I'm a big fan.  I also like to write. My first attempt. Feel free to give suggestion and feedback. I'm not from Thailand so I'll just try to mention generic places, you guys can imagine as you like it.   

Pie has always been negative about transferring to another school. In her first year, she was in a simple environment with simple people and simple life style; not until her parents decided to moved in to a town 60 miles away from the city. She had to adjust herself to the new town. It's quiet, everything seems to be not-so-normal, and the people seems to know each