Narrative Writting Class Assignment.

Zitlaly Lopez

Delta

Mr.Bramwell

 

  I could feel the lump in my throat, blocking my voice from being heard. My eyes were glossy, and my hands fumbling. I wanted to run away, to close my eyes, and scream out in frustration. Why couldn't I just ask the question? Why is it so hard for me to even breath?

 

  I looked into his brown eyes, the confusion and anxiety wondering in them. I looked back down at the galaxy themed blanket, hoping this conversation would just fade away and we'd talk about something else. But, I knew I had to ask the question, I knew I had to be told the reason. So, I asked the question.

 

  "W-Why did you do it? Why did you leave us?" My voice was broken and I was stuttering, blinking the hot tears away. My heart was pounding and teeth clenched, I felt as if another second would go by, I'd blow up like a bomb.

 

  He hugged me, sighing loudly and speaking softly,"Your mom and I have had many conflicts throughout the years. We married young, not living life to the fullest. It was hard for us, economically and physically, but, after a while we got used to it." I could hear his voice shaking, as if he'd cry as loud as I wanted to. "After a couple years I didn't know what I was doing. So, I got with her. I wasn't thinking about the consequences it would bring me, I just wasn't thinking."

 

  I held so many words back, letting the tears slip from my eyes and fall to the blanket. My heart hurt. I wasn't brave enough to ask more questions, I knew that even if I did he wouldn't be able to move on and tell me as well.

 

 I thought about how unfair it was, why couldn't I have the perfect family like my other friends? I felt like the weird kid, the one who didn't fit in because they didn't have what everyone else had. I remember seeing my mother cry everyday, 

 

This is what I have so far ;A;  Yeah... it's gonna be about my parents divorce and all that. I'm sitting in a classroom, reviewing it over and over, but,I don't know. I showed a couple of my friends and they told me they wanted to cry by reading it... so yeah hehe

 

Tell me what you think of it, please? Just that cuz I have nothing else. I'm pretty shure I'll post it onto here once I'm done with it ;)

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magicalkpop #1
It's good don't worry! I feel sad now!!
grazingme #2
I can feel your pain. It must be hard having a divorced parents ;; but as I always say to my friends who are experiencing parents-divorcing problems, at least you still have your parents by your side. They may not be together, may not get along but at least you still have them; one way or another. It's better than having to grow up without actually 'having' a dad cause he died few weeks before I was born.
You are a very talented writer and weird is good. Tbh I like weird, it's different and different js always interesting hence, if you deem yourself weird, then you are interesting, unique not typical and you are wonderful. Love yourself and don't let others define who and what you are. Not your parents, friends or enemies. Just you :) god, i sound like someone giving counselling xD
AGAIN, YOU ARE AWESOME ;; I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOUR FICS <3
ri0505 #3
you're described your feeling so well. i could felt the pain. ;_; hang in there, dear.. ^^ you know what, happiness always brings the sadness, and so sadness always brings happpiness along. even though the scars might stay, just make sure it doesn't feels hurt anymore. :) good luck with your assignment.
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