Good or Bad? help!

Hey guys

I have this idea for a story I don't know if I should make it as a one shot or chapters or even write it in the first place and I need your opinion. And if there are any suggestions, they're welcome. :)

Here's the forward:

I'm Penelope and my name means what I inherited from my mom. We're dream weavers. We can read minds and go inside and weave dreams and even thoughts.

My mom always warned me form playing with my ability because it's really dangerous. We can make people successful, suicide, or even give them hope and make them dream again.

My father died when I was three so my mom raised me alone. I don't remember much about my father but I'm sure that he's been a really good husband since my mom loves him that much. He also looks handsome in their wedding photos. I had his hazel eyes and bright smile as my mother always tell me.

I remember my first time discovering my ability. I was only five years old. I made a boy eat mud until his mother came to shout at us and my mom came and took me straight to our house and I told her everything happened. She smiled at me warmly and hugged me and told me everything she knows. It was a lot for a five year-old girl but I got used to it when I got twelve.

I'm now 18 and my mom died four years ago. I live alone after I moved to Seoul to study. I'm living like a normal person, but today, I got a letter that will change my life.

I hope it's not too long because I want the idea to be clear.

Anyways, what do you think?

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