I start writing things and its perfectly normal and going smoothly then BAMN i go insane.

A good example is when (in chapter 1 of Inter Duo) instead of saying Sungmin had arrived I said , "A rather large pink teddy bear had just decided to join the conversation."

I keep doing it and i've just written an entire chapter (almost) in that frame of mind. It slowly got more insane!

It had a part where Heechul is telling Hyukjae to boil donghae (?!) 

I dont know whether to just leave this as it is or attempt to rewrite the entire thing because i dont know if its funny or just weird.