Translated the prologue of my original story BL novel into english - want to read?

So - I've had this novel lying around, that I started thinking about and twisting in my head, already some 5-6 years ago.
Through the years, the story has changed setting, storyline and a lot of other things. The only thing that would not change,
is the characters, except for some details.
A couple of years ago, while doing my application for Comic Arts School I decided to make my work samle based on this started novel of mine
and at the same time I got inspired, started writng and started doing extensive research for it. (Since it handles a culture and a history I am not completely familiar with.)
A couple of chapters grew to a bunch of them and they have just been there in the PC, forgotten.
But now, when I started writing these fanfics about Phun and Noh and talking about the novel with some guys, I decided to translate a little part and see what people think.

Please, do read it and let me know what you think :)
Should I continue translating?

Ps; Even if the characters are fictional, the background story of Elias' parents is a true one, the story of a woman I know. Only that her is far worse...




It's posted at Movellas.com since it's not a Fanfic nor set in Asia...

EDIT: APPARANTLY THE LINK DOES NOT ALLOW NON MEMBERS TO READ, THE PROLOGUE IS POSTED HERE AT AFF IN MY STORIES.
 

http://www.movellas.com/story/201501270051155986-elias-alizadeh-sixteen-and-a-half

XOXOXO

Bambikill

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