as it is, they might end up getting a reputation for it, because knets are nuts. As for Sungjae and BTOB, there's enough Beatcom behind the scenes madness to keep you fuelled for eternity I bet. If you want specifics hit me up but I've already been waiting too long and my friends are getting impatient, gotta go!!
Chapter 28: Okay it I've been neglecting you too long, I'm just gonna catch up with 4xU now, and then Heaven will follow at a later date. I'll start with Tina's departure, a chapter I haven't actually gotten to reading yet because I wanted to give you fresh thoughts (and then I forgot SORRY)
Oh man, this is going to give us our first real look at Gigi in action isn't it? I mean before she was around, but always more as a vague presence than actual antagonist directectly interfering with the group. I share Tina's apprehension as we see her on her main lead throne. Oh Naeun, sweet sweet Naeun. Aaaand here we go, the award for Uncalled For goes toooo: GIGI. God the girl is such a , which makes Naeun's naivety only the more frustrating.
Honey nooo don't look at the comments! Love yourself! I love those repeated "it's fine"s that just raise the tension more and more as we know it's not going to be fine but she's still trying to tell herself it is ;;
Here we go. It's not fine. I'm glad Hakyeon is supportive about it all at least. So mature and reasonable about it all. It must be hard to keep acting as his wife too, with all her insecurities and doubts about the rumours. Maaaan that snake does know how to practice some good media play, she could give Miso a serious run for her money. And oh man the privacy violation even on their hiatus must be seriously chilling. This wasn't fine indeed.
Crying a little while doing science, oh no there goes my heart ;;;; Aw Clara is such a sweetie omg. "Adult help" omg sweet thing! Oh man that was such a sweet little scene of support, and Suchin too! Man I love all of them so much.
Here it is again, the fine, but now things might actually BE fine. Of course we know it won't be, such is dramatic irony. Gigi definitely deserves to smell like gross water the rest of her life honestly that's a great curse xD Oh no. Oh no I knew that phone recording in the open would come to bite her in the . Oh no HONEY. Once someone heard "was it the boyfriend" there really isn't any kind of PR that can save you, aside from coming clean about the relationship.
Man that was a sad chapter, but you really did a fantastic job on weaving the rumours in and out and showing how much it affected Tina, and how each step just got worse. I love the stylistic use of "it's fine", as well as the exploration of the toxic side of fan culture. Really this has been one of your best chapters, and if any good came from the Tina thing it's that you wrote a hell of a chapter and we got to see GiGi in action. Seriously, this was amazing!
Chapter 5: Omg sorry I totally forgot about the appearance/style section! I got so drawn into this girl's orbit that I forgot the basics! It has een fixed now!
Omg ikr? Mijoo is stunning, especially with that blonde hair! I don't know why she isn't pulling a Hyoyeon and going blonde forever honstly. And hes she would /absolutely/ fight someone xD I'M GLAD YOU LIKE MY PUN. I was so proud of that omg xD Yes she IS kind of like Sharpay! Definitely antihero, coming to save the day one hairflip at a time but you better believe she gains from it too.
BEES. (Is that a Dragon Age reference I spot there?). YAS justice for the ace babes (aka me //hairflip)! Sandeul has that perfect cute dork look to him <3 I'm glad you like Seok! I'd like to think that he's just always so wrapped into his own physics and research that he doesn't even notice the screeching coming from next door, and internally he's like "Oh I have such nice neighbours", meanwhile the apartment next to him has caught fire and there are sirens everywhere. Aw your gf doesn't even like the urban outdoors? I mean you bring Miso to an actual forest and she'd probably be circling a tree like "where is the usb port I need to charge my phone", but the urban outdoors is great ;A; And stars are freaking awesome.
HONEY. You're great too and I owe you like a bajillion comments and YOU WILL GET THEM when nanowrimo isn't destroying me. I love the way you write too and I'll never miss an opportunity to be involved in a Symphonies Production. Thank you so much for the compliments, I'm so glad you love my children they're all dumb in their own right ;A; THANK YOU SO MUCH OMG.
Hey! I'm sorry that I've been offline for a while!
I'm glad that you found a way to give Tina an exit from the story. I think that it was a very creative idea to use Taeyeon's ex as a way to make a scandal, though, I'll kinda miss Tina in the story! Maybe will she get some cameos?
OH MY GOODNESS I FANGIRLED SO HARD WHEN I READ THE HALLOWEEN STORY!!! I love that episode of iGOT7!!! Thank you, thank you, thank you for writing that chapter!!! I'm loving how close JB & JJ are getting! Although... will Hyunsik ever step into the limelight? I'm so excited!
Also, I don't know if you want any more entries for the new member, but I've been working on an app... sorry I haven't turned it in yet - I've been working super hard at uni. -_-;
Anyway, how have you been lately? Are you in school?
Chapter 29: tina and gigi in the same drama? damn and i wonder what will happen too with idyll.. if the new girl is younger than naeun will naeun then get into idyll or..?
i'm up for whatever decision you make regarding tina
but i think it would make more sense that she naturally leaves the group or something
since it'll be hard to portray the character if you don't get feedback whether you're doing it right?
and tbh i personally would like to write characters of more active users hahahahahahhaahs :x
ooooh i just realized there's a new plotline!
tbh i think it'd make sense to just go forward with the new plotline too
since she'll take up the same roles as tina in the group?
thanks for asking us for our opinions and i'm probs not of any help lmao
but good lucking deciding, i'll support whatever decision you make
I think you should keep Tina, because the girls might be i dont know how rude to the new if she gets replaced.. I feel you might could make Tina a bit distant or something or not.. i dont know but I don't think you should replace her
Oh no D: It's sad when someone leaves, and while I'd be sad to see Tina go...
Ultimately it's up to you what you want to do! I think the new plotline looks amazing, tbh, so if you want to replace Tina, I'd be okay with it.
Would it available for someone outside the group OR would it be available for us to apply to as well? Is this going to hiatus the story or would you work your way around it until you chose a new member? And what would be the specifications you'd like to see with the new member? :o
I hope I'm not being too gun-ho about replacing Tina, but it seems you want to have people who are in to see how you take their character and grow... So idk, maybe it'd be nice for you to see a new face????
I'd definitely be interested in seeing how you saw Tina off and brought in the new character if you did go through with it. I also really appreciate you asking our opinion on what to do, thank you for giving us a chance to give you our thoughts before deciding ~~
Chapter 23: again, sorry for the late comment!
anyways, i really adored all the moments between the girls in this chapter??!
sangmi calling the youngest to make sure they're alright
tina going back into the salon to get jj the hair protectant
yoongi and chases lil banter haha
it's also great to see how much effort the girls put into their subunit
the ceo seemed friendly and an overall good boss
i can actually feel how taxing the filming and making of the song was tho omg
ahhhh the scene between clara and sangmi was very cute too haha
thanks for the long update!
i'll be back to make comments on the other chapters asap :)
Chapter 26: IM SCREAMING I LOVE CLARA???? She's too pure for this world pls take care of her -- also minghao being so proud and seungkwans extra bff stuff hnnnnnnn so cute?!?!? Then the Yoon sibling I'm sorry I tested up it wAS SO SWEEt bye omg I can feel the start of the storm
KRYSTAL AND VENUS BEING FRIENDS I love friendships this one is a good one yes!!! Krystal and Venus like to play off of each other and oooooooh Sehun making an appearance xD congrats, Venus, also yes his eyebrows are quite perfect lmaooo
Inviting Krystal over makes me so happy -- maybe we'll get to see more jung sister interactions (coughjEssICAcough) "don't say we didn't warn you" omfg so true though
SOPHIE I'm sorry my child is being rude to you, she's just always overworked and tired oops
JJ and Sophie playing Mario kart, the game that ruins friendships omg. I love the way you write them here, it's so realistic and funny! Rainbow Road is the devils course tho omg it's okay Sophie
Also my ship???? YOURE STARTING THE DRAMA I TOLD YOU I COULD SENSE A STORM OOOOOH IM READY FOR IT
Even tho GiGi was a bad person, she still seems to genuinely care for Naeun which gives her a real rounded personality. Not everyone's inherently good or bad, and you showed that her perfectly!! BOYS ARE DUMB AND LOSERS NAEUN JUST DATE GIGI LMAO
Jfc, Myungsoo get ur crap together?!?!? Again with the start of the buildup to the drama I'm like, ready but also not??? Because my children???
4XU IS BACK TOGETHER AGAIN YES!! When you write them all together it's just so nice and warm to read, you can tell that they know everyone well and really are friends, and we got to see that from Krystal's pov too!!
OKAY BUT AM I THE ONLY ONE WHO NOTICED GIGI AND TINA BOTH HAD AN AUDITION TODAY AND THE RESULTS ARE HAPPENING AT THE EXACT SAME TIME IM HMMMMMM
Damn girl squad for life honestly
If GiGi hadn't screwed the group over maybe she and Sophie would've gotten along lmao they have the same ideas about boys
FUUUU SANG MI WAS SO CLOSE TO COMING OUT I WAS SO PUMPED AND THEN YOU GOTTA DO ME LIKE THIS
I DONT KNOW WHICH I LOVED MORE CHASES OUTBURST OR THE REASON WHY SHE DID OMGOMG
The social media posts I'm -- IM READY TO FITE WHOEVER CALLED JINSOL UGLY COME @ ME FOOL
See you def setting up the drama oh my god what is going to happen to our poor babies
Lmao at the convo in Sophie's, it's a trip and poor Sungjae wanting to be apart of everything
Sbjeiebkekirb seriously ur so good at writing wtf teach me your ways!! I'm excited for both your applyfics and will patiently await more :)))) thanks for the great chapter ~~
Chapter 26: AAAAH THAT WAS SO CUTE. I love the focus on friendship this time around, it was such a sweet and wholesome read omg. Clara is getting better with her speech! (And being engulfed by Seventeen), Venus hanging out with Krystal ft . Assorted sm idiots, Sophie being her annoy- I mean lovable self with the other group members showing some really sweet interactiona amongst each other (and omg I love that you included herdumb songs! ) and I'm always here for tsundere yoongi being yelled at, and finally Naeun and Gigi, aka everyone's favourite time bomb, with a pathetic feature of awkward L.
It showed a lot of different sides of the girls, from Sophie's mischievous loud streak to Naeun's uncertainty and anger at L. Again I'm in awe of how great you are at writing interactions arend making all of this just sound and feel so natural, I can clearly imagine these idiots bickering with each it her arendnd being soooo stupid ♡♡♡♡
I'm it her a bit of a hurry so next comment will be better,but this was an amazing rear as usual.
Chapter 24: HOLY I'VE MISSED THIS. I'm sorry for not commenting last chapter, usually when I read something and I can't comment immediately I forget. I'm a terrible goldfish but I AM HERE NOW.
Sangmi's football game was really cute! It's so nice to see her let loose and just have fun for a bit, not be leader or idol. Of course being idol is not something that can be ignored forever, it's a fulltime job and the fans are here to remind her of it, for better or for worse. Thankfully it seems that it's for better here. Sangmi is very good at interacting with the fans, especially knowing how anxious it can really make her. Also you tell em about biuals Sangmi babe! Or, well, yourself xD Tomato, tomato. Hmmm Mamamoo huh? Good choices Sangmi xD
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I CAN'T EVEN COHERENCE RN. WHY AM I LIKE THIS??? You caught me right at the end of a BTOB rabbit hole too UGH THIS WAS BEAUTIFUL THANK YOU. Perfect too ugh these idiots I AM SUCH TRASH. This honestly made my day like I can't stress this enough it made my day thank you! I think I've told you before how good you are at dialogue and interaction and just giving the scene a sense of closeness in the smallest things. You can tell that there is a total sense of comfort between Sophie and the others, a familiarity that seeps into every level of the writing. You're excellent at that kind of mood and showing closeness both when it comes to friendship and the romance stuff. Man I really hope I have enough time to finish my app for your other fic I need it in my life. Not only do you get Sophie perfectly but also her relationship with Sungjae and the rest of them. Small things like jabs back and forth and fending them off for the right to message privacy build up into the sense of intimicay and- look I could gush about this for ages xD I'm trash and you're a fantastic writer and this was perfect is what it boils down to, thank you.
"Trust me. You have no idea what weird is yet."
Sophie glanced over to her friends, "I don't know if that's quite true..."
PERFECTION.
Also JJ get soooome- I mean what? xD Her bonding with Hyunsik over composition was really sweet! The music nerds. Oh she's getting the food for GOT7 not even for Chase herself or BTS, geez Chase stop being everyone's suga momma xD Of course she sent food to her Thai son oh my god this child.
Aaah again there's that familiarity with Tina and Taeyeon and even Tiffany (all the T's xD). This was also a nice section, kind of a breath of calmth like the start of Sangmi's. A bit of normalcy which is nice considering how work-heavy the previous ones are. The break must be really nice for them and it's always nice for us to read about them in a less guarded state.
Aaand no work break for Chase xD I assume she's doing the MV for Lay's single? He had a solo debut thing a while ago right? Aaah this is where Bambam made her worry and I can tell why. Woah she really worried badly that was intense. While I get why there is also prespective to be had babe. But thankfully JJ was able to make the delivery. OMG THE PUN. BEAUTIFUL. "Min Yoongi, Agust D, Suga, Min Suga, Open Up!!" OMG this is why I love Chase. And another sweet moment with Yoongi <3
JJ GET SOOOME.
Oh man thank you so much for this, I've missed it. It hasn't even been long at all since the last one but I love your writing so much I always miss it xD THANK YOU <333
Chapter 23: Oh my goodness, IDYLL is debuting soon! I'm so excited! While I like when all of the girls are together, sometimes, I know it's difficult to write about so many different characters at once so breaking it up a little bit & giving the 4 oldest the spotlight for a little while was awesome for showing the dynamics between them! I'm also super psyched whenever the friends or family of the group members show up in a chapter!
I really liked that you included how the girls formed their subgroups & they even got to choose their songs! That's awesome! I'm sure that the Woolim reps wanted to make sure they didn't mess up this time around XD
I just about SOBBED FROM HAPPINESS WHEN TINA BOUGHT THE HAIR PROTECTANT FOR JJ!!! That was so sweet of her & I literally had to remind myself that these were just characters because I was getting too emotional. Everybody likes to tease Chase though because of her black-hole-dancing & squishing her face and just being a goof-ball. I LOVE IT.
I love fluff but omg N & Tina need to STOP BECAUSE I'M GETTING JEALOUS OVER HERE, HELLO? Why can't I have a boy that's as sweet as N??? Hint, hint, I can't wait to see more interactions between all the girls & their love interests! I wonder who will have the first scandal!
Also, I love how Sang Mi is "dad" & JJ is "mom". Does that make Chase "the baby"?
Sang Mi & Clara's little chat at the end made me just confirm that Sang Mi is the best leader. She's just making sure her baby is comfortable & loved & I just can't handle Clara's cute support of her seniors! She loves them so much! <3
Thanks again for a great chapter, Dannie! How the heck do you find time to write all of this??? I'm literally drowning in homework all the time ㅠㅠ
In response to your question, my uni just had a Feb break a week ago so no more breaks for me until after final exams in April! X_X No pressure or anything but I'm so HYPED for when you release the next chapter! Keep up the awesome writing!!!
Chapter 22: The variety shows, oh my god, you put so much detail into them????
WEEKLYIDOL+ Soompi okay okay here we go
Hani and Heechulfans I love they're always like that it's perf
I always forget about how multi-cultural the girls are and then it gets brought up and I'm like "woW that's right" lol
"JJ, however was not having it today." I'M LAUGHING JJ PLS she's so competitive I love it
Chase giving Sophie I love this duo omg I can't wait for Sophie to get justice!!
JJ is so well rounded uhm someone lock her down asap
Venus the Dancing Ace yesssss
Chase is a dORK and oooooh I'm hoping to see the fan club(...s?) soon if I picked up on that right ouo
THE CALL SECTION ALWAYS MAKES ME HAPPY WHENEVER I ACTUALLY WATCH SO YAY
eMOTIONAL mess at the end aka Clara and me honestly lmao
Now the Soompi article
Ugh ugh already the group promos are already over but maybe we'll see more SVT+Clara interactions then??? Esp with Dino??? :O
IDYLL starting up aaaaw yeah are we gonna get actual teaser pictures???
Actually it doesn't matter just bring on all of the interactions and promotions :DD
Thanks so much for this awesome chapter Dannie, it's really amazing the detail you put into these <333
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