Seola as your loving & strict girlfriend

Hello Guys.. I'm new author this is my second story. I hope my story is intersting for you to read. Please forgive me if there are words that are not suitable or wrong, because english is not my first language.. Hehehe.. And guys i appreciate if you can help me with criticism and suggestions that can help me even better in continuing this story. And I also apologize if i taking a long time to continue this story. I hope you will continue to wait to read the rest of this story.

a memory of a car trip.

A blinding white light hits my eyes and I blink my eyes to get used to the white surroundings. I regain my sight and I see a man that looks like he's in his 60s. "Hello Qian" He says. I stare at him in curiosity. "You might be wondering who I am" He said. "Well I'm God" He said and I just stare at him. "I-Uh nice to meet you, i guess.." I replied. "I am very sorry Qian" God said to me. "Huh?" I asked confused. "I may have landed a lightn