Chapter 21: first 360, now weekly idol, yaaas!!
personally, i enjoy weekly idol more than 360 since its more active lmao so i def enjoyed this chapter!
the message by the last fan was so heartwarming!
seriously jj is like the complete package omg
not only is she the triple threat, she also acts, composes
her hardworking nature is very admirable haha
even when she made the group practice random dance play xD
props to sophia for being able to eat prettily lmao
i manage to drop sauce on my everytime i eat smh lmao
haniiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii
i love all the interactions 4xu had w her omg
of course heechul and defconn were still hilarious
thanks for all the updates!
i'm looking forward to reading about idyll's debut and the younger ones being able to take a break!
Chapter 20: sorry for the late comment but here it is!
the girls were so cute!
and i just realized the pic of bomi at the top was to represent xingyi haha
gigi though damnn
and fans are seriously way too observant wow. so intuitive. o.o
they even caught sangmi's change in attitude bc of gigi
i feel like the show's staff was also in the wrong tho
didn't they know about gigi and the girls' past?
clara is so shy and cute omg, she's adorable haha
poor chase even tho i found it amusing lmao
i know how she feels haha
yixing!! :D
the girls really seem to get along so well and it's nice to read about
since i'm pretty sure there are groups out there who aren't close w each other behind the screens everything
it was also interesting to read about naeun's feelings about gigi. i'm glad she realizes her friend was in the wrong
i adore all the suchin x 4xu interactions haha
i think she's my fave character xD
Chapter 21: Woaaaah this chapter was such a pleasant surprise omg. It was suuuuch a cute read! I absolutely adores it. The random play dance was so funny and the heart rate thing omg xachwi4hf Sophie there goes you image xD it was was not get to know more about the members through the profile section too and omg you used Sophie's love for rugby! You are the best honestly.
Aaah I'm sorry I can't comment very well I'm in a hurry but that was absolutely amazing and I'm ecstatic whenever I see a faerietale update honestly. I really look forward to whatever you throw at us next and thank you for cotnuously putting in the effort to update this ♡♡♡♡♡
Chapter 20: Ugh, you came out with another chapter, and a variety show one at that! I'm always so excited when I see that you've updated!
Okay, I love how cute everyone is and how the other idols treat the group quite gently, making sure that everyone gets screen time. Oh my god, I can't believe you included a video message from JB to JJ! I wasn't expecting you to start incorporating the changes that I'd made to my app for at least a couple chapters so I was definitely squealing when he made that unexpected appearance! I wonder who will win JJ's heart...
In regards to a solo debut... I think that JJ would sing a song in English to reach out to international fans! I would probably pick "Boarders" by Amber because JJ would've struggled a lot with her self-image while becoming an idol and the fact that she's also from another country (even though she's still Korean) would've made her feel isolated at times.
I really loved reading about the games that the girls played. The hashtag game was a pretty cool idea and definitely helps in getting to know the characters more! I didn't read everyone's apps because I wanted to learn about the girls as if I were a real fan of 4xU and you're doing a really good job of it! My favourite game was definitely the one with the lie detector and Chase got all flustered and it was just so funny omg I'm lucky I was home alone when I read that part because I could totally just imagine it.
That was TOTALLY unexpected that GiGi would make a video that would be aired on the show. I mean, I get that she's friends with Naeun, but... I feel bad for Naeun because she probably feels like, at times, she's choosing GiGi over the other girls that GiGi hurt with her leaving. That was an interesting twist though!
I actually have a question about the official fan names of 4xU's fans! We put them in for our passwords with what we think the fan colour could be. Will it be revealed soon? I'm super excited to find out what you've chosen!
Chapter 20: Omg another update! I always get super excited at Faerietale updates ;A; Okay but that gif though I died a little omg. That's beautiful xD And when Twins came on and Leeteuk was just like NOPE. Omg I forget how young Clara is sometimes. She's such a smol <3
Oooh more interaction with idols! That was a cute bit with JJ and JB, so many J's xD Oooh I didn't know Chase composed on the RnB and Hip Hop side, that's really cool! Omg Chase and "I didn't know we were friends!" xD Yaass Yoon Mirae though! Chase has good taste. And everyone's panic when Song Joongki came on screen xD They're all traaash. Oooooh grab the popcorn everyone it's Gigi! Oh man that sure was awkward. "Although it didn't work out the first time" that's putting things mildly, honestly I have to say she has stones even making this video.
Aaah the hashtag game is really cute too, and a good way to get to know them all a bit better! I like all the references to how long these girls have known each other, at least the original ones. It really shows in their ease with each other. You were really clever in picking the hashtags too, it can't have been easy to come up with all of them!
I feel like I learned so much more about them all this chapter. I didn't read the other apps because I want to be surprised through the story, so I really feel like I've got a much better grasp on who they all are now. You did such a good job this chapter omg I love it so far. Oh man of course EXO-L's would get their twisted over a declaration of admiration, but Venus really handled it very well. Also I had to laugh at Chase freaking out about the mere suggestion of dating Bambam, that's the right repsone girl he's tiny xD Honestly this game is rather cruel but it's certainly fun to read about, poor Chase though under fire for flirtation.
Chapter 20: I'm happy to read another awesome and perfect chapter.. all the girls was so amazing on the show but I got really surprised over Gigi's video for naeun.. I mean who wouldn't especially by knowing the story of the girls
Chapter 18: I'm so behind on commenting. I have to blame school also. On another note this is such a well written chapter. The whole story is well written to be honest. You clearly put a lot of time and effort into it. I love how all of the characters always get to be the focus for at least a little time. It's well balanced especially since there are so many main characters. They're all so cute together. I especially like their relationships with the other idols. Amber and Sungjae were some of my favorites. They make the story so cute. Also I hope you're having a good week.
Chapter 18: First of all, I'm so sorry that I haven't been commenting - school has been killer ㅠㅠ
Anyway, THIS CHAPTER & THE LAST WAS SO ADORABLE! I loved how everyone had a special person they got to spend their (re-)debut with!
I absolutely love all the characters - your writing gives them all life that makes people want to read more! I was so happy that JJ invited Venus out with her & then she got to meet Amber & now they've got a cute friendship going on!
*cries* I love BtoB SO much. Sungjae is such a little omg. But I'm almost wishing that I'd chose Hyunsik as my character's love interest now ㅠㅠ
LOL everyone's reaction to the couple is GOLD. I would definitely react the same way as Venus. I love the teasing and little fights that the girls have in the dorms - it shows that they're really close! "NAEUN, HOLD HER, SHE DRANK ALL OF THE ORANGE JUICE TO SPITE ME." was definitely my favourite part! Thanks again for a great chapter!
Chapter 18: UHM I WAKE UP AND THIS FIC WAS UPDATED BAE YOU LOVE ME, DON'T YOU? Okay so first of all I just LOVE long, detailed chapters about family and friends and uronkfjlslnjkgtdf yes please --
I LOVE CHABTS INTERACTIONS, I'M SUCH TRASH. Including her affection for the boys and especially Yoongi was just <3333
I really like that we got everyone individually and brought everyone together with Tina and N (wHO ARE TOO CUTE) also is it sad that I'm also totally that person who would drink out of the carton too. All in all, I'm super excited about everything hehehe so please, keep it up!!! (Lowkey wanting to see WEEKLY IDOL and dancing the 2x speed dance heehehe)
Chapter 18: OMG THIS WAS SO ADORABLE. Okay so I pretend to be a super cool human being but I have NO COOL and this fluffy love interest and family and friendship stuff just MELTS ME OMG I AM A PUDDLE. Thank you so much for this adorable fluffy chapter of happiness I needed this okay. I'm just- I'm not okay. I AM NOT OKAY. SAVE ME.
Okay so first of all the Sophie and Sungjae stuff was perfect he is such a and she is so weak omg. And I feel you about free food girl free food is amazing. And the cake and the BtoB guys and just- it killed me okay. You are accessory to murder- or suicide I'm not entirely sure. But accessory you are, my friend, accessory you are.
And then the N and Tina stuff was absolutely adorable too so much just sweet domestic fluff I can't handle it. SO MUCH FLUFF. OKAY BUT LOOK WHAT YOUR DOING TO ME. I DON'T NORMALLY ABUSE CAP LIKE THIS. And Naeun with the SHINee bros was cute too- and of course a mention of Gyuri which still fills me with foreboding. Ah bus is coming and I have to send this before the wifi is gone (no wifi at my no place yet)
I LOVE EVERYTHING AND EVERYONE IT WAS SUPER CUTE OMG THANK YOU FOR THIS BLESSING OF A CHAPTER!!
Chapter 16: Oh man I'm sorry I missed the last chapter! This whole showcase was just so nice, you have such a vivid way of writing, it was easy to picture all of it. They did so well even with all the nerves, and I love how you describe the performances in italics too to keep that vivid feel alive. You're such a good writer omg.
I honestly love all the girls, and usually it's rare for me to get invested in all of them right away so you're really doing good xD They're all so human as they push through this even through the nerves of some of them xD You've got Sophie down absolutely perfectly, it's suuuch a delight to read her voice here. And omg the thing with everyone's famous relatives and friends was soooo sweet! I loved that so much that was such a sweet and wonderful surprise, and of course every mention of Sungjae had me cracking up xD "I don't know your dances, I barely know MINE!" SO PERFECT I laughed so much omg xD
And Tina cleverly not talking about her boyfriend xD Props to Chase for not bursting out laughing then and there. And Clara is adorable I can't handle it! I just love all of them honestly they're all so great. And it was sweet of you to include Yoonji too! Honestly this showcase was such a fantastic read, you put so much effort into this and it shows. I always look forward to this fic updating and I can't wait to find out what happens next :D
Chapter 15: glad to see you're back!!!
and no need for the apology, real life is always gunna be more important than aff ^^
btw, just wanted to tell u that venus's chinese name would be 陳星怡
i really like how you described the way the performance was !!! usually authors just throw in an video and call it a day haha
them mcs tho, were they previous applicants? just wondering haha since i thought it'd be a "real" person
clara is so such a shy little thing, it's so cute haha
my god tho, some of the questions that the mc ask about
like boys and stuff, is definitely new
especially for a new group
i love how clara used yaja time to tell the members to do chores LOOL
"WHO'S BABY R U?!" OMGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG
LMAOOOOOOOOOO
i love that 4xu and vixx are good friends! i'm excited to see them interact hehe
thanks for the update, i'm looking forward to the next one ^^
and i would never abandon this story!
Chapter 14: I'm glad that you split the single night into two parts so that you were able to go more in-depth with each of the characters! I think that it's really cool that you included the fears & dreams of the 3 new members! It shows that they're comfortable enough around each other but not so much so that they would know everything about one another. I feel bad for Clara though - she still stutters in front of the new members. Poor baby ㅠㅠ I also noticed that the 3 newest members all have very different personalities so I'm glad that they can bond over their newness to the group!
Man, I read most of the apps of the people who submitted 1 but I really like how well you bring out the character's backstories so that reading their apps isn't necessary!
"Leader"? So then, JJ is the leader of the 3 new members? Will she be the helper-leader/sub-leader of the group as a whole so that Sang Mi doesn't have to bear it alone? I mean, that could've been 1 of the reasons that GiGi left the group? Maybe she felt under-appreciated or something? Or she was stressed being the leader of so many people?
Bruh. You've already written so much in comparison to most of the people in the applyfic community... Like, lots of people don't write ANYTHING once the deadline passes... So it definitely doesn't matter whether you update every couple of weeks or every couple of months - you're doing great & for this, I'd say "quality over quickness".
Hm... for the showcase (SO EXCITED), I'm not sure what I'd like to see (since I haven't watched any showcases before) but I'm definitely down for variety shows!!! Running Man, Law of the Jungle, Hello Baby, We Got Married (global?), The Strongest Group, Happy Camp, Weekly Idol, ASC, Dream Team, "4xU Diary" (MBC program), The Show, Kiss The Radio, Shim Shim Ta Pa... um... I can't remember the names of lots of them but DEFINITELY VARIETY SHOWS.
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