My own English version of 'Still You' HOORAY~!

Yup. Just like what's written on the title. I just wrote an English version of EunHae's Still You. I've been wanting to write any translations of my favorite songs and since I've been addicted to this song lately(actually, just earlier this day), I decided to try one, and it turns out nice!(I think?)

So now, will you check it out for me if it's alright? Maybe I can change something?

Here, listen to the song while reading the lyrics I've made ^^
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=V8q4xYY5HOM

As I was walking alone
Then suddenly bumped to you
And just like always you
Look like doing well
Then that familiar perfume
And still I miss you
That smile you gave to me

You then walked to someone else' car
Hug and link arms with him
Then you smile at him

I thought I was okay now
I though I'm fine with my life
But look how wrong I am

I can't believe cuz It's still you, you, you
Whom I haven't forgotten

It's still you, you, you, it's you
Whom I still love

~Am I hurting?
Am i hurting?
I am hurting
I don't know
I don't know

^I still love you
Cuz' there's only you
I still love you

I still look at our photos in my phone then
Press delete and then look down and
Smile sadly, longing for you
I asked myself if should 
I call you or not
Running out of breath
Is all because of you
I calm myself but 
It barely lasts ten minutes
Erasing the scribbles 
You wrote in my heart
I guess I'm not ready yet
Not ready to forget you

Then I become your shadow
Following you everyday
Although I'm now exhausted
If I take a step closer to you
You'll take two steps back from me
I have no choice
But to look at you from afar

*I can't believe that it's still you, you, you
Whom i haven't forgotten
It's still you, you, you, it's you
I'm still the same

Repeat ~

Cause baby I say

Repeat ^

Cause baby I say

Repeat ^

Am I hurting?
I am hurting
I don't know
Why do I feel like this
Did i already forget you?
I don't think so
Cuz' I'm still thinking of you baby

Repeat *

Repeat ~

Cause baby I say

Repeat ^

Cause Baby I say

Repeat ^

I still love you 
There's only you
I will always love you


ANDDDDDD THERE IT IS.

How is it? Are ther some lyrics which out of tune or timing? Just tell me please ~


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Anwys, do you know any video of this GIF? Fancam? I watched a video and then the video of this was shown, and OMG THEY ALMOST KISS LIKE DAPUQ

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luteuk
#1
omy soo like ur version of still you...... i kinda get connected to it ...if you just could add little something at the course where it says ' I still love you
Cuz' there's only you
I still love you———' wish u can add a line to it
kpopluvr27 #2
Awww this is great! ^-^
MyeolchiHyuk #3
Its just right for me.. no worries...

^.^