More elaborated new story plots

Yes, so some of you already know that I am planning to make a new story together with kookieholic and I had already posted three story ideas and well, the two of us had a sleepover at my place and guess what we did? Yes, we fangirled over Bangtan and tried to make our plots more interesting at some point. Like the main plot didn't change, okay, who am I kidding? Yes, it did change, especially for the high school idea. So here they are:

 
 
The first idea, the high school!AU, yeah, we played around with that one the most and guess what, turned out that we really can't live without angst, like seriously. The two of us unconsciously drowned in angst yet again and we are in so deep that Adele could be rolling in there. And I've been on 9gag too much lately. 
 
 
So yeah, the first story. As you can see, we still left it as a high school idea with Taehyung as the new student. But that is the only thing we left the same actually. So I have a cousin who has autism and he is so precious but people don't welcome him positively, and that made me think how hard it must be for him in high school. And then we got really inspired to write this about a boy who has a mental disability but wants to live like everyone else, wants to go to school and to smile at others. So everything would start of with Taehyung entering high school, and the students genuinely not caring, just minding their own businesses. Even the Bangtan members wouldn't care, Taehyung would simply be invisible. But then Jungkook would start noticing that the new kid was strange, not normal, and then he would one day say something loudly, and Taehyung would react not like a normal student. Jungkook, being a Kingka and all that, would be highly viewed and then other students would start making fun of Taehyung too, for his behavior, his impaired speech and his repetitive behavior. But the new kid would simply go through everything because at the end of the day he would go back to a loving family. But of course that wouldn't be enough for the students. Jungkook would be joined by other Bangtan members, without any exception, and they would start mocking the new kid, calling him names and making fun of the way he acted and talked. But there would be surprises thrown in because Taehyung wouldn't be the only male with a problem. For now, we thought about two mental problems other Bangtan members could have, but they would be less see-able, like anger management issues, bipolarity, even depression.  
 
 
The second idea, the one about Taehyung and him seeing ghosts since he was little. Well, we thought about making it a bit more twisted and maybe making Taehyung have a disability too, like him not being able to walk actually. And that would be one of the reason's why Jimin would be around him most of the times, in order to help him out and to make sure that he didn't do anything stupid. So how we see it, Taehyung would be a bit out of his mind because the ghost seeing thing damaged him and made him a bit insane, he would act really questionably. And we are actually planning to make him depressed in here, and kind of wicked, like a hero who has to be saved while he saves others? And actually, not all Bangtan members are going to be real people in here, at least one is definitely going to be a ghost in here who will be following Taehyung around all the time. And the ghost will be really psychotic, like murderous, Samara from The Ring murderous. And not all Bangtan members would be nice in here. Some would be really, plain scary, some half half, and some of them nice but still with a bit of quirks. And Taehyung would be reluctant to save others in here, he would run away from his duties but he would still end up saving people by accident, sometimes because of his guilt.
 
 
And the third story, the horror one about the boy school/University that would be haunted. So we played around with this plot the least, basically left it the same as it was before, but decided to change some things and to add up some information. So we thought about making Taehyung into a person who just came out of a rehab after trying to end his life, and failing miserably. Because yes, we kind of thought about playing around with the idea of a depressed Taehyung who will think that the haunting is all in his head and that he was just trying to make everything look dark because he was depressed. He would have a history of seeing his dead younger brother everywhere so he would not believe in ghosts in real life. And at his job, the night shift in the University/boy school, he would think that the haunting is just someone's prank. Until one night a student would be killed, right in front of his eyes by someone that could only be described as a ghost. And there would be Bangtan involved because some of them would be students, some would be teachers/professors and maybe even an outsider, like a person who was obsessed with ghosts and paranormal activity. And in this story Taehyung would slowly go insane while trying to figure out just what exactly was happening and how everything was connected to him and some of the students and teachers/professors who will be Bangtan members. 
 
 
So yeah, I guess these are more elaborated plots, so which one do you like more now? Because we both want to make this story really good. 
 
 

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roxxanne #1
Both are really good! I think you both should work both out though, I can't choose
jellyzelo96 #2
gosh I can't choose!!! It's like something too big that I can't handle it!! BUT OF COURSE I LOVE IT!!! I guess I changed my mind. Well I do like the horror ones but now I'm gonna go for the highschool au. That's so......as you said "DEEP."
Frostbitten201
#3
Omg... I have a relative who has autism as well, and it really hurts when he doesn't play with the other children. He is so precious and beautiful and it's terrible that he can't live his life normally without others judging him... He only talks to us, his close family, but we never know what he's really thinking. I will wholly support your idea and wish the best for your cousin as well TT_TT if only one day the world could accept everyone as who they are.
GoldenLynn
#4
Stupid aff I wasn't even done with my comment! ! So as I was saying the first plot is really really interesting and I am already getting excited by it! I would really enjoy reading a story with such plot!!!! But in the end it's you who have to Decide and I wouldn't actually mind reading either of these stories
GoldenLynn
#5
I really like the first idea!!! Maybe I am being biased because I am not really into fantasy and stuff bit
candyflip #6
All three plots sound really good...but I was DYING over the autism idea...the possibility for angst in that one is SO high...and it reminded me of when I read a story I where Jimin is mute & Yoongi is so mean to him....I was SUFFERING over that story, so I know I'd LOVE it if you wrote Tae with autism...I bet you would make it a beautiful, beautiful story!!! And the fact that it is so close to your heart with your cousin as a reference...I think you could make it really accurate and really help make people aware of how hard it is to be autistic and simultaneously help spread awareness of how to help someone who has it...because it definitely is not easy, and very heartbreaking and frustrating for all involved. Good luck with whatever you pick - I'm sure it will be amazing!!! ;-)
Xoxox389angel
#7
I'd* not if never considered
Xoxox389angel
#8
Honestly, the plots were a little hmmm to me.. Like if never consider reading them like 100% yes this is the story I would jump up to read.. But maybe like maybe one night when I just want to read a fic.. I'm not sure but I was going to be all like "this one" but I thought best to give my honest opinion. I'm not sure but I'm 100% sure that you and kookieholic writing any fic would work out. Like I'm really positive that even though I'm iffy about which plot you pick, I know it'll be a grand story that keeps me up for an update. So I hope this helped? And fighting!