Chapter 32: the girls at the awards show was everything omg lmao
altho its scary to see how they can still get hate for just checking up on their friends for a bit
even if other groups were doing the same
but hints of the new memberrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr
gigi and 4xu comeback at the same time issssssss yikes tho omg
i'm kinda nervous to read about their interactions
i dont think we've seen gigi and the original group actually seeing each other in person since what happened
and with how the members reacted to just her being mentioned during one of their interviews....
also jb purposely searching for jj to catch up with her ayyy
and sehun being alll shy about complimenting venus xD
i wonder whats up with suga and chase again tho....
was starting to miss sophie and btob interactions haha
OOOOH SANGMI got to meet mamamooo!!!! i'm looking forward to 4xu and mamamoo's friendship hehe
congrats to the girls making it as nominations!!
Chapter 31: look who's finally back around to comment lel
i love clara's determination throughout this chapter, it was really nice to read about!
jyp's reactions to her were so amusing too haha
and chase's lil quip at the end of the chapter xD
everyone coming over to spazz over the maknae was adorable too haha
nice to see the girls making friends in the idol world and interacting with em hehe
per usual, i'd love to seeing them interact more often, and maybe make even more idol friends
and ofc, i love the interactions btween sehun and venus!!
call me biased haha
but they're so open to each other it seems like
i really like how they feel ok telling each other their inner thoughts and feelings!
and ofc kaistal makes it all the better
altho the two have broken up in rl, i will still go down w this ship lmao
I love the new chapters to be honest and I can only say welcome to the new girl so WELCOME SOMINNIE!!! Anyway I love how the girls acted with Gigi and how pissed naeun was surprising some of the girls a bit as they knew Naeun was friends with her. And I mean chaos at the award ceremonies I love it. I just wish there is a chapter or two with the girls love interests and maybe, because naeun is my character, focus a bit more on myungsoo and hers relationship with how they hurt each other and the girls helping a crying naeun with somin surprised over it or something but also like show me some love to the other loveliness I'm dying for love
AaaaaaWWWWwwWwwWwW Yeah --
I'm sorry I didn't turn in my app in time, my shifts at work have been messed with and I'm trying to figure out how to balance everything orz
So yeah, to the chapters~
Variety 04: IDK if I commented or not, but omg this is so cute -- I honestly ship DoubleJB more than Hyunsik and JJ X'D ;; they're just so naturally playful and competitive, it makes for a fun relationship I think ~ But I love the way you used an actual episode of the Real GOT7 for this! :D Also, YES JJ GET REVENGE FOR CHASE LMAO Bambam is such a trouble maker he deserves it --- all in all, it's super cute, and I hope that comments don't get to JJ like it did to Tina :(((
Music Show 02: It's soooooo cute omg???? Tina doing one last performance and all of 4xU there -- i'm in tears leave me TT^TT Then Clara's interest in the show outside of 4xU -- I can be both sides, but I'm glad Clara went with her gut and participated. The girls do tend to baby her and she gets enough of that from her brother, hm? alSO VENUS AND SEHUN I ship it so hard omg, they're so cute and sarcastic together, also his shaggy hair recently is like A+ fam yesssssssss AND THEN THEY GO ALL OUT AND MAKE A VIEWING PARTY OMG OMG OMG That's so cute?!??! I love that you used Sohee as Clara's persona for KPOPSTAR -- they def look like Jeonghan and Sohee was meant to be apart of a group before this. c: Good job of making everything work together !!
Awards 01: YES AWARDS SEASON, I'M SO HAPPY FOR THIS. That's so cute, but it's sad that Clara won't be able to participate :c YOU INCLUDING THEIR STYLING I'M SO HAPPY. Fashion is the best, tbh, and I'm laughing -- Chase would def hate the puffy princess gowns, despite how pretty they look xD Jinsol coming back and being cute aaaaah too cute!!! Also LMAO at the awards show -- ofc these girls would be bouncing around!! Esp Chase omg -- she's like "why would i??? stay with these girls??? i live with them???" ahahahaha brb crying over all the interactions . you write them so naturally, I'm honestly surprised these girls don't exist irl!!!
awards 02: OMG SBS WITH THEM PERFORMING AND GIGI -- 's about to hAPPEN??? I'm so happy you made Tina's departure the focus of Chase's and Yoongi's struggle vs. Chase and Lay's coming together, it really fits with how you write!!! cLARA SLAYING OFC -- Sohee's such a good match for her, she's well rounded and so is Clara from what I've read -- is Clara going to continue under her stagename or go under Jinsol when she's done???? :'O oH GIGI'S HERE AND SANGMI ABOUT TO BEAT HER I'M HERE FOR IT --- 23 is a bop omg but gigi singing it??? it just kinda rubs salt into the wound omg -- and then the sUSPENSE WITH THE NEW MEMBER (though i read it now rip) omg hyunsik and jj is literally a winter kdrama moment aaaaaaah that's so cute?!?? ROOKIE QUEENS, ROOKIE QUEENS, ROOKIE QUEENS!!!
Reveal 05: FAYZAAAAA!! I haven't read her app but she seems so cute -- her quiet nature and easily distracted ness aaaaah no wonder su-chin is happy lololol, one less sophie and chase to worry about xD her answers were really unique, actually, she loves hip hop to dance and be apart of as a group but personally she loves classical??? (i lied i read her app a little lmao) aLNJEWSUIFJKD DO KARD SONGS I'M BEGGING PLS a co-ed group with kard songs would be absolutely wild omg omg omg aND SOMIN/FAYZA BEING SO HONEST ABOUT HERSELF LIKE YOU GO GIRL OMG
ohhhh we get kinda serious -- you really write the reaction to venus and her sister's passing so well: the shock, the "what ifs" ... aaaaah, i'd love to see it work out between venus and fayza but with how long it took naeun and sangmi to recouncile.... y i k e s
as always, you never fail to impress me with your writing skills! congrats on re-entering uni in feb, i hope you do well and still find time to update us with your writing and these fics ^^
Chapter 34: Oh my goodness I saw this when I woke up and I saw Euijin and Lex and I simply screamed! I was so worried that Somin wouldn't be chosen because there were some amazing apps, but thank you so so much for choosing her after all <3 You made me so happy!
You really do portray her shyness and not being easy with words well! I also really love how you portray her boys Lex and Euijin.
Wow... The tw part about venus' sister got me though... You've written that one out so well. I can understand Venus, but she should really give Somin a chance. Not because she's my character but because she's a good person, feels bad about it herself and did nothing wrong. I'm glad they are going to talk
I'm so excited for MAMA though! I can't wait to see what's going to happen! Thank you again!
Chapter 33: I don't think I've told you this, but I really like how you cycle through time in your chapters. You've got this really organic way of little skips of time and you're not afraid to show short burts and scenes and that's something I struggle with myself so A+++ good ! And I always love the interactions between each other and other idols, you're so good at dialogue and interactions, teach me senpai!
Sophie noticing that something is off with Chase makes me ;A; THEIR FRIENDSHIP. And aaaw Tina is back for a tiny bit! It's really sweet to include her in this segment and still show that she cares about the group and Jinsol despite being outies. And aaaaw look at the baby performing and gaining confidence in her skill!!
EEEY GAYO. Chase OMG now is not the time for shade hanini! NAEUN OH MY GOD WHAT IS THIS SAVAGERY. I'm so proud I could cry! 'You can't hit her you'll get in trouble' omg Sangmi! I love it when her own savagery comes out and man the tension here is palpable. Oh man the performance was so cute! And then Gigi of course. Man 23 is such an amazing song and IU is such an amazing performer, but it does get a more sinister twist with GiGi at the helm. I can just imagine the amounts of 4xU reaction fancams for that performance despite the fact that the official cameras skillfully avoided them. That's rough man. Sophie and Chase!! Of course they have soju under their bed oh my god little s. But yeesss Chase open up to auntie Sophie!
Aaand here we go with the Swan Princess, I love how you mention each of the hopefuls in-universe as well with a little bit about why they were of interest to the company and how the girls think about them. Aaaah keeping us in suspense!
JJ and Hyunsik are so cute omg, of course the idiot makes the rehearsal that much more fun. He's always had a good balance of professional and professional loon <3 I swear I could hear three different kdrama OSTs playing at once as she warmed his hands omg. ADORABLE. 'Thankfor caring, Soojin' AAAAND that's when my heart melted. Oh my god I'm such TRASH for cute romance like this ;A; THAT WAS SO CUTE.
BACK to intoxicated SPILLAGE. OH NO CHASE HANINI. I WAS NOT EXPECTING THAT. And of course Sophie is like ???HOWDEAL and at the same time takes no prisoners oh my god my child. 'Oh my god I swear if you're about to tell me Mark or Peniel is about to come into the story'. THAT'S MY GIRL. But maaaan that's such a drama mess, I feel bad for Chase but also giiiirl. Love yourself xD But also yeeeesss Sophie shaming! And more Chase shaming cause girl, appreciate your female friends more I can guarantee you they are amazing. Much well-deserved shaming has been done that night. I approve.
Happy new year!! I hope it will treat you better than last ;A; I'm honestly just really content with all the chapters you've given us so far! I'm such a er for cute romance and you write it so well, but I also love the plot moving forward and the character development and everything. So, really, just keep doing what you're doing! (Insert Luna here)
Chapter 32: Oh. My. Goodness. I literally shrieked when I saw this update. This story is always so nice to read! I really liked the girls and their roaming around to meet others. It's something I would totally do as well! I am also very excited for the new member. Fingers crossed for Fayza hehe.
Btw if you didn't know, her groupmates in forti are doing quite well on The Unit. Euijin rose from #18 to #4 in two weeks and Lex was miraculously saved at the bottom and is calmly chilling there
Chapter 5: Omg, omg thank you so much for the review! I know you've been quite busy so don't worry about it!
Also, you're right! I did use Jing Tian as my face claim for my Cinderella app! I just think that she's so pretty and her personal style fit what I was looking for in my character!
Anyway, I'm glad you liked Tian and I hope you're doing well! Do you have any plans for Christmas?
Chapter 30: this halloween chapter was so cute haha
i feel like i've watched the video before but i can't remember for usre
either way, reading about it again makes me laugh
and jb and jj def seem cute together!
i wonder when they got so comfy around each other hmm
my bad memory strikes again hahahaah
alsooooo clara in a survival show omg
i dont wanna be harsh but like i agree with the netizen who said clara is like a 'lead'
only bc i feel like i haven't seen too much of clara yet but everytime, she's being babied
or really shy
if she is joining, i wonder whats gunna happen to 4xu tho
and hope the show wouldn't tear clara apart
Chapter 27: i really like how u talked about the girls and their passion for the songs
and i really enjoyed reading about how much they enjoy producing their works and their sort love for music
also amber is hilarious lol
ofc exo won tho xD
they had jaesuk with em
ch 27:
I FEEEEEL SO ANGRY FOR TINA OMG
ASKJDAKJSDNAS GIGI U ING RAT UGHHH
i felt so much frustration reading the gigi pulled
and i felt a chill when gigi took a pic of baekhyun and tina in the backdrop "accidentally"
makes me wonder how much more idols actually fell victim to camera angles and stuff
i wanted to like gigi, esp since she hasn't showed up in a while
and she seemed nice when she was hanging with naeun
and her genuinely caring and worrying for naeun
but shiittttttttt
idk how naeun must've felt about this
and i'm almost scared to see their interactions the next time they meet
i really hope naeun wouldn't just wave it off after gigi lying a bit?
but i also don't want naeun to lose, what seems to me, her bestest friend
BUT OMG DID GIGI JUST POST A PIC ON THE SAME DAY AS TINA'S DEPARTURE?
BISHHHHHHHHHH
ch 28:
:(
it's official
and ooooh fans starting to pick up on this
i hope the truth gets revealed
and gigi drops like the mothering ball on christmas
I'd like to formally apologize for my lack of updates/commenting, real life (aka my job) has been consuming my liiiife.
Moving on, okay, case in point: GiGi can fall off a cliff and gtfo of the girl's lives like woooow. Honestly, the way you wrote this was really intense, I found myself holding my breath at times I didn't realize I was haha! Just the steady buildup of small scandals over the months and hate comments ulkjbsfd poor thing ;u; the fact that all the girls were so affected by it too just shows how close they are!!!
I just have a lot of feelings and attachments about these girls okay??? okay.
NEXT. HALLOWEEN.
I think any episode that has the group (specifically the boy groups lol) screaming in terror makes me laugh, so this was great lmao. JJ is perfect for this part, Chase would be laughing too hard and give it away tbh lolol. I love that she did get the ones she really wanted to, though! slibhregf dispaTCH AND FANS STOOOOP then again I read into those things but realize I'm like Chase... and do that to pretty much everyone oop s.
Jinsol/Clara is being apart of KPOP Star???? I watched the show and was so sad when Shannon didn't win -- she improved so much and I love her voice, but the boys were super cute so I can see how they won too ;;;;
LAST/MOST RECENT CHAPTER.
BRB SOBBING OVER THE GIRLS BC THEY LOVE EACH OTHER SO MUCH. I'm almost sad they didn't do like, Dream Candy or For You, but Into the New World kinda describes the situation perfectly too so I see what you're doing there. So, is the younger girl's subunit going to happen before the full group??? I'm curious because of the new plotline :'O ((which btw i have a v gay app for you but you have so many good ones already i'm--))
I'm actually glad you did a Clara-centric character??? She's so pure and small and seems to be a very support-ish character rn, so to see her want to grow and mature is like, the best thing I could ever see. I'm sad that the older girls don't see it that way though... well Naeun!! I was hoping that she'd get some good screen time -- it seems she's always in a pickle and it's nice to see her interacting with the group more ^^
uhm, Sehun and Venus are precious too, and I would never waste food -- especially when it's free lmao.
Me screaming about the girls throwing a viewing party for Clara/Jinsol, be still my emotional heart. I love the small details you put in here -- who shows up for who (esp Yoongi making a beeline for Chase like -- is it his anxiety about people??? is it his crush showing??? who knows it's min yoongi lmao) and the sheer awe of admiration and proudness from the girls for little Jinsol makes me happy. She's sooo talented and deserves to do well!!
I'm honestly so excited for the next few chapters -- awards season??? swan princess reveal??? D-d-d-ddRAMAAAA ((u know how i love the fighting))
As for suggestions, I'd love seeing the girls at the actual shows -- MAMA specifically. Another suggestion would be the girls meeting with the potential trainees??? To get a feel for who each girl is and how'd they interact with the group??? who knows maybe we'll all love one and be like like yES THIS ONE IS THE CHOSEN ONE lol Also, I hope Jinsol is able to come along and participate -- will we see more of her or just specific episodes you find important?
I hope in the new year there's more experimentation with the girl's sound. collaborations, solos (maybe, it might be too early??), acting projects (jj jj jj jj pls, the trot drama eunji was in still remains forever one of my faves even tho I can't remember the name eerk), and love interest/rivalries to be born or developed further!! :'O
anyways yeah I'm rambling -- I'm glad you're doing alright, and I swear I'll try and be better about commenting, I just get so tired after work I'm TT^TT ;;
Chapter 31: Clara deserves all the love she can get and I only hope Tina the best I was int utterly shock when Gigi pulled that ing trick and I'm sure hers and naeuns friend ship will be broken a bit.
All of the girls interactions is just adorable I love it.. remember the first move with minions where the moon was stolen? The scene where the little girl get her unicorn... ITS SO FLUFFY!!!
Chapter 31: Oh oh oh this is so beautiful T^T I really loved this chapter! When Fayza won't be chosen, I would be really disappointed because I'm really invested into this story already
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