I need help really bad I’m trying to write a story about immortals

So I need help really bad like anyone who is a immortal fanfiction writer I need your help because I’m trying to make the story really realistic and I am basically doing math with 12,000+ any age and it’s like really hard I’m trying to separate ages to 1990 to 1994. I’m basically asking can someone give me some tips on how to make the story really realistic
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mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Haha, that's fine by me. =)
Still_my_heart_24
2 years ago
@mstyper Maybe we should take this conversation into the dms because i have just spoiled a hella lot of things
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Still_my_heart_24
2 years ago
@mstyper Nooo don't read this i need it to be a secret lol but yeah if you reading this you should really check out my story
mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Ahahaha, don't worry. Your secret's safe with me (and whoever reads this), and anyone who sees this spoiler and is interested may anticipate your story. =)
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mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Ooh, "hybrid"? That'll definitely perk your readers' interests, and especially since the characters are enslaved by different groups (so, I'm assuming there will be some future clashing or collaborating, haha). =) That's a great strategy you have there--not spoiling but leaving hints, haha.
Still_my_heart_24
2 years ago
@mstyper Yeah it is very interesting and very challenging for me to write because i have been wanting someone to write something with all of them in one story but so far no one has oh and i forgot to say it's about 3 hybrid siblings are separated and enslaved by different groups. Don't tell anyone i told this it's a very big spoiler. You could say I'm more of a hush hush type of write that does not spoil anything. But i do leave hints here and there for my readers
mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Oh, that's interesting to know. Seems that you're writing a very challenging story. Just be cautious and make sure to tag your story appropriately for readers on here since some people may be sensitive. Not just that, correctly tagging your stories can help readers find your stories if they search up those tags. =)
Still_my_heart_24
2 years ago
@mstyper Thanks again but I know that the story i want to write hadn't been written before so it will be something new for the community on the app. And also new for me it will be a mixture of supernatural, , mafia, drugs, and abuse all in one story so this will be fun.
mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Oh, sure! My PM's always open, but I can't guarantee that I can be as helpful as most other authors on here, haha. But I'm always down for a chat, and I forgot to say this, but thanks for the friend request! The subject of immortality's rarely done on here (unless the story's about vampires), so good luck! And most importantly, always enjoy what you write. =)
Still_my_heart_24
2 years ago
@mstyper I'll be sure to message you if i have any more questions
mstyper
2 years ago
@Still_my_heart_24 Aww, glad to know that it may have helped, and you're very welcome. =)
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mstyper
2 years ago
Sorry for double-posting. I've forgotten to uncheck the box below, so I've posted my comment without actually completing it. But anyway, I hope those questions were somewhat helpful. If not, I do apologize. Good luck with your writing, and have!
mstyper
2 years ago
I haven't written immortal fanfictions, but fantasy/supernatural genres are of my tastes, so I'm not sure if what I'm going to write will be helpful, so I apologize in advance. In all story-writing, you must always decide on the world/setting and its "laws." Since immortality's involved, obviously, that means there are some fantasy/supernatural elements, so decide on what kinds of "laws" will be in place. For example, take these questions into considerations, and your answers should help assist with your world-building, and sometimes, it can even help with strengthening a plot: which characters will be immortal? Why are they immortal? Are there more of them or less of them? Are they deemed holy or evil? Other than being immortal, what other prominent qualities do you want them to have? How human (or humane) are they? What problems will being immortal arise? Is there a way to "end" immortaility? How does your immortal characters adapt to the change in time? Is the story set in modern time or in the past?